lilyjames28 Posted April 10, 2014 Share Posted April 10, 2014 So keep in mind this is my first story I'll only keep going if you guys likeWell..here goes everything...“hsz'Gnsshkxt” Aaron groaned as he muffled a sneeze into a pillow. His head was pounding and he groaned. Cool fingers brushed across his forehead and he leaned into the touch. Suddenly his eyes shot open. The sudden light made his nose twitch and set him off again. This time a couple of tissues were pressed over his nose and mouth. He moaned again and blew his sore nose into the tissues that were still over his nose. He opened his eyes slower this time, learning his lesson from before. A concerned looking Hazel peered back at him, her face set in a worried expression."Hey Aaron, you okay hon?" she asked him, her voice soft."I..I- heh-hzs'Gnshkxt....eh...he'Gnkxt!" he sneezed again, this time back into the pillow. He pulled back to see that what he had been thinking as a pillow was Hazel's stomach. He turned red and immediately began to apologize, only to be interrupted by a cough that seemes to go on forever. He tried to sit up but he felt dizzy. Hazel noticed his attempts to get up and gently helped him up. Supporting his back and rubbing soothing circles on his back. Once the coughing subsided, Aaron felt exhausted. His head was spinning and it didnt help that he didnt know where he was. God, Hazel must be so disgusted he thought. He snuck a glance at her. She was looking at him with the same worried expression. He sighed. "I am so sorry. I didn't realize I was sneezing on you. Its okay if you want to break up. I'll understand." Great. He had asked her to be his girlfriend for one day and hed already messed it up. He closed her eyes and waited for her to get up quickly and leave and was surprised when he felt her gentle hands pulling him into a hug."Silly Aaron. You can't help sneezing and I don't care if you sneeze on me. It doesn't bother me. You're sick. I'm not going to leave my poor boyfriend all alone when hes sick. Besides, it looks like you're going to be stuck here for a while. They've called in a weather warning." Hazel said and she held him tight."T'Gnkxt . Eksch'Hischu. Heh...haa..." he stifled into her shoulder again. "Sorry" he moaned."Oh sweetie its okay. Now that you're awake, why dont we get you some drugs and into bed?" Hazel cooed. "You fell asleep in the car and I didn't want to wake you up for directions. I somehow got you into my apartment and I was about to get you some medication but you crashed on my couch." Aaron nodded but he really didnt want to leave her warm embrace. She is so good to me. I love her so much. Should I tell her? Nah she'd really freak out and leave. Slowly, he let her go and sat back up, she got up and helped him up. Once she made sure he was steady she led him to her bedroom."You wanna take a shower babe? It'll clear that nose of yours." she added with a kiss to his nose."I'd love to...but you have to come with me." he said feeling a bit bold. She glanced at him before stripping down to her bra and underwear. She smirked as his jaw dropped."Your turn." she said with a smirk. Link to comment
Melody Posted April 10, 2014 Share Posted April 10, 2014 Ooo this is a great first story! It's cute of course you should continue! Link to comment
Lucyana Posted April 10, 2014 Share Posted April 10, 2014 Yes you should totally continue, but only if you want to. You shouldn't do it just coz people like it, you should do it because you want to! Link to comment
irishsneezeandkisses Posted April 10, 2014 Share Posted April 10, 2014 Yes, PLEASE continue! You're a really talented writer; I'm already falling in love with Aaron and Hazel! Link to comment
Liv Posted April 12, 2015 Share Posted April 12, 2015 This is really good. I hope you continue Link to comment
levinelover Posted April 12, 2015 Share Posted April 12, 2015 Please continue! I love the characters already!! Link to comment
Turtles Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 Oh this is adorable! So cute! Loved it XD I can't wait to read more of your stories! Link to comment
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