Emily Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 Yes, it's true I started writing something once a couple months ago but I never found an opening to introduce a sneeze scene...thus here I am with a fanfic which I will make myself finish. Fandom: KuroshitsujiPairings: CielXLizzy and CielXSebastian. Whatever the situation calls for. :3“Young master, it is time to wake up.” The young boy stirred and mumbled something unintelligible, even to his demon butler’s ears. “Today’s breakfast will be Darjeeling tea and raisin scones.” An arm slowly appeared from the side of the blanket and reluctantly pulled off the blanket. As he was accustomed to doing, the butler swiftly helped his young master get dressed; his failure to do so would result in a sorry mess that the young master called being ready. “Is there something the matter, my Lord?” His master was particularly sluggish this morning and did not seem to be capable of standing upright. “There is nothing wrong with me, Sebastian,” the young earl replied haughtily, punctuating his statement with a soft sniff. Sebastian placed a white-gloved hand on the boy’s waist to keep him steady.“Are you quite sure of that, young master?” Receiving no answer, he assumed that the master was simply too proud to supply him with a response that would indicate any weaknesses. Sebastian’s pale lips curved upward. Two could very well play this game. “Sebastian, hand me my tea.” “Yes, my Lord.”Taking the cup carefully and feeling immediate relief at the warmth, the earl put his lips to the rim and took a deep sip. Upon hearing a loud, high-pitched voice squealing “CIEEEEEEEEEL!” he choked on the tea and was in the midst of an intense coughing fit when Lizzy burst through his bedroom door.“Ciel! I just came back from France and I bought you the cutest clothes ever! Mother will be here for high tea, but until then, we can be alone. Just the two of us, together.” The pig-tailed blonde girl could barely contain herself. Her excitement from seeing her betrothed and beloved was spilling out in every which way, and Ciel was always guaranteed to be in a foul mood whenever Lizzy was in high spirits.“Lizzy”—cough—“could you please”—cough—“wait a moment?” As always, quick to respond to his master’s needs, Sebastian put on his butler smile and tapped Lizzy lightly on the shoulder. “Lady Elizabeth, it would be best to wait in the sitting room for now. The young master is only half-dressed, so please wait for a few minutes.” Ushering her out the door, Sebastian turned back around just in time to hear a quiet “h’ish” originating from his master. Blushing very faintly, Ciel held his hand out expectantly for his breakfast as though he had not been guilty of doing anything out of the ordinary. He would keep up his façade for as long as he’d like, Sebastian knew from experience. The butler curled his perfect lips upwards once again and shook his head. He would see how long this game would last. Very short for now. I haven't got much in mind now about how to continue this so fetishy ideas are welcome! PS- I don't mind torturing my Ciel. I'll share him, even. ♥ Please indulge in his adorableness. He looks like this btw: isn't he adorable? Link to comment
caligulasArmageddons Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 -gives immensely long squeal-I just found Black Butler(Kuroshitsuji) on Netflix, and then you posted this!!!! -more squealing- Is there more? Please say there's more! (What do you have planned? /rhetorical question) Link to comment
Emily Posted April 2, 2011 Author Share Posted April 2, 2011 Forgotten Sorceress: 8'D Are you watching it in original Japanese or English dubbed? You should watch teh original or else a lot of the puns will be totally destroyed by American failures. I urge you to watch in Japanese. There will definitely be more, maybe tonight, if I procrastinate on homework. Actually I'm writing part 2 right now.And I don't have a lot planned. Donate ideas to spice it up por favor! ;D Link to comment
Scion Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 I totally just started watching this show about a month ago. I can't lie, it creeped me out big time, but it's kind of addicting and anyway all anime shows creep me out (in a good way) ANYWAY. And YES, he is adorable. And YES I like this. I LOVE being evil! I definitely wouldn't be able to write fandom stuff. I suck at "transferring" character personalities, but from what I can tell you do not have that problem lol. Me likes, future affair-ee person... Link to comment
