zneeze Posted June 26, 2011 Share Posted June 26, 2011 While I was cleaning room, I found this mini-fic I wrote on paper many moons ago. The original idea was the main character being a teenage girl discovering her sneezing fetish a bit later in life, starting with enjoyment of her own sneezing at seventeen. () It was gonna read like a diary entry. But before you ask, no, I have no current interest in turning this into a series. Sorry.But with the pleasantries out of the way, enjoy what you do get! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...Meanwhile, Mom was cleaning the house today and made me dust while she and Dad went out. I didn't put up too much of a fight; I wasn't doing anything else anyway.I started downstairs. The den and living room had been pretty dusty for a few weeks now. Soon enough, I started feeling a bit of an itch in my nose. While I'm not terribly allergic to dust, I suppose enough of it can make anyone sneeze from time to time, and I'm no exception. I giggled as I had this thought, and I began to rub at my nostrils. Universal vulnerability, on such a small scale - it's not the black death, just a harmless sneeze or three. I rubbed my nose some more, feeling the fleshy part of the tip move back and forth, back and forth. I wondered if it was turning pink.I continued dusting, coming to a particularly dusty bookshelf in the den. Just removing some of the books kicked up some of the stuff. I felt the itch intensify. I decided to give in, dropped my rag, and waited. It wasn't long before... "Heh-EHshoo!" I bent forward at the waist, and laughed at my little performance. The tickle wasn't gone, but it subsided enough for the time being.I finished with the bookcase, sniffling every so often, and moved upstairs. It wasn't nearly as bad up there, till I got to my room. I started moving things off my desk - it was probably as dusty, if not worse, there than on the bookcase. My itchy nose got a lot itchier just then! Soon I couldn't stop myself: "Heh-CHOO! ...Ha-CHOO!" I sneezed, this time into my elbow.Anyway, I finished the dusting, laid down on my bed, grabbed a pink Kleenex from my box, covered my face in time for one dusty sneeze - "HEHHshoo!" - and gave my poor nose a hearty, well-deserved blow. Link to comment
Chanel_no5 Posted July 5, 2011 Share Posted July 5, 2011 Hey, how did I miss this!!? It's really good, I like it!! Thanks for sharing!! Link to comment
Nicole Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 You always write cute F stories, zneeze. You should write more, you know. Link to comment
Butch Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 zneeze - Great! More more, please. Link to comment
NoV Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 Great little sneezefic! Love finding stuff that I forgot I wrote - you can find some true gems that way Link to comment
High on Lullabies Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 What a delightful little story I'd say you have the art of drabbling worked out just beautifully. Universal vulnerability, on such a small scale Particularly liked this wonderfully succinct phrase Link to comment
zneeze Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 Thanks everyone! Didn't realize this had gotten comments @Chanel: Thank you Chanel @Nicole: Aww, thanks! I will try to continue writing more @Lalena: Thanks! @Mims: More (unrelated to this) fics should be on their way in a week or so @NoV: I know, right? It's great @HoL: I liked that particular phrase, too! It's so true Thanks!@Pearlised: Thank you Link to comment
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