With you * a Justin Bieber fic*

[ThatSneezyGirl]

In this story Justin isn't famous. Also, please comment and tell me what you think because I don't think I'm that good of a writer and I wanna know what I can improve on

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Justin Bieber stretched his arms over his head. He listened to the soft "Beep! Beep!" of his alarm clock before hitting it to shut it off. Justin swung his feet over the edge of his bed. He stood up and groaned. He went into the hallway and ventured to the bathroom to get ready for school. He didn't really like going to school but he was smart so school came easy to him. The only incentive drawing him to school was his girlfriend Katie who he loved more than anything in the world. He looked at his rather pale completion in the mirror. He rubbed his cheek, examining the rosy red tint that glowed from them. As he studied his reflection, he felt a small tickle in his nose, and he quickly reached for a tissue." Huhtschoo!" He sighed and splashed come water on his face. He combed his hair and dabbed a bit of cologne on and headed downstairs." Hey." Justin's mom greeted him as he walked into the living room. He smiled as he headed towards the door." Aren't you going to have some breakfast?" Justin's mom asked." Nah," Justin responded." I'm not really hungry." Justin's mom looked at him with concern.She examined him from head to toe." Come here, let me feel your head." Justin sighed and did as his mom said. She put her hand on his forehead and from her facial expression, she wasn't happy." You feel warm and look a little pale. Are you feeling okay?"" I'm fine mom." Justin reassured her. He knew she didn't believe him but he walked out the door and walked to the bus stop at the end of his street. As he waited for the bus, a soft breeze made him shiver. It was only the beginning of November, but in Canada, it was still cold. He shivered again and pulled his jacket tighter around his body. He felt a sneeze coming on and cupped his hands over his nose and mouth." Huh... Huhtchoo!" He wiped his running nose on his sleeve. " He.. He... Hektchoo!" He sneezed, full and uncovered to the side of him, trying hard to keep his balance. Finally the bus pulled up and he hopped on. After a couple more sneezes and some teasing from his friends, he arrived at school. While Justin was shuffling through his locker looking for his books, Katie snuck up behind him and covered his eyes with her hands." Guess who." Justin smiled." Hey baby." Justin moved Katie's hand away from his eyes and closed his locker. Justin put his arm around Katie's waist as they walked to homeroom together. Justin tried to enjoy the moment but he could feel a sneeze coming on." Huh... Huhktchoo!" He sneezed into the crook of his arm." Bless you." Katie cooed. Justin smiled as they continued to class but Justin's nose was still irritated." He... Hetschhh!" He muffled a sneeze into his jacket and chill ran up his spine." Bless you." Katie said again. " Aye you okay?" She looked at him with concerning eyes." I'm fine." Justin tried to reassure her but his nose obviously wanted to prove him wrong." Ha... Hatcheww!" Katie stepped away from Justin just in time." Your sick."" Am not." Justin protested. He pulled her close to him. Katie didn't look convinced but Justin ignored it as he cuddled with her. As they entered the classroom, Justin let out another sneeze." Hetschoo!" During the next 2 periods, Justin just seemed to be feeling worse and worse with each passing minute. It was third period that he finally hit the breaking point. While he was busy taking notes on the Civil War, the itch in his nose continued to build with every breathe he took." Huhtschh!" He muffled another sneeze into his jacket. People turned their heads to look at the source of the noise considering it was practically silent . He got a few " Bless you's" from some of his classmates before going back to taking notes. He tried to focus on his work but his nose was keeping him from that." Hi'ngxxt!" He pinched his nose shut to stifle the sneeze. It seemed like that made the itch go away; but he was wrong." He... Hetschoo! Huhschoo! Hatcheww! Huh... Hatschoo!" He was finally about to kind of stifle a sneeze into his hands." Hi'ngxchh!" The teacher looked up from her History book and stared at Justin." Justin, are you okay?" Justin nodded." I'm alright." His breathe bitched and he brought his hands to his face." Huh... Huh... Hutchoo!" The teacher raised her eyebrow." Do you need to go to the nurse?" He looked around and realized that everyone in the class was now staring at him. Katie leaned over and nudged his shoulder." Go, your sick." Justin knew his decision wasn't going to please Katie but he needed all the help he could get in that class considering he had a D. It was the only class he wasn't passing." No it's all good." He could feel Katie's disapproving stare hitting him like a knife. He got up and grabbed a tissue and tried to clear up his now stuffed up nose but had little success. He grabbed a few more tissues before returning to his seat. He again went back to trying to focus on the task in front of him but it was pretty much impossible. He quickly grabbed one of the tissues sitting on the corner of his desk." Hetchsoo!" He.... Hetschoo! Hathceww!" Justin groaned. Now, he basically felt like crap. His nose was stuffed up and sore, his chest hurt from sneezing so much, and he felt like his head was about to explode. He wearily raised his hand." Can I go to the nurse?" The teacher guestered towards to door." Sure."" I'll go with him." Katie chimed in. She popped up from her seat and ran to Justin's side as they walked out into the hallway."Wait Katie-" Katie closed the door before the teacher could even finish her sentence." I told you you were sick." Justin sighed. All he want to do was just go home and crawl under the covers of his nice warm bed. Katie led Justin into the nurses office." What's wrong?" The nurse asked." He doesn't feel good." Karie said answering for Justin. He mentally praised her doing that.." Sit down." The nurse ushered him to a small bed in the corner of the room. He sat down and the nurse shoved a thermometer in his mouth. There was moment of awkward silence while they waited for the thermometer to beep. Finally the nurse took the thermometer out of his mouth and broke the silence." 103.2. Let me go call your parents." The nurse walked out of the room and Justin collapsed on the bed. Katie knew how bad Justin felt and hopped his mom would get there soon to bring him home." You can go back to class." Justin told Katie." No. I'm not leaving until your mom gets here." Katie said. Justin smiled. He liked having a girlfriend who cared so much about him Katie stroked Justin's cheek to try and soothe him. After a little while, Justin's mom arrived to take Justin home." Justin, your mom's here." The nurse said poking her head into the room. Katie helped Justin to his feet He tried to walk but was so dizzy he had to put his hand on the wall to keep himself from falling over." Come on." Justin's mom said kindly when he met her in the front office. Katie hugged him." Bye Justin. Feel better." Justin smirked a little." I'll try." Katie smiled and started to head back to class." Text me!" She shouted down the hall. Justin nodded." Kay!" Justin shouted back, his voice raspy and congested. He stood in the hallway with a goofy smile on his face as he watched Katie walk away." Hatschoo!" Justin sneezed to the side causing him to stumble a bit before walking to the car.

