girl sneezes on the subway ( Female)

[klaralein_91]

This is my first post on this forum so be kind! I know, all newcomers make mistakes, and will do anything in the future to avoid them!! I am also happy if you have some tips concerning my style of writing and about the subtile things of a sneeze observation. I am from germany, so my english isn't probably all that good, but i hope you will understand it anyway! My observation took place on a subway train, that I took yesterday morning( because I post this topic after midnight ) and it was a particular thing to follow the reactions of passengers and of the girl!!

I got up very early and went quickly to the bus station, because I haven't got a car and I work at in a flower shop that located at the other side of the town. So I took my bus, that arrived around 7.00 am and arrived at the subway station to catch my train to arrive at work on time. There were a lot of people at the underground station, and I usually have got problems to take a seat because it is rare that there were some free ones. So I was standing there waiting for my train and playing with my iPhone. Looking around from time to time, i noticed a good looking girl, around 19 years beside me. She attracted my attention because she was sniffling regularly in a rhythm of 10 seconds. I put my iPhone back into my purse and looked at her. She was playing with her iPhone. As usual , i will describe her a little bit. She has got long blonde hair, probably dyed, a nice long nose, a small face, pale complexion, and some freckles around her nose and her cheeks. A nice underlip piercing completed her beautiful face. She was skinny, and measured probably around 1.75 m. Her clothing was not all that special. Some black jeans, brown sneakers, a black sweater jacket, and below a pink tank top, that was short enough to cover her belly button but barely covered her belly, you know, these kinds of tank tops you can see 2 inches of bare skin. A little messenger bag completed her daily outfit. Her sniffling sounded very congested, like she has a bad cold or an allergy. From time to time she put her forefinger under her nose to keep her runny nose under control, then she wiped it on her jacket. It seems that she has no tissues with her - good luck!!! The train arrived and i tried get a seat near these special girl - a rare possibility for me to observe her behavior. My wish came true and i got a sear in front of her. She put her messenger back at the other free seat beside her and started playing around with her phone, sniffling constantly and wiping her nose with her finger. She was totally unaware that she was disturbing passengers with her constant sniffling, but nobody seems to have interest to say her to blow her nose.

Five minutes later, she suddenly interrupt her occupation and got that nice pre sneeze expression that you probably know all. She could stifle the sneeze in time and sniffed a little bit more after it. But finally the feeling of sneezing overcome her and she sneezed four times in a row. The first sneeze overtook her suddenly and she just enough time to sneeze into her elbow. Eitshhhh!!! Then the second sneeze. She sneezed into her hand. Aithshhhhh!!! The third and the fourth sneeze were successively done into her her right hand. Eitshhhhhh!!! Aitshhhh!!! She covered her nose with her right hand and sniffled wetly to return what she sneezed out. I could really hear the congestion and i started to have the creeps. Then she wiped her hand on her jacket and continued playing with her phone, sniffling even louder than she had done before. She continued to wipe her nose with her forefinger, put her phone down again and began to rummage around in there messenger bag, to find some tissues to wipe her nose. But she had no success today, she probably forgot to put some tissues in, poor girl was probably in a rush. A few minutes later as we were approaching the town center , she got up and got out of the subway train at the next stop. !!! She walked away in a really energetic way, wiping her with her finger and last thing i could see of her was that she rushed to the station dairy, probably to buy cigarettes or tissues.... Finally that was a great start into a new day and i was lucky to have had the possibility to participate to such a nice spectacle.

More to come if you are satisfied about my observation or if enough people would like that i write an other, similar experienced one.

Byeee!!!!

[tk2927]

Nice! Sounds like a good train ride! I'm curious what you meant that when you heard her congestion it gave you the creeps. It sounded like you enjoyed the whole experience, so maybe you were searching for a different word or phrase? Your English is very good but definitely continue to read the topics of the forum. It will help the slang and rhythm of the language come easier.

[Joal 555]

Train rides are great opportunities for good obs

And welcome to the forum!

[00Phantomas00]

I loved your story !

It's beautiful story with great precision.

Personaly, i really love !

Thank you.

[smooshi]

I just was just wondering... WHY MY GODDAMN COUNTRY HAS NO SUBWAYS???

Welcome, by the way. Nice obs, and your English is really good, no need to worry.

[Hankysneeze]

Sounds lovley! Love the fact that she ran to the shop for tissues

[sexyhankysneeze]

This is my first post on this forum so be kind! I know, all newcomers make mistakes, and will do anything in the future to avoid them!! I am also happy if you have some tips concerning my style of writing and about the subtile things of a sneeze observation. I am from germany, so my english isn't probably all that good, but i hope you will understand it anyway! My observation took place on a subway train, that I took yesterday morning( because I post this topic after midnight ) and it was a particular thing to follow the reactions of passengers and of the girl!!

