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Hi this is my first story kinda nervous o///o

So here are the characters

Slash Vargas:shaggy brown hair,light green eyes,and tan skin

Other Details:5'8,lanky build,shy

Bio:He grew up in Italy so of course he would be Italian! Supporting a family of 3 brothers was hard work when your the oldest...So when they grew up the familia stuck together

Age:22

Jesse Gonzalez:pitch black hair that goes over his eyes,light red eyes,and pale skin

Other Details:6'4,slightly muscular build,outgoing

Bio:life was always hard for Jesse.Growing up in a very religious town is hard when they think your the 'diablo' and should be put on a stake to die.Soon Jesse decided to leave and go somewhere else...

Age:24

Alistair Jones:fire red hair,dark green eyes,and fare skin (in the middle between tan and pale)

Other details:6'0,lanky build as well,confined

Bio:Canada~the refreshing air,beautiful sights.Alistair never got any of that instead he had to support 5 brothers and feed them!It was a hard life until one phone call changed everything....

Age:23

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*Scream*

Slash sat up quickly panting and sobbing "h-ha-Hak'TSHEW J-Jesse"he slurred through sobs and hiccups.Jesse ran out of his room towards the scream.He opened the door quickly on to find a heartbreaking sight.Slash sitting on his knees crying,tears running down his face quickly,flushed cheeks making him look more miserable 'his fever must be causing his nightmares'Jesse thought sadly pulling the smaller male into an embrace feeling every shake and sob.It warmed his heart to know that he was helping; instead of Alistair should have been here instead of him...

TBC? :3

Posted

Yee continue it.

pretty please make the parts longer though :)

I catch the characters personalities but just for a few minutes.

Posted

Okay ill make it longer :3

wow i didn't think anyone would look at this

slight Language warning

"ey what did you do to Slash?!"a drunk Alistair slurred coming into the room;beer bottle in hand 'best boyfriend for him'Jesse thought sarcastically "im taking of your boyfriend that you should be watching"Jesse growled.Slash on the other hand was reaching out towards his boyfriend "a-Alistair h-hak'tschew"he sneezed softly crying anew.Alistair was waaay beyond furious "give me Slash Jesse and ye won't get hurt"he seethed cracking his knuckles menacingly "try me"came the smart as hell reply.The brawl started things getting thrown as well as punches "s-stop it!"Slash yelled trying to stop the fight.But of course karma is a whore..the taller men didn't notice him which ended up with him getting punched in the eye.and guess who did it.Jesse (yeah you thought Alistair i know that :3) looked in horror as Slash backed up holding his eye 'th-the one thing i never wanted to do'he thought guilt gnawing at him like a puppy German Shepard gnawing on a chew toy (hey i got a new dog i thought about it).Alistair smirked before turning towards Slash a sad look on his face now on "come on baby lets get ye something to stop the swelling"he cooed gently taking him in his arms.Jesse sighed feeling worse than more he thought about it "h-hey Jesse?"Slash's meek voice brought him out of his daze "yeah?"he asked looking at the boy with sad eyes "i-i know it wasn't your fault so don't worry about it ok" "b-but-"

"like i said i-its n-ha hak'tshchew not your fault"he sneezed wetly spraying his palm.Jesse could feel himself slightly become hot 'damn me and my fetish'he thought smiling at Slash "okay if you say so"

TBC later

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Previously

"like i said i-its n-ha hak'tshchew not your fault"he sneezed wetly spraying his palm.Jesse could feel himself slightly become hot 'damn me and my fetish'he thought smiling at Slash "okay if you say so"

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Alistair was passed pissed as Slash's eye became purple "Alistair?"he asked looking at his boyfriend with worried eyes "are you okay?"he finished hugging him 'damn it i can't lose it on him'Alistair thought hugging him back "yeah lass im fine it's just that i can't help you while your hurt,that and its my fault" it all was his fault.Just as Slash was about to reply his older brothers came in "whats wrong with you fratello?"Feliciano asked "are you really that much of an idiota!"Romano yelled smacking his forehead "be quiet you two!so what really happened?"Marco asked getting slightly frustrated "nothing just a little fig-h-hak'tschew fight *snrk*"Slash finished lamely as the brothers chorused a worried "salute"lets just say it randomly ran in the family "come on fratellino lets get you to bed"Romano said picking Slash 'whats with everyone picking me up today'he thought glumly as he was placed into said bed.Jesse had left to clear his mind of what had happened "hey buddy were closing"the bartender said still cleaning;with great reluctance he left hiccuping as the rain started to pour down in buckets "if only i hadn't started that fight with Alistair"he mused to himself sliding down a wall 'hopefully i die of frostbite'Jesse thought bitterly eyes finally sliding close to sleep

  • 2 months later...

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