(Can't think of a title F)

[47Bears]

The girl was running through the forest, she had gotten lost and she was being chased by wolves because, that's what wolves do I guess. The girl's name was Alice, she was 15 years old, she had long brown hair, was reasonably tall, she had many freckles covering her face, and her nose was large and sensitive, she was running from the wolves, she already lost them but she didn't know, she's kind of ditzy like that, she was constantly bringing up her hand to rub at her giant nose, the forest was covered in flowers and the pollen was tickling her nose to no end, while she does enjoy sneezing which is why she came to the forest in the first place, she didn't want to while she thought she was running for her life, she tripped over a tree root and fell face first into a flower bed, her nose fell into a rose, she opened her eyes and quickly recoiled, she rubbed her large nose but the damage was already done "oh no... *sniff* my... Ahh *sniff sniffle* nose, my big ahhhh... Haaahhhhh... Big *snort* nose, gonna make *sniff* me sneeze" she did have a smile on her face while her huge nose was sniffling and snorting, she did love sneezing, not to the point were she would have a fetish but to the point where she would sneak flowers into her room and sniff them to sneeze a ton,

She loved her huge nose, but her huge nose had a huge sneeze in it "AAAHH.... HAAHHH... EEAAAHh *sniiiiiiiff*" that powerful sniff sucked up just enough pollen "HATCHEEEWWW" she doubled over from her huge sneeze, Alice always had big sneezes because of her big nose, she rubbed her nose furiously, trying to ease the tickle in her large, wide nose, she scrunched her nose and wide nostrils, but it didn't work, she massaged her nose, but that only made it tickle more, she was loving this, she picked up a flower and put her nose in it and sniffed deeply, her already large, wide nostrils flared hugely while she snorted the pollen "uh oh, I got *sniffle* more... Ahh... Haaaahh... Pollen in my... HAAHHH... Big... EEHHHH *sniffle* nose, * sniff sniff* I'm gonna *sniiiiff* sneeze... AHHH AHHHHHHH... Again" her nostrils and smile grew wider and wider as she sniffed up more and more pollen, until her poor nose couldn't take it "HAAAAHH GAAAAHHH HAAATCHOOOOOO... HAAATCHOOOOOO HEEEEEEECHEEEEWWWWW" she let out the three biggest sneezes of her life, and she was satisfied. Alice made it to a clearing and lied down in the shade of the trees, her bright red nose twitching and wiggling. She eventually fell asleep, her breath occasionally hitching or her nose sniffling or giving powerful snorts through her gaping nostrils, surprisingly she didn't snore, but she was a heavy sleeper. When she woke up, she saw something strange, she was wrapped in a blanket, and near her there was a handkerchief. Alice scratched her head, then went cross eyed, there was something stuck to her nose, it was a note, she ripped the note off, the tickle caused by it was strong enough to get her to sneeze. She looked at the note and read it "dear miss *sniff*. I hope you don't mind me helping you out a bit, you looked cold and your nose was running like a faucet, so I decided to lend a helping hand, try to find me. Best wishes, raiden" Alice looked around "hm, well, he's probably around here somewhere" she searched around, blew her nose into the hankie, which was always clean for some reason, and shouted the mystery person's name. He was up in the trees, a cloaked boy, same age as Alice, on the surface, studying the umbran and lumen arts. The boy saw Alice, he wanted to say hello, but since she was mispronouncing his name, which is his number 1 pet peeve, he decided to wait, once he saw her go into a terrible sneezing fit and double over so hard she fell on her front, he decided to come down, one last time Alice shouted "rayden, please come out" the boy shouted "ITS PRONOUNCED RAIDEN" raiden jumped from his hiding place and helped the girl up, "oh, oh I'm sorry I got it wrong" Alice apologized "it was a mistake, no harm done, I feel like you know my name, what's your's" raiden said as he extended his hand "my name is *sniffle* Alice, very nice to meet you, and thank you for the hankie and blanket"

"It was no trouble, that hankie is Magic by the way" Alice was surprised, magic was unheard except in stories "what do you mean magic"

"*sigh this is gonna be my whole day isn't it* well the story goes a little like this" Raiden told Alice the story of the umbra witches and Luman sages, and how he is a half breed, he told her of his sister, his parents, the war, and many other things "I'm not to proficient yet, I only have control over three demons, I can fly, and I made a pact with a madama, I came to these woods to hone my talents and practice but I saw you, a sniffly, sneezy mess, so I helped you out, why are you here"

"Well, umm, I'll tell you if you promise not to laugh, it's embarrassing" raiden raised his right hand "I promise I won't laugh"

Alice looked down "I came out here, to make myself sneeze" raiden was surprised, she seemed miserable but she... Enjoyed it? He was more confused then anything else "care to explain, I'm just a bit... Bewildered by your interest even though you looked miserable"

