ThatSneezyGirl Posted March 3, 2011 Share Posted March 3, 2011 Okay, so this is my first sneeze fic ever so I'm sorry if it's bad, I just gotta keep writing to get better I write stories for another website but they are love stories. If you wanna read em, here's the link http://quizilla.teennick.com/my/stuff also, please tell me what you think because I like getting feedback. It tells me what I need to improve on and what I need to keep doing --------------------------------------------------------It was a typical, rainy day in Atlanta, Georgia. Justin Bieber lay shivering under the covers on his small leather couch in his million-dollar mansion." hetchoo!" Justin grabbed a tissue and blew his nose before throwing the tissue on the floor with the other ones. " How ya feelin?" Molly, his beautiful girlfriend asked." Horrible," Justin responded." I feel... he... like... Hetchoo! I'm gonna die." Molly sat down next to him and handed him a tissue. There wasn't much Molly could do for Justin. It was flu season and the flu had definitely hit him; hard. Molly placed her calm, soothing hand on Justin's head and winced at the radiation coming from his head." Oh my gosh Justin your burning up!" She exclaimed. She went into the bathroom and got a washcloth ran and it under some cold water. Before returning to the living room, she also grabbed a small, digital thermometer. She gently placed the cloth on Justin's burning head. He smiled to show her he appreciated it because he didn't trust his voice enough to say it. Then Molly stuck the thermometer straight into Justin's mouth. She knew he would resist but Justin was too tired to even care. The thermometer beeped and Molly took it out of Justin's mouth to look what it said." 103.4"" This is great. Just... Huhktschoo! great" Justin said. Molly sat down next to Justin and gently stroked his hair to try to sooth him. Justin let out a sigh to try and release some of his frustration but a tickle in his nose quickly stopped that." huh... Huhtchoo!" Justin moaned and fell back on the couch. Molly picked up the washcloth that had fallen off of Justin's head and gently placed it back on his head. Justin's smiled but it quickly faded. His face scrunched up and his eyes fluttered shut." Hehtschh!" Justin sniffed and reached for the tissue box. " I think you need to get some rest." Molly said. Justin reached for another tissue." I can't," Justin said." My head hurts too much." Molly hoisted herself up and wondered into the bathroom again. She opened up the medicine cabinet and shuffled through the various medicines and creams until she found the Tylenol. She opened the bottle and popped out 2 small pills and got a small cup of water. She walked back into the living room to find Justin coughing his brains out."Here's some water. Drink it." she handed the small cup and he drank it swiftly." Now take these," she opened up her hand and Justin stared at the two small capsules in her palm." They'll make your headache go away." He took the capsules and popped them into his mouth and washed them down with what water was left in the cup. He gagged before laying his head on Molly's lap. She softly rubbed his cheek until his eyes finally closed. Molly looked at Justin and smiled. He actually looked peaceful. Molly knew Justin had been suffering all day and she was happy to see him finally relaxed. After about an hour or so, Justin's mom finally came home from the store. That was the main reason Molly was taking care of Justin." Hey guys." Justin's mom said as she walked inside. Molly smiled." Hello." Molly looked down to see if she had woken up Justin and his eyes were fluttering open."What's going on?" Justin asked groggily." Everything's fine." Molly reassured him. Justin's mom went and sat on the armrest besides Justin's head." How ya feelin?"" Horrible..." Justin repsoned. Justin's mom frowned." That's not good." Justin nodded in agreement to that statement." Do you want me to reschedule that interview with Tiger Beat magezine?" Justin's mom asked. Justin sat straight up with a startled and kind of surprised look on his face." Oh crap I totally forgot!" Justin tried to stand up my Molly put her hand on his shoulder to keep him from going anywhere." Justin, your not going anywhere."" But I need to do the interview," Justin protested." It's for my fans."" I think your health is just a little more important." Molly said." I'm fine," Justin reassured her." I promise." Justin's mom sighed." I really think-""I'm fine, really. Just give me a little time to get ready." Justin said. He