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Hello! I'm finally returning to the threads with a new story... this is just a preview, since I haven't had the time to write more. But I actually formed a plot for this one! Heh... :angry:

Anyway, here are the main characters as of yet:

Yuki ( No relation to Yuki Sohma, sorry n.n;; ): Second year high school student. 5'3'', medium length black hair. Indigo eyes. He's been in love with Hikari since day one, though fails to show any of his feelings out in the open. The story is from his point of view.

Aki: One of Yuki's best friends, and just about the only straight guy at Cho-Ko school for boys. 6'2'', short platinum blond hair. Has been keeping Yuki's love for Hikari a secret for nearly a year.

Hikari: Third year high school student. 5'5'', feminine in appearance. Has long lilac hair and dark blue eyes. Though he tries to keep his feelings for Yuki hidden, he doesn't make good work of it.

I can't draw to save my life, so any fan art would be loved <3

Here goes ^^

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" Morning Kari-san!"

" Etchh-eww!!" The boy snapped forward at the waist. " Kict-choo! Att-chew!

My cheeks heated up in secret attraction, and I heard laughing from my other side. Aki, obviously amused by Hikari's fit, patted his shoulder. "Blesses, mate! Your allergies can't possibly be acting up now. It's the middle of the winter!"

" Haha." Hikari rolled his eyes. Then, he seemed to remember my first greeting. " Oh, Good morning Yuki-kun. Hey man, are you alright? Your cheeks are all red..."

I jumped. " Umm, yes, I'm fine... Kari-san..."

" Ey, you lovebirds. We're gonna be late to school!" Aki slapped us both on the back and laughed heartily. This time, Hikari blushed too.

Trying to ignore Aki's often times one-sided conversations, I began to scan Hikari's features. He looked... well, tired. His nose was a litter pinker, compared to his surrounding pale skin. I wasn't surprised; throughout my longtime friendship and infatuation with Hikari, I had discovered- to my delight- that he was allergic to what seemed like every flower, perfume and form of dust.

While watching, Hikari's nostrils began to quiver. I held my breath as his hitched. " Ehh... heh, heh... oh..." He slipped his hands into his pockets, trying to find something, but his nose had other plans. " Hek-tchh!" He jolted forward with the uncovered sneeze, finally pulling out an already soiled handkerchief and stifling the next two. " Hg'nxt! Hkk-tch... ugh..." He groaned.

" Hey, man, you catching a cold?" Aki asked as he stopped speaking to himself.

" No..." Hikari played with a strand of his long purple hair. " Just a tickle..."

Unconsciously, I reached for his hand, worry in my eyes. " You better be telling the truth, Kari-san... if anything happened to you, I don't know what I'd do!"

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Oh a lovley start! I wish there were more! ...

WRITE MOAR. :shy:

Lol, please continue. It's great so far!

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