Icee Posted September 5, 2011 Share Posted September 5, 2011 hai!!! so...ya. everyone else is doing drabbles, so i figured i might as well try my hand at it! for any of the fandoms i might use- NOT MY CHARECTORS, I DON'T MAKE MONEY FROM THEM- for the originals-most of the charectors i use are based on real people, but i changed their names. yeah, I'm really creative. 21-PollenFandom- MINDFREAKDescription- There's pollen in the air, and it's really bugging Criss... (M) (i know, i said all female, but a friend really wanted it so, just this once...) “ARISHOO!!” Criss sneezed, and sniffed. It was allergy season, and that meant needing to have a hanky on hand at all times. But today belonged to the magic, and nothing could stand in the way of getting the episode filmed. The make-up girl sauntered over, and clicked her tongue at his red nose and watery eyes. “take something. For the show? I can only do so much with make-up!” Criss blew his nose miserably, and shook his head. “it puts me to sleep, I hate it. If I can pull butterflies out of my stomach, I can make it through today without allergy medicine.” She sighed, and began working on the magicians face. Though she worked fast, she had a light touch, which tickled his nose. Holding his breath was the only way he could keep the sneeze at bay until the girl had finished, but holding back only lead to more sneezes in the long run, “HAISHOO!! ARSHOO!! ARISHOO!!” “bless you!” Criss growled under his breath, stood up, and walked over to the set. This was getting irritating. “what are we shooting?” “we’re doing Houdini’s favorite trick!” right. A complicated trick that required both hands. And the use of his hanky. “20 seconds!!!” Criss sniffled again, he could feel another sneeze building. And there wasn’t enough time to sneeze before they started rolling. Pressing the back of his hand to his nose, criss stepped in front of the camera. “ready??” Criss held up a finger in the direction of the camera man “ARSHOO!! ARISHOO!! HAISHOO!! Ha-ISHOO!!!” the crew began snickering. “ok, I’m ready!” 100-AirplaneOriginalDescription- A young woman, her boyfriend, and her younger sister have to fly to NYC to see a show, and the young woman manages to come down with a cold right before they leave...Word Count-373I leaned against Micheal’s chest, trying to go to sleep. I couldn’t breathe at all through my nose, and the plane ride wasn’t going to help that at all. The woman called for our flight, and I staggered to my feet wobbily. Micheal grabbed both our bags and put his arm around me. Emiline had been separated from me at the metal detectors, and I hadn’t seen her since. We gave the woman our tickets, and Micheal ushered me to a pair of seats and threw our bags in the overhead compartment. I looked around, and realized we were some of the first people on the plane. The tickling that had been nagging at my nose suddenly intensified, and I brought my hankie to my face as I was enveloped in a massive sneezing fit. "IISHIEW!! ECHIEW!! IICHIIEEW!!! HETCHIEW!!! ITSHIEW!! SHIEW!!! ow..." I wormed my way into Micheals arms again and sniffled. Maybe, if I could conk out before the flight took off… I jumped a little when the voice came over the loudspeaker, just as I was feeling like I might actually get some decent shut-eye, announcing that the flight would be leaving shortly, to please stay seated with our seat belts buckled until the captain turned off the fasten seat belts sign, blah, blah, blah. I put my hands over my ears and whimpered. Micheal squeezed my hand. He may have said something, but I was blocking out everything I could. I heard the muted voice of the attendant go silent, and I took my hands away, sniffling quietly. My nose was itching again. I twitched it to keep from sneezing. That was really starting to hurt my throat. Micheal passed me a handkerchief and I waved it in front of my face for a second before deciding that the sneeze was inevitable and burying my face in the soft white fabric “EH-XXXGHT!! Eh…he…IITCHIIEEW!!” I tried to stifle the first one, which had sent a wave of dizziness through my head, so I didn’t try to stifle the second. People around me said “bless you” and I thanked them wearily. This was going to be a long flight. let me know what you think! Link to comment
