ThatSneezyGirl Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 * Just a random story that popped in my head during class so comment and tell me if you like it . Also, I know he doesn't have a little sister named Faye but in my story he does and he's not famous in this story*6 year old Faye Bieber sat at the end of her brother's bed, staring at him while he slept. She watched his chest slowly rise and fall, noticing how his eyes fluttered every so often."Faye."She looked up and saw her mom standing in the doorway of Justin's room. The lights from the hallway light up the fairly dark bedroom and caused a shadow to be casted from Faye's small body." Leave him alone, he needs to rest."Faye quietly crawled off the bed towards her mother." Okay, I have to go to work do your in charge of taking care of Justin."" I thought you had the day off." Her mom sighed." Scheduling mix up."Faye didn't exactly know what that meant but she just nodded to show that she understood." Alright, I gotta go. Be good."She kissed Faye's forehead and heading towards the front door with Faye following on her heels. Faye watched as the headlights of her mom's car illuminated the living as her mom backed out of the driveway. She watched as her mom drove down the street, turned the corner, and drove out of sight. She sighed and slumped down on the couch. Her mom was always working to support their family so Faye treasured every moment she got to spend with her mom. Justin wasn't supposed to be home but he got sick so their mom demanded that he stay home from school. Faye wasn't getting ready for school because she had a teacher work day. Usually when she had the day off from school she loved to sleep in but Justin's coughing and sneezing woke her up at 6:30am. She tried to go back to sleep but the incessant noise kept her awake so she decided to just get up. Faye turned on the TV and began flipping through channels, trying to find something to watch. Considering it was so early in the morning, there wasn't really much on. She settled on watching Sponge bob." Hatschooo! Hahtschoo! Huhtschhh! "She could hear Justin's sneezing from the living room. Her mothering instinct kicked in and she wondered into his room."Justin."She gently shook him, trying to wake him up."What?" he asked groggily."Are you okay?"Justin grabbed a pillow sitting on the opposite side of his head and threw it at Faye."What was that for?""Because that was a stupid question.""How was that a stupid question?"" Obviously I'm not okay I'm-" Justin's breathe started to hitch and he quickly grabbed a tissue from the tissue box sitting on the nightstand."Hahtschhh!"he wiped his nose and threw the tissue into the trash can that was already overflowing with used tissues." Bless you." Faye said innocently. "Thanks." Justin muttered, congestion seeping into his voice."Do you want me to get you anything?"" I'm kinda hungry."" Okay," Faye said." Be right back."She hopped off the bed and ran to the kitchen. Some people said Faye was 6 going on 26. Since Faye's mom was always working, she had to learn at an early age how to take care of herself. Her mom often said that Faye acted like a young adult more than a child and Faye always took that as a compliment because she liked to feel like she was older than she really was. While Faye was in the kitchen, Justin tried to clear out his sinuses because he was so stuffed up it was starting to give him a headache. he blew his nose twice but it was no use." Huhtschooo! Hehtschooo! Hatschooo!"He sneezed into the crook of his arm and collapsed on his bed. A couple minutes later, Faye walked back into his room, carrying a small bowl of soup and a spoon." Here you go."Justin looked at the steaming bowl while Faye smiled sweetly at him. He took the spoon and tasted it. It didn't taste bad, it actually tasted kinda good. He smiled weakly as he scarfed down his breakfast. Link to comment
OnlyInMyDreams Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 I love this. She's soooo cute, and you make them both appear so real, well mostly her since she's donig most of the stuff here.Have him talk all congested more? And keep writing. It looks very good. Link to comment
ThatSneezyGirl Posted June 27, 2011 Author Share Posted June 27, 2011 * I know it's short but I don't have a lot of time to write it but the next parts are longer and have more sneezing *" Huhtschooo!"Justin sneezed, causing a chill to run up his spine. He shivered and pulled the old gray comforter tighter around his body, trying to retain the heat the was quickly escaping his body. Justin had moved from the comfort of his bed to the couch so Faye could keep a closer eye on him. Fay It was now 9:00ame sat down on the black arm chair next to the couch and turned on the TV to see if anything good was on. It was now 9:00am so she figured there had to be some decent shows on. Justin was trying to sleep because he was up half the night sneezing and blowing his nose and the sound of the constant changing of channels just intensified his headache, making it impossible to sleep." Can you just pick something to watch?"Faye glared at him and kept changing the channel. Justin tried to close his eyes but his stuffed up nose had other ideas." Huhtschooo! Hehtschoooo! Hahtschooo! Hatschewww!"Justin groaned in frustration. He figured he had sneezed at least 20 times in the last hour." Can you turn it down?""Why?""Because I'm trying to sleep!"Faye sighed and turned the TV down one notch and Justin knew asking her to turn it down even more was just gonna piss her off."Hehtschooo! Huhtschooo!"He sneezed into the crook of his arm and collapsed on the couch. Faye finally settled on Phineas and Ferb. Justin closed his eyes and started to fall asleep but the itch in his nose wouldn't subside." Hahtschooo! Huhtschooo! Hehtschooo!"He grabbed a tissue and blew his nose fiercely. He closed his eyes and eventually drifted off to sleep. Link to comment
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