Artemis Posted August 2, 2015 Posted August 2, 2015 Okay, I know I know I have several on here I just left, but I ran out of muse so here we go trying this one. This was not originally written to go on the Forum but I thought y'all might like it. I lost the begging so I will be starting somewhere rand and can obviously only post as mmuch as I've written. If you have an idea of how you want the story to go give it to me and I'll see what I can doShe lets the kiss go on for a minute before pulling back.She looks up at him with her head still spinning from the kiss. Alec looks at her, acessing her reaction to the kiss. She seemed a bit striken, starstruck maybe." Was that okay?" He asks. She tries to smile." It's okay?" She says but it sounds more like a question." Well then, I want to take you on a date."" N-no you d-don't." He gives her a puzzled look." And why not?" He asks." I have m-more goin o-on then you w-w-want to d-deal with."" And how do you know this?I dare you to try to turn me off you." He cocks an eyebrow. Alis hesitates for a minuite before saying." O-okay. I h-have clinical a-anxiety, a-athasma, and I'm a a v-vegetarian." He has a slightly startled look on his face but it's not a horrified one." You think the fact that you're a vegetarian would make me not like you?" He asks skepticlly " It's h-happend before." I can work with all those now it's my turn. I'm diabetic, have allergies to everything, a horriible immune system, and was left at the alter a year ago. Does that make me undateable?" Alis shakes her head." Then why shouldn't we go out?"" W-we can go o-out," she conseeds. He smiles at her." what are you a-allergic to?"" Um, let's see, cat, dogs,dust,pollen,feathers."" F-feathers?" She asks." Yeah, I can't be around birds and feather pillows and such make me sneezy. Alis thinks for a minute, 'should I ask? would that be rude?' Alec has not broken eye contact for the entire conversation, but now leans away to stifle coughs into his jacket." Excuse me, that was rude."He blushes slightly.Alis adverts her eyesquickly. As she digs through her bag, she hers Alec groan behind her." And now I've disgusted you," he says.A/n comment and I hope you enjoyp.s. please excuse the spelling errors
Artemis Posted August 2, 2015 Author Posted August 2, 2015 (edited) " N-no," she says her back still to him." Then why aren't you facing me?" She turns around with a bag of nuts in her hand and smelling strongly of something floral." O-oh,' this time he's the one stuttering as he struggles not to let his breath hitch. Alis watches as Alec's eyelashes flutter. Finally, Alec turns away and sneezes into his arm.She couldn't see his face, but as his back contracted, it took all her self control not to touch it. He sneezed ten or fifteen times in a row before he stopped." B-bless you." He flashes her a smile but it's kinda pathetic concidering his eyes are glassy and his nose is red." Thanks," he heaves a sigh then sucks in a breath. This seems to start the whole process over again." Hnxt hnxt hent hexx hexx." HE sneezes ten times after that. Then, he realses a stuttering breath and pinches his nose, holding it like that for several minutes." Bless y-you," Alis says.She turns away so he can have a moment to compose himself.She tries to give him time but he turns her back around.A/N sorry for the short updat. I will post as I write it(hopefullyA/N as always please excuse the spelling errors Edited August 2, 2015 by Joal 555 merged posts
Serendipity Posted August 2, 2015 Posted August 2, 2015 Yay! This was really good, as always Artemis! I can't wait for more sneezes.
Artemis Posted August 4, 2015 Author Posted August 4, 2015 A/N thank you PinkiePie I'm glad you enjoy it.When he turns her around, his eyes are hard. " Don't turn away from me." He says and his voice softens. She tense up under his touch but he doesn't let go, only moves to cup her hands in his. " I'm s-s-sorry," She stutters. His eyes soften and he holds her hands gently in his own. Staring deep into her eyes, he says," I'm not angry and you have nothing to apologize for. I don't know why but I feel much more connected to you then I should having just met you on a plane to Greece, but I feel like I'm in love with you and have been for a very long time. Where have I met you before?"" Y-you h-haven't," She says. But she knows she is lying. They had met before and they had been lovers, but it hadn't ended well. The whole ploy about her deseases was to try and get his away from her but you can't fight fate. She was falling for him once again. Last time, that had been deadly.A/N I know really short and no sneezes. I wanted to see how people reacted to it. If y'all don't like this idea, I'll take it back to the other one. SO leave me a comment it will make me happy
happybunny Posted August 4, 2015 Posted August 4, 2015 this is cute! I wonder why she stutters though? Is it just a speech impediment she has? Or is she just super nervous around him?