Lucian Posted September 5, 2011 Share Posted September 5, 2011 Yay! I like this! You are a really good writer. I look forward to your other stories! :!D Link to comment
Joal 555 Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 Awww the second one was so sweet!! I love the thought of sneezes on planes!Beautifully written Icee! Link to comment
Ali Marie Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 WOW!!!All I can say is...MINDFREAK!!! Link to comment
dontnoqit Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Short and to the point! Any chance we'll see more? Link to comment
Icee Posted September 21, 2011 Author Share Posted September 21, 2011 omg i'm sorry! i forgot about my own drabble thread... yeah, i'm cool...anyways79-MusicFandom-Uh...Cari Dell...if that can be considered a fandom. google her, she's the most epic guitar player ever. Word Count-300Description- A 16 year old girl named gizmo goes to a music lesson, and even though her teacher, Cari Dell, has obviously caught a cold, she insists in teaching the lesson...I walked into the music studio, my Takamine guitar slung over my shoulder. Silence. "Cari?" I called after a minute, as my music teacher was nowhere in sight. Silence, then a faint:"Wait there, Gizmo, I'll be out in a sec. EESSH!!!" I pulled my guitar into my lap and began tuning it. I was struggling with the top E string when a voice right behind me instructed "sharp by two steps", causing me to gasp and tweak the tuning peg down 5 steps. Placing my hands on my knees, I took a shaky breath. "Ok...thanks for the tuning advice...but you've got to stop doing that." I tuned the string, and looked to her for instruction. It was then I really saw her. Her face was pale, her eyes and nose were red, and she was rubbing her temples gingerly. "Oh gosh...should I come back tomorrow?" she shook her head and coughed, sitting down with her guitar resting on her knee. "I'b dot sick, I'b-HEISH!!!- perfectly capable of teachidg busic class today." I held back a snicker, then started playing moon dance, the song she'd been drilling into me for the last week. Halfway through the intro, she stood, told me to keep playing, and walked around the corner. I giggled, then turned my attention to the B sustained major 4th that I was trying to play. I wondered where she was going, and then I heard the wet, desperate “EEISH!!!! Ha-EEIISSH!!!!!” “Bless you!” “Shud up”I stopped playing and started laughing as my favorite rock star came back to her chair, a handful of tissues pressed to her glowing nose. “This isd’t fuddy.” I just laughed harder as she swiped at me head with her free hand. “A chord” “Right” this was going to be a very interesting lesson36-MiserableOriginalWord Count-337Description- WARNING- F/F Gizmo (from the music drabble) has a girlfriend, and they always sit next to eachother in science. when adrianna sits somewhere else, Gizmo knows there's a problem. if she was going to break up with me, she wasn't going to do it this way. Not by suddenly avoiding me, not talking, not coming over to my place. I stared at the text message on my phone “I can’t come to ur place 2nite srry” I sighed, then spun open my locker. She’d have to talk to me in choir. We sat next to eachother. I grabbed my bag and hurried to room 247. I doodled in my pink notebook, waiting for her to come in. it gave me time to wonder about the future, about how long we would be together, about if we would have kids…the moment was over too quickly, though, as I felt the chair next to me rattle as she sat down. On the very edge of her seat. “baby…you can’t keep doing this. If you’re gonna break up with me, just say so. Don’t keep avoiding me like this…its killing me, i-““I’b dot breakidg up with you.” She whispered, and I sighed, sweeping the hair off her forehead. “oh, adrianna…honey, you’re burning up.” She sniffled, and closed her eyes, leaning into my arms. “I can’t cobe over because I dod’t wadt to give you this. Add you dod’t wadt it. I’b fuckidg biserable right dow.” I almost cried at the sound of her voice, so innocent and tired. I put my arms around her and felt a shudder run through her too-warm body “guh…Gadget…huh…” I smirked at the nickname she’d given me in middle school. She inhaled once more, and brought her hands to her face as a series of sneezes overcame her “t’chiew!!! SHIEW!!! Hxght! Ow…heh…tch’iew!!!! CHIEW!!! SHIEW!! He-t’chiew!!!” “baby…bless you…wait there.” I eased her head gently off my shoulder, then went to talk to the teacher about taking her home. I had my drivers liscence as of Thursday, so I could drive. Mrs.bennett said yes, and I went back to where she was sitting, shivering, and picked up our things. “…gadget?”“what, love?”“take be hobe. t'chiew!” Link to comment
