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Um, ok, so this is pretty much my first attempt at something like this. This is.... I'm not sure what to call it. A drabble? A short story? Who knows. It's really supposed to be about the Killjoys rather than the band members themselves. (That way it's about fictional characters, and I can do whatever I want with their personalities!) That's why I used their nicknames in the beginning. Also, I don't really picture Frank's sneezing as stifling, even though the spelling may seem that way. It's more like that's just the way he sneezes, in soft, rapid-fire fits. But I'm going to stop rambling and go hide in a corner now. :)

Midnight Sniffles

The man looked oddly angelic as he slept. His bright red hair fell gently across his face, the color subdued slightly in the dim light. Curled up next to him and wrapped tightly in his arms, a younger, dark haired man slept soundly.

Suddenly Fun Ghoul stirred and blinked sleepily, accidentally waking Party Poison.

“Frank?” Gerard mumbled, his voice thick with sleep. He pushed himself up on one elbow so he could look at the younger man. “Frank, what’s up? You okay?”

“Mmmmhhh...” Frank murmured incoherently. He reached up one pale hand to grab a fistful of Gerard’s shirt. He scooted closer to Gerard, burying his face in the taller man’s chest – and sneezed. Ten times.

“Issht! Issht! Ishht! Ishht-oo! Ishoo! ISHOO! ISSHT! Issht-issht-hii’IISHHOO!”

Gerard could only blink in surprise as Frank recovered.

Fank gasped for air for a few moments before untangling himself from Gerard and murmuring, “Sorry.”

Gerard smiled, pale and ghostly in the dark. He gently pulled Frank closer to him and tenderly planted a kiss on his forehead. “It’s okay. You can use me as a tissue whenever you want.”

Frank chuckled. Then he sniffed and rubbed a finger under his nose.

“Are you alright?” Gerard’s voice was full of concern.

“Yeah. It’s just allergies.”

“Are you sure?”

“I’m fine, Gerard.” Frank’s voice was quiet but firm. “Please don’t worry about me. You have so much to worry about.”

“Frank, it’s okay. If you’re sick, I wanna know about it, alright?”

But Frank had stopped listening. His eyes were closed, his breath hitching. It was not long before he succumbed to another fit. “Issht! Issht! Issht! ISSHT! ISSHT! ISHOO! ISHOO! Hii’ishoo! Hii’IISHOO! Hii’ISH! ISH! IIISH! Hii’ish-ISH-ISHOO!” As the fit intensified, he grabbed the sheet and buried his face into it, muffling his sneezes so that the others wouldn’t hear and wake up. When he finally finished, he was flushed and gasping.

Gerard put his arms around Frank and spoke softly in his ear. “Are you sure you’re alright? Because I could make you some soup if you’re not feeling well.”

“Soup does sound good,” Frank admitted, sniffling pitifully and rubbing his quickly reddening nose.

“Soup it is then.”

“Wait,” Frank murmured, once again grabbing Gerard’s shirt.

“What is it?”

“It’s just... you’re warm. And I’m tired. The soup can wait until morning, can’t it?”

Gerard smiled. He pulled the sheet up and lay down next to Frank, once again wrapping his arms around the younger man. Frank was asleep in seconds.


Well, there it is, my first sneezefic. Good? Bad? Somewhere in between?

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Guuuh. :) I'm gonna go with good. The part right in the beginning when he grabs Gerard and pulls him over to sneeze on him... :D I love those rapid-fire sneezes.

Nice first fic! I certainly hope it isn't your last.

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Definitely good, very good. I LOVE MCR, and these two were always my favorites. (I know it's not actually them, but it's close enough) The rapid fire fits are wonderful, you spelled them perfectly, and it's so cute the way their all snuggled up and Gerard is so worried about him. I say definitely keep writing stories if you want to, because this one is fantastic :)

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AHHHHH!!! You did not just write a MCR fic, WHAT?! Loved this! :o Cuuuuuuuuute. Please write more stories?? :cryhappy:

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Thanks for the comments! I'm so glad you like it!! I will definitely write more stories in general, and hopefully more Killjoys stuff as well. I'm thinking about one for Gerard, and eventually I'd like to write one for each of them (cuz they're all just so damn CUTE!) Um, out of curiosity, I'm pretty sure there's a way to edit posts, but I don't know what it is. It's just because I'm very picky and I'd like to change maybe 2 words in the fic! LOL.

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:) If you write a fic of Gerard...I will probably of love. Just sayin. I really hope you do write more stuff
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For you to edit your stories you have to be validated (I'm pretty sure) and then pm one of the moderators/admins about joining the writers group, it just allows you to edit your post for a lot longer after you wrote them. I hope I'm telling you right, if not someone please feel free to correct me.

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  • 3 weeks later...

This is the most amazing thing I've ever read. Everything I love, rolled up into one. Please write more of these! =)

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