caligulasArmageddons Posted April 2, 2011 Share Posted April 2, 2011 I wish I could find it in Japanese, but I don't think...Blah, too tired to think. Anywayyyy, I have a suggestion! (although I miiiiiiiiiight be missing the point here.) Nah, nevermind. Just do your thing and I won't kill myself with embarrassing...erm...stuff. And you've probably guessed that I'm not editing this post. I'm too lazy. Meh. -reads more Kuroshitsuji manga- Link to comment
Emily Posted April 3, 2011 Author Share Posted April 3, 2011 Scion: Awww, they creep you out? D: But the creepy kinds are the best kinds. ♥ I was reading the episode summaries and the first episode of season 2 if you haven't watched it yet would probably creep you out. THANK YOU FOR LIKING IT! I'm using fanfiction as a way for practicing 3rd-person. ==; Which still kinda sucks anyway cause they're not as in character as I'd like them to be...speaking of fandoms, you should try it! Let the readers be the judge of your writing And what is this "future affairee" business? How about now? ;D I'm an impatient child.Forgotten Sorceress: OH MY DEAR LORD, NO. YOU ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WATCH IT IN ENGLISH DUBBED VOICES. YOU'LL MAKE ME CRY AND HIDE IN MY HOLE AND NEVER COME OUT. THIS SHALL BE YOUR SALVATION. It should be one of the seven mortal sins to watch original Japanese anime in English dubs. [although I'm not religious at all, please forgive me for my use of religion.] AND PLEASE DO GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS! D< If I run out of creative juices from school, I'll be depending on you. Well, anyway. Part 2. Sebastian noticed, as they were walking down the hall, that the young master’s nose was growing an increasingly deeper shade of red, although it had been only a light pink tint when he had woken up. He was also dragging his feet around, a posture that the proud Ciel Phantomhive would never willingly submit himself to. This, the butler wisely kept to himself, partly from the satisfaction that he could tease his young master in the very near future, and partly from the fact that he was one hell of a butler and was responsible for saving his master some face.The polyphonic footsteps stopped at about eight feet away from the sitting room door when Ciel paused momentarily to relieve himself of his humanly needs. Sebastian, too, waited patiently by the door in anticipation of his master’s losing the game. Sharp senses picking up the rapid change in breath of his master, and nimble fingers ready with a handkerchief in the case that the master had forgotten his, which he often did, Sebastian stood still and waited. Ciel’s head lurched forward from the impact of his explosions, which appeared to be too delicate to be coming from a boy, Sebastian observed. “Hhh-hiksst, itszhi, heksst!” Mop of blue-gray hair flopping, Ciel panted loudly, barely catching his breath for the second round. “HetKNSHh! HHh…hih-hh…hEHiee…”“A little stuck, young master?” Sebastian inquired innocently, further irritating the flustered Ciel.“hiihh-Shut ahhhup—““Ciel! I thought I heard you! Let’s go out for a boat ride together!” With that, Lizzy proceeded to drag the rather unenthusiastic boy, breath still hitching, out into the enormous Phantomhive estate. Unsurprisingly, the butler caught up and followed the pair without as much as a swish of his black tailcoat. Ciel managed to escape her clutches and follow along reluctantly as she bulldozed across the finely groomed lawn. Blue eye glaring intensely at that seemingly nonchalant butler, Ciel issued his command. “Sebastod,” he said in a slightly thickened voice, “thihihh-this is ad order. Do dot let Lizzy fide oud dad…dad—” his voice faltered, upon his hearing the unpleasant dissonance in his voice.An amused smile materialized on the butler’s face. He had almost won that round. No matter, he’d win the game soon enough. “Trouble speaking, my Lord? Perhaps it would be best if you made good use of your handkerchief.” Tiny patches of pink indicated his master’s obviously wounded pride. And the tip of his nose, which was nowhere near its original color, turned increasingly redder as his aristocrat’s nostrils flared delicately, attempting