[ID2006]

very cute and I love your sneeze spellings

[murphy dee]

My only advice would be to split the text up into paragraphs and make a new line whenever someone new has dialogue. It tends to be more difficult to read when it's all smooshed together. Other than that, though, it's a really sweet story! And I, too, like your sneeze spellings.

[JBieberLove_12]

I loved this story (I would have commented like a month ago but I only found out how now :/ ) !!! Infact I love all your stories... especially your Bieber one's!!! Please update them!!! !!!

[ThatSneezyGirl]

Justin's mom lead him to the car and layed him down on the backseat. Justin tried to close his eyes, but the vibration of the car intensified his headache, making it impossible. He groaned and put his face against the window. The cool glass against his warm cheeks was actually kind of soothing.

" Huhtschooo! Hehtschooo!" Justin's mom looked at him in the rear view mirror and a look of worry swept across her face. She knew Justin felt like crap and she wanted to get him home so he could get some rest. After sitting in traffic for half an hour and many sneezes from Justin, they finally made it home. Justin's mom layed him down on the couch and covered his shivering body with a warm, fleece blanket.

" Hahtschooo! Hehtschooo!" He sneezed into his long sleeve shirt and Justin's mom handed him a box a tissues. She went into the bathroom and opened up the medicine cabinet. She shuffled through the various medicines and creams until she found a small bottle of NyQuil. She went back into the living room and sat on the edge of the couch.

" Sit up." Justin mustered his strength and forced himself up. She poured some of the medicine into the cap and handed it to Justin.

" Take it." Justin hesitated for a moment before handed it back to her and quickly grabbing a tissue.

" What are you-"" Huhtschooo! Hatschooo! HUHtschooo! Hehtschooo!"

He groaned and took the medicine out of her hand and swallowed it. He coughed a little before laying back down and snuggling under the warm blanket.

" Feel better.' Justin's mom said and walked away. Justin yawned and let his eyes flutter closed.

Justin was woken up by the sound of the front door opening.

" Hi Katie." Justin's mom said.

" Hi Ms.Pattie. May I come in?"

