I'm so in love with you

[Leas]

Hi guys

I have based this story on my pure imagination

Characters are -

Talia, 17. Long Red hair, blue eyes in love with William

William, 18. Long black hair, blue eyes in love with Talia.

Charlotte, 16. Long chocolate brown hair, greenish brown eyes. Single. Talias best friend

Marco, 18. Short brown, straight hair. Brown eyes. Loves Charlotte. Williams best friend

Talias Mum

Talias Dad

Oh well here we go. Don't be too harsh

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As the snow fell on that cold, brisky morning, Talia woke to the sound of her best friends Charlotte mobile vibrations. Gah 7:30. 'my one day off this week and I still cannot get a lie in' she thought to her self, rather annoyed of her friends bitter selfishness. Who could she possibly be texting at this hour? Talia sniffed as she sat up from her warm, cozy bed to greet whomever she possibibly could. But nobody was there. Talia got up, and opened her window whilst brushing her red, curled locks out of her sleepy eyes 'I could do with a bit of air in here' she said to herself with a smile. Talia pulled the old wooden window up and locked it. Smiling, she stretched and went back to bed.

11:30. 'Talia, hey Tay! Wake up!! Tay!' Talia heard her friend shouting up from downstairs, we slowly arose, shivering. 'I regret opening that window' she snuffled remoursly. Slowly, as she made her way downstairs she could smell bacon sizzling on the pan. Mmmm Mums breakfast, a bit late! Make it a brunch

'Good morning dear' smiled Talias Mother to her sleepy not with it daughter

'Hi Mum, hey Char. You was up early!'

'Yes well, I like being an early bird ha ha ha' replied Charlotte smiling

Mmm brunch finished

'I'm off for a shower mum' said Talia

Talia made her way upstairs still in her PJ's, it seemed today was her lazy day. School had run her down, as for this weather it was confusing as her mother would blare the heating full so it became unbearable. She got changed and stepped into the shower. In the process of shampooing her hair, she felt the slightest tickle in the back of her nose. She rubbed at it and it seemed to subside. Washing the shampoo out and she felt it again. A strong tickly sensation in the back of her nose. No amount of rubbing could subside this strong feeling. Her breath began to hitch and she starting building up, all of a sudden 'HNXT' Talia stifled the sneeze 'excuse me. Bless me' she said to herself. She stepped out the shower. Wrapped a towel round her head, placed her dressing gown around her and walked to her bedroom. She sneezed a full on, unexpected 'HAAAA-TISCHOOO....HAAAA-CHOOOOO....Huh....ATISHOOOO!!!!' her mother called from downstairs 'bless you my dear. Everything okay?'

'urm yes everything....is fine Mum'

But is it....?

To be continued

Ideas? What would you like to see in the story and I'll consider adding it

[Ciuty80]

welcome to the writers

hmm...sounds good to me so far!

please more!

[sillystarsmoons]

This looks interesting, I agree and hope you post more soon?

[StarryView]

Oh, please add more. I was immediately drawn into this.

[Leas]

Hi everyone I'm gonna start adding my characters properly now!

Talia, 17. Long Red hair, blue eyes in love with William

William, 18. Long black hair, blue eyes in love with Talia.

Charlotte, 16. Long chocolate brown hair, greenish brown eyes. Single. Talias best friend

Marco, 18. Short brown, straight hair. Brown eyes. Loves Charlotte. Williams best friend

Talias Mum

Talias Dad

PART 2

Talia picked up her telephone and dialled Williams number. Willaim, her first and only love. He aimed to be a pro wrestler one day, even though Talia was too scared to go abd watch him, she backed him 100%. ''Hello, Will. How're you sweetie'' she tried to hide the deep congestion in her voice as she knew her boyfriend would worry ''Hi hun, I'm okay, how're you'' his voice sounded so amazing down the phone, ''fine, fid. Plans for today?'' her congestion showed and she sniffed hard to try and unblock her stuffy nose ''Urm, not sure hun, are you sure you're okay?'' the worry in his husky, manly voicebegan to show and he was clearly worried, Talia, of course knowing she was coming down with a very heavy cold, did not want her boyfriend to worry, ''no, no. I'm sure I'm real good, just a bit cold in here, making my dose run'' still congested, she laughed at her boy mocking her stuffy voice, ''Shush, ah excuse me...T-tishcooo!!'' she sneezed forcefully into the air ''well well, bless you Tay'' ''Urh, thagnks'' she ran to the bathroom and grabbed some tissue, she blew her extremly stuffed up nose ''you're welcome, I'll see you in fifteen minutes, love you Tay!!''

Charlotte ran up the stairs, almost bumping into Talia. ''Urm, Char, what are you doing?!'' Talia peered at her best friends glary eyes ''Oh, just seeing where you were, are you okay? You don't look so good!!'' ''I'm all good Char, I just....HIIIIIISHOOOOO!!!'' ''God bless you, gesundheit and bless you!!'' Charlotte beemed at her best friend, with her annoying smile, Charlotte seemed happy all the time, litrally! ''Thagnks! Can you teld Mum William will be here soon, in about 5 or 10 minutes!?'' ''Sure thing Tay, need a hankie?!'' ''Urm, nah I'm fid thangk you''

KNOCK, KNOCK

WILLIAM'S HERE!

TBC!!!

[macrotwentytwo]

could have been good!