Bgrace27 Posted September 22, 2011 Share Posted September 22, 2011 aww miserable is great. please write more about them! Link to comment
Icee Posted September 23, 2011 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 I won't forget again! so i ended up with a ridiculous amount of time on my hands...and this is what became of it. 66-RaincoatOriginalDescription- WARNING F/F another Gizmo and Adrianna drabble, Gizmo's car broke down, so she had to walk 1/4 mile home in the pouring rain...Word Count-346 (a little long, i know)I opened the door, and was almost knocked back out into the rain by how warm the house seemed. i suppose, that anything would seem warm to me, after I'd just walked home in the freezing, relentless rain. “gadget?” came from the kitchen. “y-y-yeah” Adrianna wandered into our living room, and her mouth fell open. “oh, god!” she ran over to me and wrapped me up on her arms. She smelled like chocolate. “what happened?” she hadn’t let go of me yet, and now I had to sneeze“heh-hadg od…HE-ASHIEW!!!...” I leaned away from her embrace as I sneezed, and caught her shaking her head as the force bent me double. “you’re sick. Why didn’t you wear the raincoat?”“th-th-there was a raidcoat id the c-c-car?” “yeah…” "HA-ESHIEW!!!" I sniffled wetly, and she put her arm around me, walking me into the bedroom and pulling my favorite pair of pajamas out of the dresser. I let her change me like I was five years old, then wrap a blanket around me and escort me out to the couch. I was exhausted, and I blacked out right after she planted a kiss on my forehead. When I woke again, I was warm, but I felt horrible. My head pounded, I couldn’t even sniffle through my nose, and I ached all over. “Adie?” I called out my girlfriends nickname, and she appeared moments later with a mug in her hands. “hey. Feeling better?”I shook my head. “worse.” she looked at me sympathetically, then sat down next to me, pulling me onto her lap. “poor baby…” she handed me the coco, running her fingers through my long orange hair. A sudden tickle invaded my nose, and I inhaled sharply. I felt the coco being lifted from my hands, and then something soft was pressed to my nose. “HUH-ICHIEW!!! ASHIEW!!! HEH-ECHOO!!! HEH-ACHIIEEW!!!!!!” I was definetly sick. My sneezes always got more powerful when I had a cold. It was then that I realized she was holding tissues to my nose. That was embarrassing…“bless you, love” I giggled tiredly“thadks”30-JuneFandom- uh...Twilight...sorta.Description- Filming Twilight in June, Kristen's allergies start acting up during the meadow scene...Word Count-267Kristen looked appalled when she saw the set. Stepping back from it cautiously, she asked someone “are those real?” gesturing to the hundreds of flowers that dotted the meadow. The person nodded, and her mouth fell open in horror. Today was going to be hell on earth. “Cut!” Kristen sat up and pulled a tissue from her pocket, “ha-esh!!!hah-essh!!” , internaly cursing the flowers that she was forced to bury her face in again and again. Couldn’t Twilight just get filmed without the meadow scene? “are you okay?” rob asked, reaching out to feel her forehead. Kristen smiled grimly “I’b allergic to these flowers.” She sniffled, and waited for the next instruction, the tissue still held at her glowing nose. Rob smirked at her, as the director called for another take. Kristen took a deep breath, and got back into her position. One of the assistants came over and adjusted one of the flowers so that it wasn’t covering up any of the actors features. Coincidentally, that flower ended up right at her nose. She tried to brush it away, but the director was calling for action, and her nose was already tickling. The buildup began silently, with just a slight flaring of her nostrils. Just another minute, that’s how long she had to hold out to get the shot in. 30 seconds later, she realized that was impossible. She heard her breathing accelerate, and she sat up. “cut!” “ha-ESH!!! Heh-ASH!!! IISH!!! Sh…shit…ESSH!!!! Ha-IISSH!!! Heh-ESHOO!!! Ow…” “someone get Kristen some allergy meds!” the star sighed in relief, “ad baybe adother tissue?” the whole crew burst out laughing. Link to comment