I got up very early and went quickly to the bus station, because I haven't got a car and I work at in a flower shop that located at the other side of the town. So I took my bus, that arrived around 7.00 am and arrived at the subway station to catch my train to arrive at work on time. There were a lot of people at the underground station, and I usually have got problems to take a seat because it is rare that there were some free ones. So I was standing there waiting for my train and playing with my iPhone. Looking around from time to time, i noticed a good looking girl, around 19 years beside me. She attracted my attention because she was sniffling regularly in a rhythm of 10 seconds. I put my iPhone back into my purse and looked at her. She was playing with her iPhone. As usual , i will describe her a little bit. She has got long blonde hair, probably dyed, a nice long nose, a small face, pale complexion, and some freckles around her nose and her cheeks. A nice underlip piercing completed her beautiful face. She was skinny, and measured probably around 1.75 m. Her clothing was not all that special. Some black jeans, brown sneakers, a black sweater jacket, and below a pink tank top, that was short enough to cover her belly button but barely covered her belly, you know, these kinds of tank tops you can see 2 inches of bare skin. A little messenger bag completed her daily outfit. Her sniffling sounded very congested, like she has a bad cold or an allergy. From time to time she put her forefinger under her nose to keep her runny nose under control, then she wiped it on her jacket. It seems that she has no tissues with her - good luck!!! The train arrived and i tried get a seat near these special girl - a rare possibility for me to observe her behavior. My wish came true and i got a sear in front of her. She put her messenger back at the other free seat beside her and started playing around with her phone, sniffling constantly and wiping her nose with her finger. She was totally unaware that she was disturbing passengers with her constant sniffling, but nobody seems to have interest to say her to blow her nose.

Five minutes later, she suddenly interrupt her occupation and got that nice pre sneeze expression that you probably know all. She could stifle the sneeze in time and sniffed a little bit more after it. But finally the feeling of sneezing overcome her and she sneezed four times in a row. The first sneeze overtook her suddenly and she just enough time to sneeze into her elbow. Eitshhhh!!! Then the second sneeze. She sneezed into her hand. Aithshhhhh!!! The third and the fourth sneeze were successively done into her her right hand. Eitshhhhhh!!! Aitshhhh!!! She covered her nose with her right hand and sniffled wetly to return what she sneezed out. I could really hear the congestion and i started to have the creeps. Then she wiped her hand on her jacket and continued playing with her phone, sniffling even louder than she had done before. She continued to wipe her nose with her forefinger, put her phone down again and began to rummage around in there messenger bag, to find some tissues to wipe her nose. But she had no success today, she probably forgot to put some tissues in, poor girl was probably in a rush. A few minutes later as we were approaching the town center , she got up and got out of the subway train at the next stop. !!! She walked away in a really energetic way, wiping her with her finger and last thing i could see of her was that she rushed to the station dairy, probably to buy cigarettes or tissues.... Finally that was a great start into a new day and i was lucky to have had the possibility to participate to such a nice spectacle.

More to come if you are satisfied about my observation or if enough people would like that i write an other, similar experienced one.

Byeee!!!!

you should've offered her your hanky, that would be nice

[count tiszula]

This is a wonderful obs, and I'm sure everyone would love to read more of the same. All that messiness is excellent; it's so nice when people are totally unprepared for the inevitability of a really good sneeze, and have to sniff back the lovely product of their naughty sneezes.

Und willkommen!

[NoV]

Wonderful obs - the details really add to the suspense of the inevitable sneezes... Four sneezes qualifies as a fit in my book And welcome to the forum

[guynextdoor]

Nice observation

[Danny]

Sehr schön- cheers d

[Lime]

you should've offered her your hanky, that would be nice

Totally. and then you would've gotten to see a noseblow too sounds like it would've been messy

[Anonymouse]

Oooh yummy. I hate hate HATE public transportation but I think I could manage it if I got to see some of the lovely stuff you see when you ride the subway.

I think maybe for "creeps" you mean "goosebumps" (lol kind of a stupid phrase, I know) or "chills." Either way from the context of the situation I think I understood what you were trying to convey.

I think it's cool you work at a flower shop! If you ever see any good obs there definitely share those too! Thanks and welcome again!

[sexyhankysneeze]

you should've offered her your hanky, that would be nice

Totally. and then you would've gotten to see a noseblow too sounds like it would've been messy

yummy

[Anonymouse]

you should've offered her your hanky, that would be nice

Totally. and then you would've gotten to see a noseblow too sounds like it would've been messy

yummy

lol assuming she actually had a handkerchief on her. At least it led to desperately rummaging around in her bag before hurrying off to supposedly get some tissues.

[shy guy]

I loved your obs. The detailed descriptions were beautiful. I certainly hope we'll be hearing more from you soon!

[sexyhankysneeze]

you should've offered her your hanky, that would be nice

Totally. and then you would've gotten to see a noseblow too sounds like it would've been messy

yummy

lol assuming she actually had a handkerchief on her. At least it led to desperately rummaging around in her bag before hurrying off to supposedly get some tissues.

and that, my friends, is exactly why the handkerchief is far superior in every way when it comes to nose blowing

[Hankysneeze]

One of the best obs thankyou

[BootyBurgers]

Great obs! I loved it!