"Well, it's no secret that my nose is huge, and while other girls would want it to change, I like it, but my nose is super sensitive, like anything can make me sneeze, even poking my nose makes me sneeze, and one day when I was eleven, my friend gave me a bouquet of flowers and dared me to sniff them, I was reluctant because of my terrible allergies but I did it anyway, she left the flowers with me when she left, and all I could think about was how good it felt to sneeze, so the rest of the day I sniffed the flowers and sneezed and sneezed and sneezed, it was fun, soon after, I would get pepper and sniff it, tickle my nose with a feather duster, and frolic through pollen filled flower beds, and I haven't told anyone until now" she looked back at raiden, her cheeks were as red as her nose, they were silent until raiden said "w...well whatever floats your boat, right, I mean I like killing God's messengers, and you like sneezing, I'm pretty sure we're even in this situation"

Alice chuckled "yeah, I guess we are" she gave raiden a hug, he hugged her back. "Hey, can you do me a favour raiden" Alice said

"What's up hon"

"Could, could you induce me" raiden was surprised he wanted to say no because he thought he was above that, but he realized that she really wanted to do this and he saw her large, sniffly, beautiful nose and he caved in, "well then, I wasn't exactly anticipating this, but sure, why not" Alice was beaming "really, you'll do it, aw thank you so much" she hugged him really hard, "ok I'll go get some flowers" she said excitedly "no, let me take care of it, I actually want to test something if that's ok,"

"Umm, ok" raiden left, and while he was away Alice was playing with her nose to pass the time, she poked it, sniffed things, sneezed a bunch, just trying to have fun. Raiden eventually returned with flowers, and a ton to scratch marks on his face, Alice recoiled "what happened" Alice asked

"Squirrels, are, evil, that's all I'm saying" raiden responded. Alice laughed

"Alright, then let's get on with the 'nasal assault' as you called it, are you ready Alice"

Alice blew her nose and rubbed it furiously "just being near those flowers is making my nose itch like crazy, but let's do it" raiden brought one flower to her nose and used the petals to caress her red nose and wide nostrils, they started flaring as she sniffled and pollen shot up her quivering nose. Her head was tilting back and her nose was scrunched "that... Tih... *sniff* tickles... *sniff sniff* I'm gonna *sniiiff* haaaahh... HEEHHH... Sneeeeze... HETCHEEW... HATCHEEWW" she sneezed a massive double, "oh wow, *sniff* those were some *sniffle* big sneezes, well I guess big sneezes come out of big noses" she said

"Do you want to keep going or are you all sneezed out, that nose is looking really red"

"Well, I think we might as well continue *sniffle*" she stopped to blow and rub her nose "I mean we're both having a good time so why stop now, are you having fun, cause I am"

Raiden bopped her nose "yeah, this is fun" her sensitive nose twitched "haah... Hhaaaa... HEEAAAHHH ... HEECHEEEWWW" the boop alone made her sneeze tremendously "goodness, that was a big sneeze" then raiden got an idea. He held her in his arms and sat on a log with her, he held her head up and gently caressed her quivering nose with his fingertips. They stared into each other's eyes, or at least Alice tried to, her nostrils were flaring hugely, and her deep red nose was twitching non stop, "hahh... *sniff* HAAHHH... GUAAHHH" Alice was desperately fanning her flaring nose, her eyelids fluttered and her breath hitched "HEEEEH HECHEWW... HECHEWW HACHEEWW" she sat up after her triple, she leaned in so she was laying on raiden, and they both smiled, he hugged her, she blushed and hugged him back. Even in this moment she still had to sneeze, she begged her nose to not sneeze while she was hugging him but all it wanted to do was get the itches out "haah... *sniff* rai... Haaaahhh... Den" she wanted to tell him to let go but the sneer already had control "just let it all out Alice, I don't care if you spray me" he said, with that in mind her nose let loose "HHAAACHEEEWWW HHEEEECHEEWWWW" she sneezed a massive double, but still hugged him, "raiden, can we keep going, I'm loving this" she said to him,

"Well, if it's making you happy, I'll keep ticking your big beautiful nose"

"Y...you think my *sniff* nose is beautiful *sniiiff*" she said, blushing

"yeah, I think everything about you is beautiful" raiden said while looking into her eyes. Alice rubbed her red, twitching nose, "that's really sweet" She said with a smile

"Well that's how I am I say what I see, so, how do you want to go about this." Alice looked around after hearing what raiden said, she saw a feather on the ground, it was short and fluffy, she handed it to raiden. "Do your worst" she sniffled and rubbed her nose "goodness, just being near it is making my allergies flare up, I can't even imagine how much I'm gonna sneeze" she giggled. Raiden brought the feather to her nose and very gently stroked her wide nostrils with it, she smiled as her breath hitched, her head reared back, and her nostrils flared to twice their normal size, "HAAHHH HAAAAEEEHHHHH HEEEEEEEETCHEEEEEEWW" she sneezed hugely, raiden's eyes widened when he looked at her nose "Alice I think you sneezed so hard your nose is bleeding" he said to her. Alice gasped, she never got a nosebleed before and she freaked out, she started crying and while raiden could take this time to take part in one of his favorite pastimes, mocking the weak, he decided to comfort her instead, he gave her a hug and helped her clean up, after that, the two agreed to meet up the next week, the next day, she was all raiden could think about, she however, caught a cold.

