Secret Crush - (6 parts) - Complete

[Skiffy]

Secret Crush

Female + Female with cold sneezes.

Original fiction.

One friend has feelings for the other, who now has a cold.

Jo shoved her hands deeper into her jacket pockets and pushed on through the biting wind. Glancing up, she spotted the roof of Megan's flat on the horizon, just across campus. Jo quickened her step, telling herself it was "just to get in out of the cold sooner".

As she approached the building's door and pressed the buzzer, Jo felt her heart fluttering faster in her chest. She had been looking forward to this evening all week. Jo waited for a response but instead heard footsteps coming down the stairs inside. The door creaked open, revealing Megan standing in the hallway. Her small frame was drowned in a comfy old hoody and tattered jeans that trailed on the floor. Beneath tousles of red hair that fell untidily around her face, Megan blushed and bit her bottom lip in an awkward smile.

"Hi." she said slowly and shyly in way that made Jo want to run over and squeeze her.

Jo laughed, "Hey. So, I guess you're not quite ready to go out yet?"

"I'm really sorry, I-" Megan coughed and tried again, "I fell asleep. Come in, I'll go get ready. I'll be really quick."

Megan stepped back to let Jo in and opened her arms for a friendly hug. Jo wrapped herself around Megan's soft shoulders and closed her eyes for a second or two. Their cheeks briefly met, interrupting Jo's bliss.

"Woah," Jo said, startled and concerned. "You're really warm, are you feeling OK?" Jo's hands were still resting on Megan's shoulders.

Megan shrugged "I'm alright, just knackered and my throat kinda…uh…" A shiver of excitement ran through Jo as she watched Megan's pretty face quiver and twitch. Megan brought her sleeve-draped hands up in the small space between the two girls. "I think I'm going to….ah…." Megan's quick gasps for breath were soft but Jo still heard every one. "ah…ah….ha-TCHSHOO!" Megan's body buckled in towards Jo's.

"Oh God, I am so sorry," Megan said, as she quickly rummaged in her pocket for a tissue. She was relieved to see Jo's warm, sympathetic smile instead of a look of disgust.

"It's fine," Jo said, flatly and deliberately. "Look, if you don't feel like going out tonight, that's no problem. We could just hang out here if you want or I could go and let you get back to sleep."

Megan sighed, "I do feel pretty rubbish. Maybe we could just wa…..watch…." Megan closed her eyes as she faltered and tried to catch her quivering breath. Jo watched closely, struggling to suppress a look of anticipation and delight. "…watch a…ah…ha-tchshoo! Ugh," she groaned. " Yeh, I think we should stay in."

They huddled together on a small sofa watching TV, with one blanket tightly wrapped around them both. Jo could feel Megan's warm body beside her and couldn't focus on anything else. Jo's heart raced, as well as her mind. Part of her was screaming, compelling her to just reach across, under the blanket, and hold Megan's hand. Thankfully, the tightly wrapped blanket had both of their hands safely buried.

After a while, Jo noticed a change in the rhythmic movement of Megan's body pressed up beside her. Megan's breaths were quick and shallow. Jo allowed her head to slowly turn towards Megan, just in time to witness the features of Megan's face contorting and trembling, making them even more beautiful.

"ah….ah….ha-tchhoo!" Megan surrendered, folding forward in her seat. Jo gaped at Megan, feeling exhilarating joy, excruciating longing and a cool mist against her cheek.

Edited October 19, 2011 by Skiffy

[sneezes]

very nice keep going

[silentdreamer789]

Great start Would love to see more...

Edited March 9, 2011 by silentdreamer789

[sneezytwilight]

This is great!!! can't wait for part 2!! The details and explanations make a vivid picture in the head!!

[Skiffy]

Thank you guys. This is the first time I've written something like this, and the only time I've written anything (other than essays) for years, so I wasn't sure how it would turn out. Thanks for your comments. Hmm, maybe I will try write another one.

I'm so chuffed you liked it

[Butch]

ScotGirl - Yeah..this is nice. I like it. You should write more.

[NoV]

Would love to read more...

[SneezyLaura]

That was lovely - I can't wait for more. <3

[Alexandria]

REally really nice! : ) can't wait for more!

[coffeepot]

Add me to the list of people who'd love to see this continue!