" Sure." His mom said sweetly and gestured Katie into the room. She walked over to Justin and sat on the edge of the couch.

" Hey."" Hey Justin said, his voice raspy and congested. Katie gently stroked his rosy red cheek.

" Are you feeling better?"

" No," Justin sniffed." I feel worse."

" I'm sorry baby." Katie said sympathetically. There was a moment of awkward silence until Justin felt a tickle in his nose.

" Hahtschooo! Hehtschooo! Huhtschooo! Hahtschooo! Hehtschooo!"

" Bless you." Katie said softly. She handed him a tissue and he flashed her a weak smile. There was another awkward silence but this time Katie broke the silence.

" Well I gotta go. My mom is waiting outside to take me to cheer leading practice." Justin responded to her with a coughing fit. After he was done, Katie kissed him on the cheek and hurried towards the door. Right before she walked out, she looked back at him.

" Don't worry, I'll be over here tomorrow to take care of you."

[Prongs]

Aww, the idea of Katie taking care of Justin is pure fluffy cuteness! Can't wait!

[JBieberLove_12]

Aaaaaaw... I LOVE THIS STORY! More please <3

[BelieveInRollins]

oh my god i love this story great job

[ThatSneezyGirl]

Okay part 3

The next day, Justin felt even worse than before, which he didn't even know was possible.

" Huhtschooo!"

He sneezed into a tissue and blew his nose fiercely. he pulled the covers tighter around him and turned the channel on the TV.

" How are you feeling?" Justin's mom asked as she walked into the living room. She sat down on the edge of the couch ans moved his bangs out of his face.

" Crappy." He muttered into his pillow. His mom gently placed her hand on his forehead.

" You feel really warm."

" But I'm freezing." Justin said pitifully. His mom sighed and grabbed an extra blanket from the hall closet and spread it over Justin's shivering body.

" Thanks." He muttered.

" Well try to get some rest and maybe you'll feel better." She kissed him on the forehead and walked out of the room. Justin closed his eyes, but was startled by the sound of his phone ringing. He looked at the caller I.D and answered it.

" Hey baby." Katie said.

" Hey." He said dully.

" Are you feeling better?" Justin tried to respond, but a tickle in his nose forced him to bury his face in the crook of his arm.

" Hahtschooo!"

" I'll take that as a no."

Justin sniffed helplessly before blowing his nose." I feel awful."

" Who are you talking to?" Justin's mom asked in a very mom voice.

Justin looked down and his mom knew exactly who it was. She took the phone out of his hand and he blew his nose again.

" Katie, aren't you at school."

Katie's eyes widened when she heard his mom's voice." I gotta go."

She hung up the phone and Justin's mom tucked his phone in her pocket. " Get some rest. You need it."

Justin was too tired to even try to argue. He coughed before snuggling under the covers. Justin closed his eyes and Pattie smiled.

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* A couple hours later *

" Thanks mom." Katie said, waving her hand as she ran up onto Justin's porch. She rang the doorbell and Justin's mom answered it with a smile.

" Hey Katie, come in."

She walked inside and sat on the edge of the couch. She looked at Justin and was surprised to see that he looked even worse than yesterday. Justin coughed and Katie saw his eyes gently flutter open.

" Hey Justin."

Before Justin could say anything, the persistent tickle in his nose came back and he quickly cupped his hands over his mouth.

" Huh... Huhtschooo!"

Katie gently stroked Justin's warm, rosy red cheek and watched as his eyes closed again.

" Hey Katie, I need to run to the store, do you mind watching Justin for a bit?"

Katie smiled." Sure."

" Thank you so much." Pattie said as she grabbed her purse and walked out the door. Katie put her hand on Justin's forehead and her eyes widened. She reached for the thermometer on the coffee table and stuck it in Justin's mouth. She waited until she heard the high pitch beep and took it out.

" 103.1."

Justin buried his face in his pillow and broke out into a coughing fit. Katie listened as the congested coughs loudly and harshly rumbled out of his chest. Katie grabbed a glass of water and handed it to Justin and he gulped it down fast.

" Hehtschooo!"

Justin sneezed and Katie handed him a tissue.

" You know, you don't have t take care of me."

" I know," Katie smiled." But I want to."

[JBieberLove_12]

OMG! YAY! I'm so happy you posted this I LOVED it! MORE PLEASE! (And if you could also pleaseeeee update your other justin bieber stories like need you now or your love is my drug) !!! :D