Omni Posted September 25, 2011 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Very Nice stories I really like your writing style ^.^ Link to comment
Icee Posted October 4, 2011 Author Share Posted October 4, 2011 29-PurpleWord Count- 200 (due to lack of time for writing)Fandom- LostDescription- Claire seemed depressed, so charlie brought her some mysterious purple flowers...Charlie stuck his head into claires tent, some purple flowers hidden behind his back. She’d seemed so down lately, he needed to cheer her up. She was sitting with her back to him, crooning to Aaron. “Claire?” she turned to him, and a smile lit up her face. “Charlie!” Charlie pulled the flowers from behind his back, and presented them to the young blonde with a flourish. She set Aaron in his crib, and took them from him, beaming. “what are these for?” “just felt like you could use some cheering up.” She giggled, and leaned in to sniff the purple blossoms. Charlie smiled, pleased with himself. Then, she took a shuddery breath, her eyes fluttered shut, and she sneezed a quick double into her elbow. “bless you!” Claire held up a finger, as her breathing accelerated,“hh…hh…heh-shoo!! Shiew!!”“Claire?”“the-ishiew!!- they’re beautiful Charlie” “why didn’t you tell me you were allergic?”“esh!! It dever cabe up” Charlie bit his lip, and reached for the flowers. Claire started giggling through her sneezes. “I cad’t keep theb?” Charlie shook his head, and reached in his back pocket. “you can keep this, though.” He told her, producing a small packet of benedryl. Link to comment
NoV Posted October 4, 2011 Share Posted October 4, 2011 Love the latest update - keep them coming Link to comment
tma Posted October 10, 2011 Share Posted October 10, 2011 Awwww!! These are So cute. And the Lost fics- I could see those happening too. Really sweet! Link to comment
Icee Posted October 11, 2011 Author Share Posted October 11, 2011 thanks everyone!43-ContagionWord Count-334OriginalDescription- WARNING F/F Adrianna's been sick for a few days, and Gizmo, being the faithful girlfriend she is, took good care of her the whole time...The minute I woke up, to a dry coughing at my right, i knew i was sick. And I knew Adrianna would feel absoluty Awful if she knew she’d gotten me sick. So I decided that she didn’t need to know. Sitting up, I reached over to feel her forehead. I saw her lips break into a smile, and then her hazel eyes opened, staring straight into mine. I giggled, and leaned in to kiss her. She sighed, and kissed me back. “feeling better, love?” I asked when she pulled away“much. Thanks to you…” she leaned in again, and I snickered. “I do have stuff to do today…”“mmmm like what?” I held up my finger, leaned away, and caught two, wet “heh- Ashoo!!”s in the crook of my elbow. “bless you!” Adrianna raised her eyebrow at me. I sniffled, and winced at how sick it sounded. “are you o-…h…wait…t’CHIEW!!! *sniff* are you ok?” I grasped at that straw, trying to get some attention off myself“be? lets talk about you…” almost too fast for me eyes to follow, I was flat on my back, and she was on top of me, her hand brushing my bangs back to check my temperature. I sighed, my plan foiled. “oh my god…hang on, I’ll be right back!” she called, running out of the room. I closed my eyes, and waited until she returned. Suddenly, from the bathroom, “t’shiew!!! Chiew!!! Oh...sh…shi…t’CHIEW!!!!! ugh!!!” I giggled, which caused me to start coughing. Adrianna came back in, clucking her tongue, thermometer in hand. I grumbled, and opened my mouth, holding it under my tongue. Then, the tickle invaded my nose again, and I felt my eyes flutter shut. My chest began heaving as I tried to hold back, just long enough for the thermometer to beep. I heard Adie snicker in the background, and then the plastic thermometer was removed from my mouth, and she pressed a wad of tissues into my hand, just in time. “ha-ESHoo!!! Huh-nxght!! K’shiew!!! Ha-ISHOO!!!! …” i sighed. this was gonna be interesting. Link to comment
