Animeeze Posted July 10, 2012 Posted July 10, 2012 (edited) Hi guys, here is the last chapter of The Great Sneeze Detective. I just want to say thank you to everyone who reads my stories and looks at my art, I appreciate it so much I plan on continuing to write, but as The Great Sneeze Detective ends, another series will begin. I hope that you guys like it, comments, constructive criticism all greatly appreciated, thank you so much!-----------------------------The Great Sneeze Detective (4/4)Retrieved from the Case File: Super BeamSection 4I regret to inform you, first of all, that this is my final entry in this journal, for complications that you shall be made aware of shortly. As I diverge from the latest complication, I shall return to my bosoms heaving from my tight top at the conclusion of my last tickly, teasing, climactic, and relieving sneeze and sending a pepper shaker full of sneezy and irritating pepper granules spewing onto the floor and entirely around the busty Stacy Howard and I. As my initial reaction was that of fright, I came to a realization. If Stacy is made to sneeze by this pepper that I so clumsily spewed everywhere, then my reasons for being here would be met nonetheless. As I focused on controlling my oh-so-tickled nostrils, I felt two warm hands gently run along my bosoms, barely contained in the hanging remnants of my lacy black brassiere—the gentle tickle of touch against my own large, quivering bosoms sent a tingle down my spine. I met a stern glare in Stacy’s eyes informing me that she was out for answers and that my previous sneeze was only the first of many torturous and teasing sneezy tickles.Stacy swayed those tantalizing hips in my direction as she pushed her sleek glasses up from the brim of her dainty but somewhat sharp nose; she was coming in for the kill. This was a miscalculation, a severe one at that. I was too lax, too careless in my research, and this buxom and autonomous mogul was so hungry for wealth that she took the liberty to exploit any and all weaknesses of her enemy. And, I am ashamed to admit, she had me pegged for each of my weaknesses as I felt those warm hands sink into the warm, soft, and jiggling pillows that were my large pepper-covered and heaving breasts.“Now, Ms. Fox, I would like to ask you a question…” The sneering woman said confidently as her hands gently squeezed my bosoms, “I just want to let you know, your efforts are fruitless. If you think that you can take this company down, you are mistaken…I have friends in high places, you know.” Stacy then chuckled and gave my own big breasts and quick jiggle as she turned and walked to a cabinet in the room, leaving my tickled nose twitching as my dangling and wobbling chest sent gentle and thin streams of itchy, sneezy pepper dancing into my nostrils. Clearly, Stacy thought that I was here for quite a different reason. I began to speak but was stifled by what I was seeing before me.As Stacy reached into the cabinet and calmly removed a vial filled with a vibrant, bright blue powder, she spoke once more, each word more frightening than the last. “Ms. Fox, you see, you are nothing more than an experiment here. You have stumbled into something way above your own self and your own position. You see, Cape Incorporated secretly manufactures bio-weaponry, as I am sure you have known already through your own research, that is why you are here, no?” I began to shake my head from side to side as Stacy completely ignored me through her own arrogance. “I would like to assure you that although illegal, Cape Incorporated’s actions have not gone unnoticed. Could you be so unaware as to think that Chicago’s largest corporation would not have partners in the city’s police force? Money talks, my sexy detective…”A pang of complete shock rocketed through my body, did I hear correctly? The police force was keeping the illegal actions due to a bribe? My hope in the goodness of our cities finest dropped rapidly as the busty and powerful woman walked over to me, bringing the vial of bright blue powder almost directly under my very sensitive and sneezy nostrils. “Now, Ms. Fox, you are an experiment, the first in line to test our latest creation…the common cold. Well, not the common cold, but a genetically enhanced and lifelong cold that causes severe…sneeziness shall we say. In wars, if the enemy is sneezing, they are not going to be fighting. It is our first human testing, be proud! You should consider this a privilege…”In my hopelessness, all I could do was muster a cringe as Stacy placed her fingers under my chin, preparing to blow the tickly, teasy powder right up my already tickled and twitching sensitive nostrils, and just as I thought she was going to spare me, she blew every bit of the tickly, sneezy blue powder directly into my twitching and over-sensitive sneezy nostrils. My eyes widened as I seemingly lost all control over my madly twitching and tickled nostrils. It felt as though each and every grain of powder was taking its time to gently tickle and tease the sensitive depths of my sneezy nostrils. “Ahahahaaa…aaahhhaaaa….” My nose wanted so badly to sneeze, to release every ounce of the tickly and sneezy irritants dancing and swirling gently in my sensitive and twitching nostrils, but it seemed as though my desperately sneezy nose was caught in a dramatic and sneezy buildup as my bosoms heaved against my lacy black brassiere. Stacy just watched me with an expression of both excitement and confusion. She was not sure if her powder was working. Something was happening to me, as the sneeze build up in my nose, I felt a seething power building up within me.