mustered his strength together and got up out of the spot he had been laying in all day." Justin put his hand on the wall to support himself before letting out two forceful, and loud, sneezed." Huhtchoo! Hutschooo!" He continued down the hall but the need to sneeze wouldn't leave his aching nose. "Huh... Huhtchoo!" He sneezed forcefully to the side of him, almost losing his balance. Moll quickly ran to Justin's side and helped him to his room." Are you sure your feeling well enough to do this?" Molly asked with concern. Justin put his hand on Molly's shoulder." It's fine. We scheduled this interview like a month ago." Molly gave Justin a doubtful look." Alright...," Molly went to Justin's closet." But your gonna wanna bundle up. It's chilly outside. Molly pulled out a light gray scarf out of his closet and put it around his neck. Mollly draped her arms around Justin, acting like a protector and soothing his aching chest. Justin smiled, enjoying every bit of that moment. Link to comment
Sneesee Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 I just went and saw the Justin Bieber movie with my girls, and so I'm kind of a brand-new fan of his! This story is so cute!! Have you seen the video where he sneezes? Because you did a great job re-creating them! Thank you so much for sharing!! Lovely story! Link to comment
ThatSneezyGirl Posted March 25, 2011 Author Share Posted March 25, 2011 " Hutschhhh!"Justin sneezed wearily into his fleece scarf and sniffed loudly. He sighed and wondered into the bathroom to freshen up. He looked at his reflection in the mirror and his eyes widened at the sight. He eyes were red and watery, his nose was red and peeling, and his cheeks had a hot pink tint that glowed from them which made his skin look even more pale. " Hutschooo!"He sighed and splashed some water on his face. He combed his tangled dirty blonde hair and dabbed a it of cologne on. While he studied his sickly looking complection, Molly snuck into the bathroom and slipped a New York baseball cap onto Justin's head. Before Justin could even turn around to catch a glimpse of Molly, she was already heading downstairs. She had always been a little odd but Justin thought it was kinda cute. He continued to anazyled himself in the mirror, mentally complaining about how awful he looked let alone felt. " Come here."Justin turned around and Molly lifted up his hat and stuck a small ice pack under it." It'll help keep your fever down."" Ha... Hahtscheew!" Justin sniffed and blew his nose into a a tissue." Thanks."Molly handed him a tissue and fixed his now crooked hat. After 20 minutes and several more sneeze from Justin, they headed off to the Tiger Beat office in Downtown Atlanta. When they got there, Justin had fallen asleep with his cheek laying on his hand, propped up against the window. Molly gently shook him awake and helped him inside. The interview started off, which Molly thought was a sign that Justin was feeling better; but she was wrong." So what do you want people to get out of this movie?" The interviewer asked, referring to Justin's new movie set to air in 3 weeks." Well I want ... he .... people to," His breathe started to hitch and he tried to hold back the sneeze but was unsuccessful." Hutschhh!"" Bless you." The interviewer said." Hu... Hu... Hutschooo!"" Bless you," The interviewer repeated. " Are you alright?"" Yeah I'm fine," Justin rubbed his sore nose on his long sleeve shirt." Just a little sick."" Should we reschedule this? Because-"" No no I'm fine, I promise. So what were you saying?"Molly stood next to Justin's mom on the other side of the room, both very concerned about Justin's current state. They knew Justin wasn't going to leave during the interview. He loved his fans so much and would do absolutely anything for them. As the interview went on, the need to sneeze still lingered in Justin's nose. He tried to ignore it in hopes that it would leave him alone but it just kept persisting until Justin couldn't hold it in anymore." One sec."Justin cupped his hands over his mouth to catch the oncoming sneezes."Hu... Hustchhh! Hatschooo! Hetschooo!"He pinched his nose shut and was finally able to stifle a sneeze." Hi'ngxxt!"The interviewer looked at him with concerning eyes." Are you sure you're okay?"" I'm fine."But a itch in his nose decided to contradict him." Hastchooo!"Justin sneezed forcefully to the side of him. Justin's mom sighed and finally stepped up to intervene." Alright, I think it would be best if we did this another time."" I think that's a good idea."The interviewer