The lovers, and the sneezes (F) (swearing and hinting at sexual connotations)

[Turtles]

So...this is a first for me. I guess it's going to be a one shot? I dunno.

They are both girls. Amber and Alix.

Any way.

Let's wing it!

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Kneeling on the bed I look at Amber, her emerald green eyes shining as she laughs, her long red wavy hair flowing back over her shoulders, As the sound of her laughter fills the room.

"Are you sure this is alright? You don't think I'm weird?" I ask a little tentatively. I'd never done anything like this before. With anyone and it was playing on my nerves.

"Course darlin" her voice lilted with a soft Irish accent "Must admit, I'm a tad excited for this" she giggles then.

I take a deep breath and nod.

Spinning around I pull open my bedside table and pull out a little box. I turn back around to face her and open it.

I pull out a small little pink flower, it still had water droplets on it from being picked not half an hour ago.

It has very little pollen, and a light fragrance. I didn't want to pick something that could potentially hurt her.

Looking up I see her rub her nose slightly, the fragrance already affecting her.

"Well c'mon then Alix, don't stand there gawkimg at me like I'm some sort of alien. Do it." She leans forward a little as if she's waiting.

I nod my head, place the box on my knees so I can access it still if I need.

I lift the flower up just under her nose, I swallow thickly, I can feel my palms getting sweaty from the nerves. "Sniff softly" I can hear my own voice shaking in giving the command.

Her emerald eyes flash at me cheekily as she inhales.

Before she even exhales her mouth drops open and she gasps a little. Her eyes closing and she sits back. Her hands raised in front of her face in waiting. But before anything else happens, her face relaxed and she drops her hands.

I let out my breath I hadn't realised I was holding.

"You aren't going to get much from that"

She says raising an eyebrow at me.

I become more determined then.

I don't say anything this time. I lean forward and lift the flower up and rub the petals against her nostrils.

She reacts instantly. Her breathing becoming soft and shallow, her mouth slack, eyes closing. But I don't relent, I twist the stem, the flower twirling in my hand making every petal brush under her sensitive little nose.

Ah...a... I...I'm gonn...gonna...snah....snahhhh aha...ah...oh it's...c-com-ing ah ah...gon-na sneeze ehh

She speaks through her hitches but I don't stop, I can't stop. I keep twirling the flower, brushing it over her nostrils, I decide to trail it down the bridge of her nose, around it, I brush the flower all over her face lightly before bringing it back under her nose where it continues to brush against her nostrils.

Ehh ehh..ah...oh...it's it's ah...ah. Ah............ACXHCOO!

She gasps deeply before letting out another

AH..ACXCHOO

Her body jerks forward with every sneeze.

I stare in stunned silence. My hand with the flower in it, now next to me.

She sniffs slightly, her nose a little red, and still twitching slightly. "wow that felt good. Did you like it?"

I knew she had another sneeze in there.

I decide to try something. I grab a tissue from the tissue box behind me.

"What are you..." She tries to ask. But I already have the tissue over her nose.

"Shh" I whisper trying to concentrate.

With my fingers in front of the tissue I start running one finger between her nostrils, softly, coaxing. I feel her nose start to quiver under my ministrations.

Her mouth goes slack and I feel her hot breath through the tissue. I feel my heart race, a heat travels from my stomach down lower to my crotch. My own breath picking up speed.

This was the most wonderful thing I had ever experienced in my life.

I feel the tissue starting to get a little wet under my finger as her nose had started to run, but I didn't car. I was t going to stop. I use my other hand to run a finger lightly over the bridge of her nose.

That seemed to have been the trick.

Ah..eheheheh...

Her quick breaths turned into gasps and suddenly

Ehh ahaha AHH ACXCH ACXCH ACXCH

I quickly move the tissue away so I don't block any more of her gorgeous sneezes.

AH AH AHCXCHOOO ACXCHOO AHH AHH AHHCXCHOOO "fuck" ACXCHOO "oh!" ACXCHZX EHH EHH "oh oh I'm gonna g-gonna.." ACHHOOO ACCHHOOO ACXCHOOO

"yes...oh...please" ACXCHOO ACXCHH ACXCHH ACXCHOOO AH AH.........ah...ah......

"Oh it's stuck...I-c-can't get it...p-please" she basically begs me. Her eyes a streaming, her nose is bright pink and twitching And clearly in need of release.

I pluck out the bottle of perfume I had stashed inside the box, ale the top off completely and wave it under her nose.

"Oh! L-little b-black...dress! I'm e-extrrrrr evenly all...all...allergic!" She gasps.