“Aaahahhaa….aahahahaaaaaaaaa…aaaaaaaahahhahahaaaaaaaaa….aahahhaaaa….” My twitching nostrils gently flared as the powder swirled and teased oh-so-gently inside of my sensitive and sneezy nose. I could tell that Stacy was unhappy with the progress as she gently pulled a feather from her jiggling cleavage. “Sneeze, dammit, sneeze!” She surprisingly furiously yelled as if she needed the process to hurry. I am not sure if she was trying to avoid something, or was just impatient. Either way, the feather gently teased around the slightly reddened and quivering nostrils of my desperate and sneezy landmine nose. As I felt the long and sharp ends of the feather’s soft plumes individually swipe against the sensitive depths of my right nostril with a tickle so teasing, so gentle, so tantalizing, my nose lurched as its only option was to release the enormous building sneeze. My huge breasts gave an enormous heave that greatly strained my tearing black brassiere. “Ahahahahaaaaaaa….aahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa…aahhahahaa...ahh…ahhahaa…ahahhahaaa…*sniff*….ahhh…aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh…aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH…AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH-CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”The enormous sneeze was utterly relieving but extremely short lived as a violent explosion rocked the room, sending the pole that I was tied to collapsing and releasing me, while Stacy was sent careening backwards until she was free from my vision. I felt a power pulse through my veins, completely directed into my nostrils, my nostrils! They were…sneezy…so sneezy! The intense tickle surprised me with such a desperation that with a lurch I could only bare to sneeze.“Aahahhaa…aaahhahaa…aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa…AAAAAAHH-CCCCCCCHHOOO!!! AAAHHH-CCCHHOOOO!!!!” I tried to rub the underside of my nostril with my finger and I reached for something to cover my nose until I accidentally bumped my hand into the nearby wall. I heard a crash. I turned as I saw my arm elbow deep into the wall, unscathed. This power. This curse!! I slammed my fists into the ground and screamed as I released another sneeze. “NO, NO, NO, NO, NO!!!” I yelled as an intense tickle filled my nostrils once more. “AAAHHHH-CCCHHOOO!!! AHHHH-CCHHHOOOOO!!” My mind raced as that damn powder seemed to fill my mind, revealing to me the truth. What Stacy had told me became my fixation. Corruption cursed me. Corruption of what is supposed to be good, just. Where is the justice?I took care of Stacy Howard, she is incapacitated. Her bio-weaponry? The plans and every ounce of the wretched powder are mine. I will experiment. I will improve. I will not fail. Super Beam is no longer my mission, she is my enemy. Justice will pay for what has happened to me.At the bottom of the page lay a wicked signature.“The Sneezestress”Officer Burrows looked at Chief Palmer as the two shared mutual and sickening fright. They both had the same thought in mind, and without hesitation the morning papers were printed with a new headline.“Super Beam, We Need You!”The EndI hope that you liked it! Edited July 10, 2012 by Animeeze
NoV Posted July 10, 2012 Posted July 10, 2012 Liked it? Of course!!! Gigantic sneezes and large breasts are undeniably the things heaven is made of
Animeeze Posted July 13, 2012 Author Posted July 13, 2012 Liked it? Of course!!! Gigantic sneezes and large breasts are undeniably the things heaven is made of Thank you so much! Haha, I would have to wholeheartedly agree, my friend XD
dontnoqit Posted July 15, 2012 Posted July 15, 2012 You, sir, have a gift. Bountiful boobage and sensual sneezes are your gift to the world.
Sneeze999 Posted July 20, 2012 Posted July 20, 2012 Fantastic! Incredible! AMAZING! Can't wait to see what you do next!
Animeeze Posted August 11, 2012 Author Posted August 11, 2012 Thank you so much for reading, big buildups are so extremely awesome! Haha
megacycle Posted August 11, 2012 Posted August 11, 2012 Sweet story, Animeeze. You just know how to write those long tantalizing build ups that I love so much.I can't wait to read your next sneezey tale.
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