[sneasons greetings]

hey this is a very entertaining story but if I'd like to suggest that you use paragraphing because I found it really hard to read like it is in one big lump.

[LapidotLover22]

hey this is a very entertaining story but if I'd like to suggest that you use paragraphing because I found it really hard to read like it is in one big lump.

He kinda did use paragraphing, just not the way people on forums do. At least, from what I've seen. This is how paragraphing in done in books, minus indenting.

Either way is fine by me. The story's too good for me to really care about that sort of thing.

[SneezeloveronGirls]

Thanks for writing another story. I love your work and can't wait for more.

[JadeStone]

This was cute, good job.

[etechie]

good, job, I would like to hear more about this story, especially, the gal sneezing on the guy

[47Bears]

I'll probably continue this story soon, I just need to finish one on a different forum, then this'll be the next one I do

[47Bears]

A week after that day, Alice returned to the forest, this time with a bag. She went to the spot where she met raiden and waited. She waited for a while, and got bored really fast, she reached into her bag and took out a feather, and stroked her large nose with it. Alice's nostrils flared and twitched, and her breath hitched "haahh... heehhh.... HAAAAAHHHH HETCHEEEWWW"

She doubled over with her sneeze, and her nose began dripping. She blew her nose with the hankie raiden gave her, and repeated. Stroked, sneezed, blew her nose, while she was stroking, Raiden sneaked up on her and leaned close to her. "Hi" he said in a whisper. Alice gasped and almost fell backward, but raiden caught her.

"Raiden *sniff* you scared me" she said while looking up at him

"And you started without me hon" he said with a smirk as he kissed her on the tip of her nose, and as he predicted, it twitched, "*sniff* heeh... Heeeh... HEETCHEEWW" her head shot up, her cheeks were as red as her nose, she turned around to face raiden and giggled "bless me" she said with a smile, "oh and sorry for starting without you, I brought a bag full of a bunch of sneezy tools, and, something to talk about" she said as she brought out her bag, it had a ton of stuff in it to irritate her huge nose.

"I see all this great stuff but what do you want to talk about Alice"

"Well, it's kind of personal, you see, back home, I was always made fun of, for having a huge nose, or for not having big boobs like the other girls, or because I am really sensitive, but you like me for my nose, you don't care about my boobs, and you think me being sensitive is cute, why is that"

"Well honey, I don't like to make fun of people for their insecurities, I like to help people feel better about them, and in your case, I think your nose is beautiful, I don't care about your bust size, and your sensitivity is very charming, it makes you like, five times as cute" raiden said as he kissed Alice in the cheek, "thank you raiden, that means a lot, now, are you ready to make me sneeze again" she said while giving him a hug

"Anything for you love," he said.

He brought out the feather to start, he held Alice in his arm and touched the feather to her stomach, she yelped, due to her being very ticklish "hey, my nose is up here" she said while pointing to her nose

"Sorry about that sweetie" raiden said as he brushed the feather along the length of her nose, then shoved it up her right nostril "haahhh HAAAAAAAAAHHHH HEEEECHEEEEEWWWWWWW HEETCHEEEWWW" she sneezed twice.

"Whew, that feather really is something" Alice said while rubbing her nose "I brought some other stuff to" she said excitedly

"Man, you are really into this aren't you honey"

"Well since we last met I developed an actual sneezing fetish, if you think it's weird then feel free to laugh"

"Well whatever boats your float, I mean we all get off to something, am I right" raiden said with a laugh

"Well when you say it like that, I sound ridiculous" Alice said as she brought out a jar of pepper, she unscrewed it and put her nose to the jar "I like doing this with you rai, it's a lot of fun" she said as she took a huge sniff of pepper, she tossed her head back and her nostrils flared out wide, raiden embraced Alice as she let out a volley of sneezes "HEEHHHHH SHEEEEEEEWWWWW HAAAAAACHEEEEEEWWWWWW HEEEEEESHEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWHAAAAATCOOOO HETCHEEEEWW" she embraced him as well, she looked up to him with a runny nose and they both giggled "so Alice, what's next on the menu"

"Well..." She said as she reached into her bag

(And that's where part 2 ends, sorrynotsorry)

[Ammy]

Ummm... did you play 2 certain video games by Platinum Games? Cuz Umbra, Sage,Raiden. It's a good story but wouldn't it be better to put that in fanfiction

[47Bears]

Ummm... did you play 2 certain video games by Platinum Games? Cuz Umbra, Sage,Raiden. It's a good story but wouldn't it be better to put that in fanfiction

Ok, first off, guilty as charged, secondly, I was going through a phase, thirdly, raiden is metal gear in general, not just rising, I just like the name, and I used the witches and sages as a foundation for a backstory by making him from the same universe as bayonetta and having jack's code name because I think it's cool. so basically I used a bunch of unoriginal parts to make an original character, but I can see how you did come to that conclusion

[Ammy]

. Knew it