SpookyScarySkeleton Posted April 15, 2014 Share Posted April 15, 2014 (edited) So hey guys you're probly wondering.What even are you doing Deathy, you've never written straight couple stories to this day.Well today is that day ladies and gents.With Female sneezes , Male sneezes, allergies and colds to please everyone First, this will be just a small intruduction with no sneezing.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The wind howled on this warm spring evening.The snow had melted leaving little rivers of water with puddles of mud everywhere.Clarisse walked on this fine evening, her hair as black as the night skies dancing in the wind.Her icey blue eyes sparkling off of the moonlight.Clarisse heard the wind picking up voices along with it and the owl's hooting.She was going to see her friend adventurous friend Alexis.As she arrived at the campsite inside the dark forest, Alexis' blonde hair was highlighted by the moonlight.Clarisse couldn't help admiring the handsome lad although she new that he probly only liked her as a friend, nothing more and nothing less.Alexis thought that seing grass was nice as they had snow for weeks on end but he wasn't so excited about the flowers blooming since his allergies would kick his arse.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Notes : I know sucky intruduction ;w;. I used my descriptive skills okay.Thanks.should I continue? just got like inspiration to write something so uh Edited April 15, 2014 by DeathNoteOwner Link to comment
Merc_With_A_Mouth_69 Posted April 15, 2014 Share Posted April 15, 2014 Yeah! Continue! Interested to see where you're going to take this. Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted April 15, 2014 Author Share Posted April 15, 2014 (edited) Uhm thanks ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Alexis took Clarisse by the hand as a light tint of pink brushed her cheeks, "thank god it's night time" she thought.He led her over to their tent and they cuddled.Clarisse began giving frequent sniffles as the night went on.Around 2am, Clarisse had fallen asleep it's been hours .. cuddled up against Alexis.The ice eyed girl cupped her hands around her mouth and nose then sneezed "Itchiii Itchiii" .Alexis mumbled a sleepy "Bless you. getting sick?" with a raspy sleepy voice.Clarisse rubbed her nose with her index finger then said "Maybe so".They fell back asleep...They awoke the next morning, the sunlight's rays bursting through the tent.Clarisse stayed under the covers for a moment while Alexis got up, out of the tent then his teal eyes caught the sun and he sneezed uncovered twice "APSHEWWW APSHEWWW"Clarisse exclaimed "Holy frick, bless you ! "Alexis sniffled sheepishly and replied with a congested "Thankgs"Clarisse got out of the tent to eat a cereal bar while sitting on a log beside Alexis and he ate a peanut butter&Jelly sandwich.They chatted between bites.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------Several weeks later....The flowers were blooming and again Clarisse and Alexis were at their spot in the forest, except this time the small medow was blooming with pollen filled flowers.Just as they arrived to the medow.. Alexis already began to feel his teal eyes itch and he rubbed them in frustration.Clarisse looked at him then he pretended he wasn't rubbing his eyes just the past moment.They sat under a shady tree to keep cool and they read for hours.Suddenly, Alexis couldn't keep his itchy runny nose under control anymore.. he burst out with allergic stifled sneezes against his wrist "Hchnx't Hchnx't Hchxn't Hcnxh't"Clarisse pet his blonde hair and said "d'awh Bless you" she wiped his allergic tears gently.She lay down on him, her head against his stomach and she read while he peeked over her and looked at the words.A few minutes passed then she felt his breathing hitch and then he gave another explosion "Itchieeeeew" he sneezed uncovered over her.Clarisse faked being digust "Ew Alexis, cover your mouth jerk"Alexis chuckled and flicked her forehead then said "Hey race you up the tree shorty"They both got up, Alexis standing tall at 6ft while Clarisse was petite and 5'3ft.. she climbed the tree more quick after she had failed attempts to get up the first branch but quit she did not.Finally, Alexis was at the top .. the last branch then he sneezed uncovered downwords "Hitchiiiieww APSHEEWWW ASHOOO" he sniffled.Clarisse pouted and said "Cover your mouth brat, you're spraying me."Alexis cocked his eyebrows then asked "Say it ! don't spray it? right?"Clarisse shook her head and exclaimed "Idiot"They sat atop the last branch for a few hours...------------------------------------------------------------------------------Notes : heh. maybe this will be an okay story. no yes. Edited April 15, 2014 by DeathNoteOwner Link to comment