to let go of one annoying troublemaker. “Young master, do you require assistance in exterminating the beast?” Cheeks considerably more flushed than they were before, the boy rubbed his reddened nose, tilted his head forward, and waited, still unwilling to submit to the demon. It was not very proper to shower someone with contagions anyway, even if said someone was not a human. And it would only add to his embarrassment. Then a sudden shift in his breathing foretold the coming disaster if he failed to catch every one the outbursts in his monogrammed handkerchief. Which he could not find, even as his breath hitched profusely and his fingers searched wildly in his pockets. Sebastian, although he did enjoy teasing the boy, had to live up to his expectations. Of course, he was ready when the first messy discharge of air, out of many, rode its course. “SebasTCHH!” The butler expertly concealed what would have been a terrible disgrace with his demonic speed, his white-gloved hand pushing the soft linen of his own handkerchief, which he had no need for, onto the rapidly flaring nostrils of the young noble. “H’haahISSH heh-ISHH Kekshh! Eksht igshtt…hh’hihHEH-PSShh! Unngh.” Blushing madly and staggering from the force of his discontinued fit, but still opposed to admitting to something so human and childish, he used the brief pause to push away that mocking hand and wisely decided against pushing away the handkerchief too. “Heh’ehKSSHH! Itchziii IIHH-shhoo HEH’KNNSXT!-uuhh…”“My, that last one sounded painful.” As usual, he had hit the nail right on the head with his calm remarks. Bemused smirk appearing on his flawless face again, the butler reached out a hand to steady his greatly weakened lord. And indeed, with his head pounding like a thousand drums were beating inside, and his flushed cheeks several degrees warmer than usual, the battle he had been wagering was taking quite a toll from Ciel Phantomhive.With a great sniff that was on the borderline of what society would deem appropriate, Ciel began to reissue his previous command, until Lizzy turned around abruptly to see that her beloved was not following in suit. “Cieeeeeel! What are you doing lagging behind? Hurry up before Mother coooomes!” “Yes, I am coming, Lizzy,” Ciel responded with a defeated sigh and a cough. “Sebastian, this is an order. Make sure Lizzy doesn’t find out about—about what I had just addressed. Hih-kssh!”“Yes, my Lord.” Link to comment
caligulasArmageddons Posted April 3, 2011 Share Posted April 3, 2011 -squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal-I will tell you my suggestion, then. But you went and ruined it, so this might not work. (Nah, you didn't kill it. It's just not a good idea anymore.)If only Ciel had said, "Don't TELL Lizzy". But, he didn't. Link to comment
ichixshiro14 Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 I wish I could find it in Japanese, but I don't think...Blah, too tired to think. Anywayyyy, I have a suggestion! (although I miiiiiiiiiight be missing the point here.) Nah, nevermind. Just do your thing and I won't kill myself with embarrassing...erm...stuff. And you've probably guessed that I'm not editing this post. I'm too lazy. Meh. -reads more Kuroshitsuji manga-Kuroshitsuji is in Japanese, with English Subs, on anilinkz.com That's where I watched it a couple years ago By the way, this story rocks!!! thanks for sharing! Link to comment
Emily Posted March 2, 2012 Author Share Posted March 2, 2012 oh good lord, I am so shameless. I'm continuing this one too. I'm craving me some shota <3 and I need to brush up on fanfic writing for my upcoming two LOL. kinda demotivating to find that I've deleted the file from my computer, but I can always pick up from where I left off last. So would anyone be interested in a resurfacing Kuroshitsuji fanfic? Link to comment
pinknose Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 Oooh! Oooh! Me! I'm interested!! Ciel~ :heart: Link to comment
a red nine Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 This is so cute, Emily! Really adorable scenes - Ciel would go to such great lengths for Lizzie's sake. Thanks for the review on my fanfic by the way, and I'm glad I could be an influence for such a sweet story. You make very cute descriptions that paint a picture in my head. Keep it up! Link to comment
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