[Skiffy]

Thanks for the encouragement

I'm now in the process of writing another little story. It continues on directly from the end of this one. Is that what you guys would prefer? Or should do I do something a bit different just using the same characters?

[Skiffy]

OK, here's part 2. It's short as well. Sorry if this is the wrong place for continuing the story, I haven't really figured this forum thing out yet. BTW, when I said "bucked" in the first one, I meant to write "buckled", sorry.

Secret Crush Part 2

“Bless you. Here,” Jo said as she wriggled out of their warm cocoon to offer Megan a tissue from her bag.

Megan gratefully accepted the offer, with a polite smile. “Thanks for being so sweet to me, but you know you really don’t have to stick around with me and all my germs?”

“I’d like to stay with you,” Jo eagerly replied, “and I don’t care about germs, well, not yours anyway.” A soon as she heard the words leave her mouth, Jo blushed and turned away. That was careless. Had Jo let her secret slip out?

But there was no need to panic. Megan was distracted. She held her tissue in her hands and was unconsciously swaying it slightly back and forth in front of her face. Her eyes were half closed, teary and flickering under eyebrows that stirred out of sync with each other. Her soft, pink lips parted, her delicate little nose started to twitch. Jo watched in silence as the display of beauty, vulnerability and complete lack of restraint unfolded. She listened to the sound of Megan’s tiny, whispering breaths being pulled in and out of her body, over and over again.

Uncontrollable pleasure and desire battled with sympathy and shame in Jo’s mind. She didn’t want Megan to suffer, even if it was only a little, but she couldn’t help trembling with excitement as she witnessed such a perfect performance.

After enduring the tickling and teasing for an infuriating length of time (to Megan), she was finally able to sneeze, “ah…ah…ah……..........ah….ah…ah………ah…HA-TSCHOOO!” She had just enough time to time to sit back again before she was caught by another sneeze, “ah…ha-TSCHOO!” But the tickling feeling was still there, “ha…ha-TCHSHKOO, ha...ha-TCHSHCOO! Uh…ah…HA-TSCHSHKOO!” Jo felt the sofa rock with each sneeze, which sounded wetter and more desperate than the last. Megan blew her nose and slumped back into the sofa with a sigh, looking a little embarrassed and defeated.

“Aww, you really don’t sound healthy. Is there anything I can do? Anything I can get for you?” Jo asked, sincerely. Megan thought for a moment before deciding to give in to her self-pity,

“Em, a hug?” she asked, stuffily, with a hesitant shrug. A contented smile crept across Jo’s face as she lent in towards Megan and gently enveloped her. Megan closed her eyes and rested her head against Jo’s shoulder. Suddenly, Megan was caught out- “HA-TSCHKOO!” She involuntarily squeezed Jo’s body tightly as she sneezed into her shoulder. Before Megan could even begin the frantic apology that she judged would be needed after that, Jo gently squeezed her back and whispered,

“Shhh, it’s OK. I don’t care.”

…a spectacular understatement.

Edited April 13, 2011 by Vetinari

[NoV]

I am enjoying this a lot. Love some of your descriptions, especially the 'sofa-rocking sneezes'. Please write more!

[sneezytwilight]

“Em, a hug?” she asked, stuffily, with a hesitant shrug. A contented smile crept across Jo’s face as she lent in towards Megan and gently enveloped her. Megan closed her eyes and rested her head against Jo’s shoulder. Suddenly, Megan was caught out- “HA-TSCHKOO!” She involuntarily squeezed Jo’s body tightly as she sneezed into her shoulder. Before Megan could even begin the frantic apology that she judged would be needed after that, Jo gently squeezed her back and whispered,

“Shhh, it’s OK. I don’t care.”

…a spectacular understatement.

Loved this last part! Amazing!

[Alexandria]

Just perfect!!!!! i cannot wait to read more of these two!!

[SneezyLaura]

This story is awesome.

I love girls with colds and girls taking care of each other. <3

[White Rose]

aww! this is so cute! please, do continue!

[Skiffy]

Thank you unfortunately, I'm kinda stuck for now, sorry. Does anyone have any ideas on how this should continue?

BTW, on an unrelated note, has anyone read an original fiction called "The Model"? I just found it in the collection of female stories, under Anonymous. I advise that you check that one out. Seriously, wow

[peachypeach]

lovely! i hope you'll continue. wish i could give you more suggestions about where to go...i'd love to see your protagonist reveal her affections .