Artemis Posted August 4, 2015 Author Posted August 4, 2015 Kinda both I always saw it as a speech impediment but she is super nervous around him too!!!!!!!! :0
Artemis Posted August 5, 2015 Author Posted August 5, 2015 A/N I'm going to go with the ewwy gooy romance instead of the more adventurous one."Hey, why do you always turn away from me?' Alec asks, his black hair falling into his eyes in a way that made him look gorgous but couldn't be comfortable. With out her consent, her hand brushes it away. Alec looks into her eyes and doesn't see anything that say 'don't kiss me' so he kisses her. He kisses her with the passion of a fiery explosion. This time however, Alis pushes away from him. " N-no n-not now, p-p-please," she says. His heart stutters at the tone of her voice that told him he had crossed a serious boundary even though he had kissed her a few hours ago. Alis gasps when the piolite can over the speakers and told them they would be decending. Alec takes her hand. She shoots him a small smile. When the plane lands, ALec loses Alis in the crowds and he worries for her. How will she hold up in the midst of all these people? He begins to speed up until he sees her standing by the baggage carrage with a guy who seemed just a bit too comfortable with her. It didn't seem to bother her though. Could she have a boyfriend? Could I have misheard her when she said she'd go out with him? " Alis?" Alis's head flys up and she locks him with an intense look. When Alecc gets closer to the guy, he can smell the reek of colonge on him. His nose immediately begins to ich and prickle. " hmmnn hmnn hnxxx hnxx hnxx hxnnnx hnxx hnxx hnxx hnxx hnxx hnxx hxnnx." " Bless you," big guy says. He was tall and well muscled. His tight shirt showed off his muscles and his face was well sculpted. He had Black hair and grey eyes. " Thanks," Alec murmmers. " Alis, who is this?" " Umm, this is my boyfriend Dylan." " Al, is this the guy who pressured you into going on a date with him?" Alis nods." Wait but you kissed me," Alec says baffled." Yes, because she was kinda forced to, by you," Dylan says. " But bro way to go, Alis says you were a perfect gent. Well until you kissed her." Dylan sticks a hand out and Alec takes it. His handshake is form but his hand is a bit clammy. Alis watched as the two boys she was connected with shook hands. One who made her heart beat like a slegehammer and one whose presence was comforting. When Alec offers her his hand, she takes it. His hand is warm and his handshake is almost nonexistant like he was afraid to break her." I hope we can meet up with later. The three of us grab lunch maybe?" Alec says." Sure bud why not on wendsday?" Dylan nods and the boys make plans. She did feel bad about leading Alec on but she didn't have much of a choice, his eyes bore into her and they pleaded for her to say yes, but she was in love with Dylan and had been for quite a while. A/N Hahaha flipped it on ya didn't I let me knoww who you want Alis to get/stay with and if you want a character sketch, I'll provide one, just let me know
Artemis Posted August 10, 2015 Author Posted August 10, 2015 For the next three hours, Alis was unuaslly quite, not even Dylan's stupid humor could penetrate the little box she had put herself in. Now he takes her face in his hand and turns her face toward his. He gently caresses her lips and she seems to lose tension the second he touches her. When he leans back, he looks her dead in the eye." Al, what's bothering you?" His voice is quiet and slow in case she is having a anxiety attack." I-I feel b-bad that I l-lead that g-guy on," she says quietly. Dylan shakes his head, he should have guessed that was it. She always felt so guilty over every thing, of course he was mad that she had let another guy kiss her and comfort her but he was more upset with himself for leaving a pretty girl who was obviously not secure alone. He takes her hand and strokes it with his thumb." Darlin, it's not your fault. He pressured you into it and if he had done anything else, you would have had a panic attack." Alis smiles at him and it warms his heart. He almost swears when he feels that awful prickling in his nose that tells him he's about to sneeze. He tries to fight it off but it doesn't work. He gets up off the bed they had been laying on and walks a few paces away so he doesn't accedetally sneeze on his girl.He brings a half open fist up to his nose." Hejjxx gjjjzx hezzjj ehejjjj hjjj hhh hhhh hhhh hjjjs hjjjxz eehhhh excuhhhse me hejxxcc jhxxxcc jxxx." He takes an experimental sniff and he doesn't feel any tickles in his nose so he goes back to lay on his girlfriends bed." B-bless you." She smiles and kisses his nose." Y-you have the c-cutest sn-sneeze," she says. He gives her a weird look and she tries to turn away from him but he catches her hand." Please don't. i wasn't trying to upset you. It was just an odd thing to say. I happen to think that your sneeze is really cute too." She smiles widely at him. He kisses her gently and she leans his head against his cheat until he has to go back to his own room." See you tomorrow," He says turning off the lights. " Tomorrow." She says with confidence. Her dreams are filled with twwo sweet boys, so sweet yet such different personalities.A/N If you like this, comment. I would love to see you thoughs pop up on my screen. Let me know where y'all want me to go:)
Artemis Posted August 11, 2015 Author Posted August 11, 2015 does any one want me to update, because I'm thinking of discontinueing this story???
Serendipity Posted August 11, 2015 Posted August 11, 2015 I would LOVE you to update this story!!! Please dont discontinue!
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