and36 Posted October 11, 2011 Share Posted October 11, 2011 Awesome stuff! Keep up the good work! I look foward to more adventures with Gizmo! Link to comment
Icee Posted October 14, 2011 Author Share Posted October 14, 2011 so you guys like Gizmo, huh? well, she's got a bit more of a back story then just Adrianna...37-ChocolateWord Count-306OriginalDescription-Gizmo somehow ends up neighbors with Amanda, who betrayed her a long time ago. when Amanda calls, needing come flour to finish a cake...I knocked on the door, butterflies racing around my stomach. I’d always wondered what would happen if I were to see her again. I heard her dogs go off, heard her yell for them to be quiet, then ask who it was. “Gizmo!” I called back. Silence. Then she started hearding her dogs into the bedroom, it sounded like she was muttering about something “come on in!” Gulping down on the knot in my stomach, I pulled open the door, nearly breaking a hole in the bag of flour I was holding. She looked the same as I remembered her, except for the dot of chocolate on her nose and cheek. “hey miss gizmo” she came over and wrapped her arms around me. I hugged her back, knowing that this meant she had forgiven me. when she pulled away, I held up the flour. “what are you baking?”“oh, I’m making a chocolate cake. Double layer. I could’ve sworn I had another bag of flour…you’re a lifesaver. Hey, if you don’t have anywhere to be…you could stay and help me.” I felt my face break into a smile as I handed her the ingredient she’d asked for. It seemed, though, that I’d neglected to zip the bag properly, when she took it, all the flour spilled out in a poof on the floor. “fuck!!” we both shouted, as a white dust enveloped us. I couldn’t see anything. Suddenly, she grabbed my wrist, and lead me outside. Right before we got out, I heard the first “HA-mmpph!!” muffled slightly by her elbow. “shit…” she closed the door behind us, then leaned against the wall, sneezing uncontrollably. I began brushing off her clothes, knowing that was just making it worse. “sor…sorry…ha-ishooo!!! Huh…ashiew!!! AISHIEW!!!!” I giggled, and handed her a tissue from the pack I carried in my pocket. I knocked on the door, butterflies racing around my stomach. I’d always wondered what would happen if I were to see her again. I heard her dogs go off, heard her yell for them to be quiet, then ask who it was. “Gizmo!” I called back. Silence. Then she started hearding her dogs into the bedroom, it sounded like she was muttering about something “come on in!” Gulping down on the knot in my stomach, I pulled open the door, nearly breaking a hole in the bag of flour I was holding. She looked the same as I remembered her, except for the dot of chocolate on her nose and cheek. “hey miss gizmo” she came over and wrapped her arms around me. I hugged her back, knowing that this meant she had forgiven me. when she pulled away, I held up the flour. “what are you baking?”“oh, I’m making a chocolate cake. Double layer. I could’ve sworn I had another bag of flour…you’re a lifesaver. Hey, if you don’t have anywhere to be…you could stay and help me.” I felt my face break into a smile as I handed her the ingredient she’d asked for. It seemed, though, that I’d neglected to zip the bag properly, when she took it, all the flour spilled out in a poof on the floor. “fuck!!” we both shouted, as a white dust enveloped us. I couldn’t see anything. Suddenly, she grabbed my wrist, and lead me outside. Right before we got out, I heard the first “HA-mmpph!!” muffled slightly by her elbow. “shit…” she closed the door behind us, then leaned against the wall, sneezing uncontrollably. I began brushing off her clothes, knowing that was just making it worse. “sor…sorry…ha-ishooo!!! Huh…ashiew!!! AISHIEW!!!!” I giggled, and handed her a tissue from the pack I carried in my pocket. Link to comment
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