[zneeze]

BTW, on an unrelated note, has anyone read an original fiction called "The Model"? I just found it in the collection of female stories, under Anonymous. I advise that you check that one out. Seriously, wow

I could say the same about this fic - Seriously, wow Great job so far!

[Candy]

Completely adorable <3 I look forward to more.

[Skiffy]

OK, part 3, em, it gets a bit weird. Hope you like it anyway.

Part 3

Megan groaned with embarrassment and buried her face further into the warmth and comfort of Jo’s body, croaking a muffled, “Thank you”.

Jo realised she had been lost in their tranquil embrace a little too long when she opened her eyes and saw that Megan had fallen asleep. Her head rested limply against Jo’s body and a tissue had fallen free from her soft, white hand. Jo gently lay Megan down on the sofa and repositioned the blanket, hovering over her for a second as she studied Megan’s full, moist lips. She slowly sat back up again and hoped that Megan wasn’t woken by the anguished sigh that had escaped Jo through gritted teeth. Jo didn’t want to leave without saying goodbye so decided to stay for a while, perched on the end of the sofa by Megan’s feet. She turned the TV down low and tried not to disturb Megan’s sleep.

After only a few minutes, Jo felt her eyelids drooping lazily while her thoughts took on a mind of their own. She allowed herself to drift off and to dream.

Jo rowed her small boat across the cold sea for an eternity. It was endless, desolate, lonely. Suddenly, something appeared on the horizon- a tiny, sodden figure clinging on to a raft that bobbed up and down in the water. Jo immediately recognised the wavy red hair and flawless white skin that glistened, wet in the sunlight.

“Please help me.” Megan calmly requested as she stretched out a hand towards the boat. Jo pulled her in with ease, she sat down on the opposite bench, their legs intertwined in the tiny space. “I’m so glad you found me,” Megan beamed, “it was so….so…c…cold…uh…ah….ha-tchoo!”

“Bless you,” Jo said as she took off her jacket and wrapped it snugly around Megan. Jo stared into Megan’s eyes as they squinted and flickered. Her mouth opened and closed with the gasps of air being draw into her lungs.

“ah…uh…I’m going to….ah…” Jo leaned in even closer, brimming with anticipation. “huh…ah…ah…ih…” Megan’s breaths became more like squeaks and her eyebrows danced around more dramatically as the tickling feeling went on unresolved. “ih…hi…ha-TCHSHOO!” Jo’s lips were suddenly moistened as Megan sneezed. Megan barely had time to breath before Jo was lovingly holding her freckled face and soaking wet hair in her hands while passionately kissing her pretty, plump lips.

Jo was slowly woken as something nudged her head up and down. She opened her eyes and saw only Megan’s chest, rising and falling beneath her. She thought she was still dreaming at first. Disorientated, she glanced around and saw that she was back in Megan’s flat and that she was instinctively clinging on to Megan’s soft arm. Jo looked up and saw Megan’s face- it was caught in an adorable pre-sneeze pose. Megan had her eyes squeezed shut and held a tissue in front of her gaping mouth.

“huh…ah…ha-tchkoo!” Jo felt Megan’s body tense violently underneath her own as she sneezed. Megan sniffed and opened her eyes, noticing that Jo was blinking back at her. “Aww, sorry, I didn’t want to wake you up.”

“Em, what? Why am I..?” Jo carefully sat up, rubbing her eyes, and tried not to lean uncomfortably on Megan.

“You fell asleep on me, it’s OK, it was…nice.” Jo saw a playful smile briefly flash across Megan’s face before the familiar, helpless, quivering expression returned, “ha...ha…HA-tshoo! Excuse me.”

Jo, flustered and embarrassed, felt about on the floor for her bag and grabbed her phone to check the time, “Jeez, it’s after midnight already. I should really go.” She was already standing up and putting on her jacket.

“Oh, OK. Thanks so much for coming round tonight.” Megan followed Jo to the door and gave her one last hug before she rushed out.

Edited April 13, 2011 by Vetinari

[sneezes]

i really like this story plz keep going.

[Whysprr]

Oh I really like this! Pleas continue

[Butch]

ScotGirl - NICE. Please continue.