said closing her notebook." But mom-"" Lets go."Justin's mom helped him to his feet and Molly ran to his side like a small puppy." We'll try this another day."The interviewer smiled in agreement and stood up to shake Justin's mom's hand. Justin tried to respond but a coughing fit stopped him. The coughs racked his body and had him bending over, clutching his side. It was a few minutes before he could stifle them long enough to walk outside to the car. On the way home, it seemed like every time Justin took a breath of air, he could feel a tickle somewhere in his nose and it just kept growing and growing until he couldn't hold it in anymore." Huhktschoo! Hehtschoo!" The intensity of the sneezes forced him upward from his laying position. He attempted at blowing his nose into his scarf but he was so congested it wasn't even worth it. The persistent tickle in his nose decided to return; again." Huh... Hutschooo! Hastcheeww!"Justin groaned and leaned head on the back of the seat. He closed his eyes, silently wallowing in his misery. Link to comment
JBieberLove_12 Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 please post more of this story Link to comment
sneasons greetings Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 So cute!I don't even like Justin Bieber but oh my god. So very adorable.More! Link to comment
purpleninja Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 omg I LOVE JB, and your fics are like CRACK to me, legit!! pleaseeeeeeee continue!! Link to comment
ThatSneezyGirl Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 * This was the first story I ever wrote and I totally forgot about it! This is also the first story that I've ever finished posting on here too. Also, I know it's short but I can't think of anything else. Anyway, here it is *Part 3When they returned home, Justin was passed out in the back seat of the car." Justin," Molly said, gently shaking him. She waited for a second but he didn't move. " Justin." She repeated, shaking him with a little more force. Justin’s eyes opened slowly, and immediately his breath hitched, his eyelids fluttered, and his jaw went slack. His nostrils flared and his hitched breathing sharpened. He cupped his hands over his mouth and turned a little to the right, away from her, letting out two wet, congested sneezes" Huhtschieww! Hahtschieww!"" Bless you." Molly said." Hahtschooo!"Justin sneezed again and sniffled wetly. He ran his nose along the back of his handed before coughing into the crook of his arm. He slowly stood up and walked inside. He crawled into his bed and pulled the covers tightly around him. She stood there and listened as the thick, congested coughs rumbled loudly and harshly out of his chest. Molly felt so bad for Justin. He looked absolutely miserable. He was so pale he could blend in with paper. The only coloring in his face was his cheeks that were bright pink, signifying he had a fever. His nose was also bright red and irritated from him sneezing so much. Molly sat down next to him and placed his head on her lap. She gently stroked his head, trying to sooth him. She didn't really know anything else she could do to make him feel better." Sit up." Justin's mom instructed as she sat down next to Molly. Justin struggled to sit up and Molly had to help him a little. His mom poured some NyQuil into the cap and handed it to Justin. He looked at the swishing purple liquid and hesitated for a moment before taking it down. He grabbed a bottle of water off the nightstand that Molly had placed there earlier and washed down the nasty tasting medicine. He coughed a little before snuggling back under the covers." Hahtschiewww!"Justin sneezed, full and uncovered, to the front of him. He shivered and Molly handed him a tissue. He blew his nose before turning to the side." Hehtschiewww!"His body pitched forward as he sneezed into the tissue in his hand. He wiped his nose and threw the used tissue away. As they all sat there in silence, Molly's phone went off. She quickly answered it and walked out of the room. Justin turned over and looked at his mom with bloodshot eyes." I don't feel good." He moaned." I know baby," She said sympathetically. " Don't worry, you'll be okay in a day or two. " He whimpered as his mom pulled the covers over him. She smiled as she saw him finally doze off. Link to comment
purpleninja Posted December 31, 2011 Share Posted December 31, 2011 HOLY FREAKING CRAP!!!! I FREAKING LOVE YOU!!!! you're awesome!!! please post again soon!! Link to comment
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