Hibiscus Posted April 15, 2014 Share Posted April 15, 2014 I totally ship Alexis and Clarisse, their relationship is so cute! Haha-"Say it, Don't spray it!" Hey! That could be the title! Anyway, it's a definite "yes" from me (I feel like an x-factor judge), please continue this, Dino! Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted April 15, 2014 Author Share Posted April 15, 2014 So uhm here's a grammar check and stuff part like the last.sorry;w; new content soon.Thank you AmyParda for beta-ing <3-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------As Alexis took Clarisse by the hand, a light tint of pink brushed her cheeks. "Thank god it's night time," she thought.He led her over to their tent, and they cuddled. Clarisse began giving frequent sniffles as the night went on. Around 2am, Clarisse had fallen asleep. It had been hours that she was cuddled up against Alexis. The ice-eyed girl cupped her hands around her mouth and nose and sneezed, "Itchiii, Itchiii!"Alexis mumbled a sleepy, "Bless you. getting sick?" His voice rasped. Clarisse rubbed her nose with her index finger and said, "Maybe so".Soon after, they fell back asleep. They awoke the next morning, the sunlight's rays bursting through the tent.Clarisse stayed beneath the covers for a moment while Alexis got up. As he exited the tent, his teal eyes caught the sun and he sneezed, uncovered, twice, "APSHEWWW! APSHEWWW!""Holy frick, bless you! " Clarisse exclaimed. Alexis sniffled sheepishly and replied with a congested-sounding, "Thanks."Clarisse got out of the tent to eat a cereal bar, while sitting on a log beside Alexis, and he ate a peanut butter & Jelly sandwich. They chatted between bites.Several weeks later, the flowers were blooming and again, Clarisse and Alexis were at their spot in the forest. All was the same, except now the small meadow was blooming with flowers. As they arrived at the meadow, Alexis had already begun to feel his eyes itch, and he rubbed at them in frustration. Clarisse looked at him, pretending he hadn't been rubbing his eyes just the past moment. They sat under a shady tree to keep cool and they read for hours.Alexis's nose was itchy, and running, and after a time he couldn't keep it under control anymore. He burst with allergic stifles against his wrist, "Hchnx't! Hchnx't! Hchxn't!! Hcnxh't!!"Clarisse pet his blonde hair, saying, "D'awh, Bless you." She wiped his allergic tears gently away, and she laid down on him, her head against his stomach. She read while he peeked over her and looked at the words.A few minutes had passed when she felt his breathing hitch, and he gave another explosive, "Itchieeeeew!!!" uncovered, over her. Clarisse faked disgust."Ew, Alexis, cover your mouth, Jerk." she said. Alexis chuckled and flicked her forehead, saying, "Hey! Race you up the tree, shorty."They both stood, Alexis at 6ft, while Clarisse was a petite 5'3". She climbed the tree more quickly after her first failed attempts to mount the first branch, but she did not quit. Finally, Alexis had reached the topmost branch, when he sneezed again, uncovered and downwards. "Hitchiiiieww! APSHEEWWW! ASHOOO!!" He sniffled. Clarisse pouted and said, "Cover your mouth, you brat! You're spraying me."Alexis arched an eyebrow, retorting, "Say it, don't spray it, right?"Clarisse shook her head, and called him an idiot under her breath. They sat there, atop the last branch, for a few hours.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------notes : Sorry. i'll write something new sometime. Link to comment
quantumsneeze42 Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 Ooh I am loving this story! Please continue Link to comment
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