Fascinated By You [series](now F/later 2b M) - (1 Part)

[daystar428]

Hey..i posted this in the Under 18 board..but mayb you'll like it too..so i thought i'd post it here too.

Its gonna be a series about a boy and girl... and they will both end up sneezy in it..so far just the girl

Please Review it if you like it in the end :roll: purty please

Oh yeah... the guy in this chapter says really funny stuff hope you'll like it

always

daystar

Now your feature presentation of Fascinated By You--Chapter 1

~~~~~~~

“Come on!”

This would have to be the first time Aidan had ever been in her house. The relief he felt after asking her to be his girl friend had been immense. It took him three weeks after he had decided he was determined to ask her, to actually ask her out. Boy oh boy did he like her.

He had always watched her from afar, ever since the seventh grade, and here they were finally at the end of their freshmen year in high school, finally a couple after all.

He was still a bit nervous around the edges, he wasn’t used to all this girlfriend stuff, no matter how popular he was.

Rebecca fumbled with her keys in the lock for her house. After coming home on her bus that afternoon to “study together for finals,” they had strolled from her bus stop hand in hand. Of course an excuse was needed…well at least for now.

The handle turned and the brown wooden door swung open.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

“Aidan my parents aren’t going to be home tomorrow afternoon…” she whispered to him. Rebecca’s eyes were facing the floor, she looked slightly nervous. WHAT!!??….

Those words rung through his head, …my parents aren’t going to be home…

Aidan gulped.

Rebecca rubbed her cute lil’ nose and her eyes met his own with a great big smile, “Would you, maybe if you didn’t have anything else planned…I mean… would you like to come over tomorrow?” Her cheeks got all red.

“Oh, of course I would!” Umm…oopps…a bit loud and quick there …stupid! Stupid!

Rebecca giggled at him. “Good.”

Aidan watched her bring her hand back up to her face. She rubbed at her nose again.

It was always so peaceful to eat lunch outside. Especially in the spring, summer, and fall. That made sense, since you can’t really eat outside while it snows. But I think it’s really incredibly special for me. That’s because of Rebecca…

The wind blew and a few strands of hair blew into her face. Aidan just adored her hair. Long and it flowed like waves over the beach sand that was her lightly tanned back. Brown, with these cute gold and red highlights that seemed to come along more in the summer sun. Wow, she was wonderful.

She always wore those amazing shorts, those kind…yah. The ones that are so short you just cant help but notice…I CANT HELP IT!! I’ve always always noticed… not to mention what comes along in those nice shapely shorts. They show other shapely things…but umm… you’re not supposed to look at her there!

But she sure has those wonderful legs, that kind when you know when you touch them…shivers will run throughout your entire being, for me its like that all the time.

Her face, those brown eyes with the tint of green. A dusting…yes, I like that word, a dusting of barely noticeable freckles that cover her face. The kind that you wish you could get a tad bit closer so you can really see them…close to those lips…I’ll bet those are soft…

Enough of that!

But—when those seasons come…I am in heaven.

Rebecca has these tiny hands, and she constantly is bringing them to her face, to her nose…rubbing…

And that’s when the shivers start to come.

Rubbing at her nostrils, rounded and perfectly shaped.

They’d begin to quiver. I’d watch as they began to twitch. She’d flare her nostrils.

By this point, all I’d be able to do is stare, stare with my breath caught in my throat. Should I say something? If I did, would she try to talk? Aidan gulped at the thought.

Rebecca sniffed.

I should.

Now’s my chance after all. I’ve always wanted to. It’s not like I’ve never seen her like this before. Oh, and I am so glad it happens a lot. But never have I been so soo… close.

“Umm…,” Aidan began, I can’t stutter, he thought to himself. “Rebecca, are you alright?” YES! I did it!

“Oh, its just… sniff… I think that it might be my allerehh..sniff..alehh—”

Oh gosh!!

That’s it!…That face…

“ excuse me..its..I—”

Come on…

“One moment… I think..ehh ..ehhh…ehhh.” She’s just so cute…

Mouth at slack, her eyes are fluttering, her nostrils flaring, her breathing hitching… its…heaven.

“Ehh! Eiashoo! Sniff..Eishoo! ehh…ehh…Atichoo!” Each one she brought her tiny hands in to try to cover her adorable face, filled with its sneezy expression.

“Allergies?” I dare to ask and I hope…my voice is steady.

“Yes…sorry bout that, Aidan…sniff.” Her voice is still stuffy.

“You have allergies?” Yeah I know, I am acting stupid…but I want to hear her talk about it so badly… But of course I knew she had allergies, I constantly watched her having troubles with her allergies, loving every second of it. I don’t know why…but every aspect of her fascinates me…especially, the way Rebecca sneezes.

“Oh. I must have forgotten to tell you. Yes, but they are a bit embarrassing.” She said meekly, blushing all the while.

“Then don’t worry, because I haven’t noticed.”

“Real—” She stopped as her breathing began to hitch once more. “Reahhh..ehh …ehh!..i have to sneeze again…”

With that my heart soared!

“Etishooo! ETIshOO! Ehhh…ehhh..Eishooo! ehhh…ehhhh…Ishhooo! Ehh..ehhh..one morehh..more…ehhh—” Her eyes fluttered with allergic tears. “EiIShoooo!”

“Umm..bless you, Rebecca.”

I think… this whole keeping my fascination at bay thing might be a tad bit more difficult than I planned.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

TBC

Remember to review if you liked it ...even a short review

[Dogma]

I liked it alot, interesting angle to write from. really, very nice story

[Bondi]

I liked it, Daystar. It was nice.

[Enkidom]

An excellent story Daystar - I hope you carry on. Your descriptive narrative is very good!

[Guest Shadow]

This is lovely! The narrative from the guy's pov is quite lyrical.

-Shadow

[Guest]

This is great, is there more?