tma Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 Ok... I really don't write obs, and I especially did not Ever think that I'd write a *self* obs. , buuuut... talking to a friend sort of convinced me to try. Now, as background, I normally only sneeze in singles or doubles. Also, I forget what it is that blooms in the eary summer around here that has litle fluffy white puff things ... but I'm rather allergic to them. So I got up the other day and changing around the laundry (I know... exciting. ). Anyway, of Course as I have an armfull of wet clothes, it hits me. Out of nowhere. I turned to the side and gave a harsh, "hehChuh" and immediately took another inhale and bent forward with a second similar sneeze (not hitting the clothing thankfully) that was a little harsher. So I'm thinking that I'm done, and then as soon as I move to put the clothes into the dryer, the tickle is back building up and I'm starting to hitch, but manage to get the clothes into the dryer. This time I manage to sneeze into my elbow- Huh.. huhEiShuh" and then the hitching started again and there was one last "EiShuh". My eyes were damp and my breathing was a little raqged after. I realise that 4 isn't a lot for many people here, but for me- wow... it was just odd.But then, the really embarrassing part. I actually ended up sneezing a quad in public. Same way as the previous. Except that I turned away from everyone and sneezed into my elbow, I tried to stifle, but they were too fast and harsh. What was horrid was that in between the two sets, I had someone ask me a question. Ugh!! Why oh why is it that something that I find so absolutely to DIE for from someone else, just makes me want to crawl into a hole. Thankfully noone said anything, because that would have been worse. So.. two quads in one day... And I wrote an obs. Link to comment
Joal 555 Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 Thank you for treating us to those obs!Your embarrassment is our gain.... Link to comment
Sneezles Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 They sound totally perfect and even hotter when it's from someone who doesn't usually sneeze a lot. Bless you and thank you for sharing - I loved it Link to comment
Honkytonklagoon Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 That was awesome. The sneezes and your obs. I liked that in the first set your hands were unavailable. Come to think of it, I liked how in the second set you were asked a question just as you were working up to another sneeze. Did I say that was awesome? Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 *looks very innocent* And I wrote an obs. Indeed you did, and a very awesome one at that. Aww, I'm sorry it was so embarrassing. And uhm... bless you. So I'm thinking that I'm done, and then as soon as I move to put the clothes into the dryer, the tickle is back building up and I'm starting to hitch, but manage to get the clothes into the dryer. This time I manage to sneeze into my elbow- Huh.. huhEiShuh" and then the hitching started again and there was one last "EiShuh". My eyes were damp and my breathing was a little raqged after. Link to comment
High on Lullabies Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 I don't know who convinced you to try writing an obs but whoever he/she was, please give them my most heartfelt thanks because you appear really rather good at it (Not that I expected anything else from such an awesome writer) Beautiful descriptions of both the situations and the sneezes themselves. I'm sorry the second set was so embarrassing for you though why oh why is it that something I find so absolutely to DIE for from someone else, just makes me want to crawl into a hole? I think you may have just answered you own question there... Link to comment
Joe Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Really cute obs, bless you (x8 )!I have to echo what High on Lullabies said above, please thank whoever it was who persuaded share your writing talents with us, it is very much appreciated Link to comment
Heathcliff Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 I think you already know that I like this... but I have to say, that was an absolutely delicious observation! I especially like the quad in public! Too fast and harsh to stifle? YUM! Link to comment
zneeze Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 Really coming out of your shell now, aren't you? Thank you for sharing, tma - and bless you! Times what, eight? Link to comment
Zed Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 One more reason you're a Totally Marvellous Animal, my friend!Bless you and thanks for sharing!Take care,Zed Link to comment
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