I hadn't realised she actually had an allergy to it. I just new perfumes affected her.

I watched in stunned silence. Placing the bottle back in the box

AHHHHH "fu-uck" AHHH EHHHH EHHH AHHHHHH EAHHH "y-es oh-l AHHH AHHH AHHH...........ACXCHOOO ACHOOOO AXCXCHOOOO AXCXCXCHOOOOO ACXCHOOOO ACHOO ACHOOO ACXCHH ACXCHOO ACXCHH ACXCHOO eh eh ACHOOO ACXCHOO ACXCHHHH ACXCHHHHH ACXCHOOO ACXHCOOO

She carries on sneezing like this for another minute or so.

By the end of it. She was a sniffling mess who couldn't look happier.

I couldn't speak. My jaw had hit the floor in astonishment.

The heat from my crotch had intensified and I could feel the moisture from down there.

"My turn to get what I want" she says just before grabbing me by my shirt and pulling me in for a long and deep kiss.

You can only imagine what happened next, when in the process of her pulling me forward the rest of the contence in the box tipped all over the bed. Including pepper, feathers, dust, and the bottle of perfume that I hadn't put the lid back on yet.

I felt her nose quiver against mine and I knew I was going to be in for a very wonderful night.

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So this is my first piece ever haha. Umm please let me know if you like it?

And the fact that both of the girls names start with A is completely coincidental haha.

[Turtles]

Sorry about the miss spelling and words added that shouldn't be there. I'm working off my phone and the screen is smashed, so I missed a few. Also her nose wasn't meant to go red until the end not early on. That was an accident.

[Serendipity]

This is really good! I hope you continue!!!

[47Bears]

Oooooooh damn, this is good

[Turtles]

This is really good! I hope you continue!!!

Heh thank you! ☺️

I think I'm just going to leave this as it is, but I will definitely be writing more!

[Turtles]

Oooooooh damn, this is good

Thank you! ☺️

[anna]

This is great, I love the twist at the end! And the bit where she plays with her nose through the tissue was fab

[Turtles]

This is great, I love the twist at the end! And the bit where she plays with her nose through the tissue was fab

Thank you! ☺️

[NoV]

Including pepper, feathers, dust, and the bottle of perfume that I hadn't put the lid back on yet.
I felt her nose quiver against mine and I knew I was going to be in for a very wonderful night.

And I have no doubt that it was Unstoppable frenzied allergic fits are one of the things I live for

[Turtles]

Including pepper, feathers, dust, and the bottle of perfume that I hadn't put the lid back on yet.

I felt her nose quiver against mine and I knew I was going to be in for a very wonderful night.

And I have no doubt that it was Unstoppable frenzied allergic fits are one of the things I live for

I'm glad you like it ?☺️

[Guy]

This is certainly one of the most enticing stories I've read on here. It's a shame you won't continue it, but I really look forward to what you come up with in the future!

[Turtles]

This is certainly one of the most enticing stories I've read on here. It's a shame you won't continue it, but I really look forward to what you come up with in the future!

I feel like this is a good ending to a one shot. I feel if I continue it, it will lose what it has? If that makes sense.

I'll definitely be posting more stories though

[Turtles]

This is certainly one of the most enticing stories I've read on here. It's a shame you won't continue it, but I really look forward to what you come up with in the future!

I feel like this is a good ending to a one shot. I feel if I continue it, it will lose what it has? If that makes sense.

I'll definitely be posting more stories though

Also forgot to add (how rude of me)

Thank you ?

[Anonymoussneezelover]

That was amazing and awesomely hot! I'm glad to have read it but sad it's one shot.

[Turtles]

That was amazing and awesomely hot! I'm glad to have read it but sad it's one shot.

I find that if I try and build on my one shots I kind of lose the story and it doesn't work. I work best with short story's or random one shots.

Maybe in the future with a bit more practice I'll be able to do something longer. But thank you ?

[etechie]

I can't wait until your able to write stuff in the adult section, but it will be awhile, anyway keep up the great work!

[Turtles]

I can't wait until your able to write stuff in the adult section, but it will be awhile, anyway keep up the great work!

Thank you me either!

That's what I'm waiting for! Once I've done the 50 posts and whatever else they need I'll be right in there. I don't have love before the 50 posts quota is filled. So hopefully won't take too long!

[Sneezysteff]

omg please do more xx

[Turtles]

omg please do more xx

Haha in glad you like it. But this story won't continue.

I have done another one shot (The dress, the bitch and the allergies) but I won't be continuing with this sorry.