Kristen Stewart's Allergies

[SneezeformeKristen]

Ok this is my 1st story and I'm not good at spelling out sneezes but... *hides eyes* here it is...

"Hhchoo!" "mmm bless you Kristen" I said as I rolled over to face my brown haired, green eyed girlfriend. "thanks" "allergies already?" I asked looking at her sympathetically. "hmm probably" she laughed and put her arms around my waist. I pulled her close to me even though it was already very hot on this July day in Pennsylvania. She sighed and rolled over on her back and stretched. She turned her head toward the window, and sneezed, it was uncovered and I could see the spray in the bright sunlight filtering through the window. "Bless you, nice one" I said. (ah the perks of having a girlfriend who knows about my fetish) She giggled and blushed, I kissed her. "I would be content to lay here with you forever." I said. She laughed, "me too." She said right before catching a sneeze with the sheets. "Bless you Kristen Jaymes!" (I like using her middle name when I bless her sometimes) It was a nice day out so Kristen decided to sit out and tan and naturally I went with her. She slide her towel around her waist and took her Ray Bans down off the top of her head. I could hear the Beatles playing on her iPod. She looked like a Greek goddess, her chestnut brown hair glistening in the sunlight. I was captivated, "I can't believe she's mine." I whispered under my breath. She was sitting so still I thought she was asleep but suddenly her body pitched forward and she sneezed twice. I shook of the shock I felt after that display of utter sexiness and blessed her. We spent the whole day outside by the pool, at about midnight we decided to go to bed. Kristen was curled up on my chest, asleep. I listened to her slightly congested breathing and made a mental note to get her more allergy medicine in the morning.

[SneezeformeKristen]

Love it? Hate it? I will accept constructive criticism.

[Pearlised]

Its sweet

Suggestion: Paragraphing?

[SneezeformeKristen]

Yeah I was thinking about that thanks for the suggestion

[curliecatlover]

I think it's cute. I like your writing style.

[sneezytwilight]

Awww Its so cute!!! I love it!

[NoV]

She looked like a Greek goddess, her chestnut brown hair glistening in the sunlight. I was captivated, "I can't believe she's mine." I whispered under my breath. She was sitting so still I thought she was asleep but suddenly her body pitched forward and she sneezed twice.

This is my favourite bit - great imagery!

[SneezeformeKristen]

Thanks for the comments guys