(FICTION) Hilary Sneeze Story

[MeLikeGirlsWhoSneeze]

This was based off of a true real-life experience with my friend. Some names, places and words were changed for either privacy protection or dramatization.

It was Monday, i was at school in first period. My friend and i sat next to eacher in this class. Her name was Hilary. She had long, black hair that went all the way down her back until it reached her butt. It was summer, and she has a bit of spring fever. So i was looking forward to seeing her sneeze for the first time. Some time in the middle of class, She raised her hands to cup over her nose and mouth as she put on her cute pre-sneeze face. AAH, HITCHOO! She sneezed. “Bless you, Hilary.” I said. Sniff “Thank you, Bren.” She replied. Her sneezes aren't very loud, nor are they very big. They’re not small or unnoticeable though. Just not too overly loud or big. Later the same day, in Math class. She sat in a desk, to my left and further back to mine. I heard the distinct sound the she makes right before she sneezes. AHH, HITCHOO! “Bless” AHH, HITCHOO! She sneezed again when i was in mid-sentence of blessing her for her first sneeze. “Bless you, bless you, Hilary.” I said. She got up from her desk and went over to the tissue box to blow her nose. “Thank you, Brenden.” She said after a long, hard nose blow. I noticed that every day, it was the same schedule during the summer. She would sneeze at least once, in English and Math. Another time, we were both waiting outside the classroom door to our Math class because our teacher wasn’t there yet. She had both of her arms full, holding her books. “Oh, god.” She said as she put on her pre-sneeze face. This time, not covering her mouth and nose. AHH, AHH, AHH, HITCHOO, AHH, HITCHOO, AHH, HITCHOO! “She just had a full-on sneezing attack.i thought to myself in my head. “Bless you, Hil.” I said to her, as i placed my hand on her shoulder to comfort her. “Thank you.” She barely was able to say that as her nose was super-stuffed with mucus.

What did you think of that? Please comment and let me know!

[Ammy]

not bad, continue

[MeLikeGirlsWhoSneeze]

Okay, you asked for a continuation? Well, here it is!

NOTE: This story is based is fictional. Based on a real girlfriend i once had. The last story was non-fictional. This one is completely fictional.

One day, during Math class. Of which we both had. She sat behind and to the side of me. If i looked back a little bit, i could see her without attracting too much attention. Which was very lucky for me. It was summer, which meant, she was very sneezy. It was sometime mid-class, some pollen must have irritated her nose enough, and she couldn’t help but eject it out of her nose at 65 MPH. The teacher called to see her homework. She said: “Here’s my…” She went into her pre-sneeze face, which was so hot it could melt through titanium. HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! She sniffled as she got up out of her desk, and walked over to the teachers desk. “Yeah, here’s my sneeze.” She said as she blushed a little. The class laughed a little as Apollo 1 achieved lift-off in my pants. In lunch, i sat at a table with a few of my best friends. They didn’t know about my fetish because i didn’t want to weird them out. Hilary sat on the “non-popular” side of the “popular” table, yeah, i don’t get it either. I was secretly looking at her, as i noticed her pre-sneeze face was on, her hands were under the table; doing god knows what. HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH,HAAH,ATCHOO! HAAH,HITCHOO! She sneezed onto her sandwich; not covering her nose and mouth. “Gross!” one of the girls sitting across from her said. “I’m used to it.” She said, sniffling before and after. Then she took a bite of her sandwich. “Even grosser!” The same girl said. The Skyscraper in my pants stood tall and proud as i turned around to find one of my friends giving me a “What are you doing?” face. Luckily i was able to brush it off easily with a change of subject in conversation. Another day, when Hilary and i were walking to my house after school. I looked at her to find her with her pre-sneeze face on. HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, ITCHOO! She sneezed into her hands. “Those really didn’t want to come out too easily.” She said blushing slightly. I replied: “You’re cute when you sneeze.” She blushed even brighter. We didn’t say a word to each other the rest of the walk. Just a simple “Bye, see you tomorrow.” as i got to my house, and she continued on her way to her house around the block.

What did you think of that? Please tell me in the form of a comment! Constructive criticism is accepted as well!

[jamesdear1]

This was really good please induce

[MeLikeGirlsWhoSneeze]

You asked for induced sneezes? Well, here you go!

It was Sunday, i planned on going to a park with Hilary. So i called her up: “HITCHOO! <sniffs deeply> Excuse me.” Now i know i was in for a treat. “Hi Brenden, so were we going to go to the park today like you planned?” “Yes, i was planing on that. I guess we’ll meet each other their?” “Sounds good, see you there!” As i walked to the park, i imagined her having a sneezing fit right in front of me again. “Hi Hilary, how are you doing?” I asked her as i walked up t her. “A little stuffed up, but fine.” She said in a very congested sounding voice. Just then, she put on her pre-sneeze face. HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! She sneezed three times into her hand. She blew her nose in a couple of tissues she took from a stash she had in the left pocket of her blue denim jeans. “Good thing i brought a ton of tissues with me.” She laughed a little. “So, what did you want to do?” She asked me. “Go for a walk?” I suggested. “Sounds good, lets go!” She responded. There was a nice long path at the park that we walked along. In the middle of the walk, i looked at her, and she had her pre-sneeze face on. HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HAAH, HAAH HITCHOO! HAAH, HITCHOO! She sneezed five times into her tissue-covered hand. She blew her nose and threw the tissues out in a near-by trash can. “Jesus, Hilary!” I chuckled as she blushed slightly. About a half-hour later, we sat down. She had her pre-sneeze face on again. HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, it’s, HAAH, stuck! HAAH, help, HAAH, me, HAAH, sneeze! Did she really want me to make her sneeze? Either way i couldn’t miss my chance. I plucked a blade of grass from the ground and tickled her nose with it. HAAH HAAH, HEH, HEH, HEH! It seemed to help her, a little. She was very desperate to get her sneeze out. HAAH, HAAH, HEH, HEH, HEH! Just then, genius struck in my head! I plucked a flower out of the ground. I stuck the flower right in her face, that pushed her over the edge. HAAH, HAAH, i, HAAH, can’t, HAAH, take, HAAH, it, HAAH, any, HAAH, longer! HAAH, HEH, HEH, HEH, HITCHOO! HITCHOO! HITCHOO! HITCHOO! HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! HAAH, HITCHOO! She sneezed countless times into her tissue-covered hand. She sniffled very loudly and deeply. She blew her nose into like 50 separate tissues. “Thank you! That one really didn’t want to come out! But you made it come out!” She kissed me on the cheek and sneezed one last time into her hand: HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! “I think you’ve sucked in enough pollen into your nose already, Hil. Lets go home.” I suggested to her. HAAH, HAAH, HAAH, HITCHOO! “Yeah, definitely.” We then walked back to my house. She sneezed the whole way there.

What did you think of that? I personally feel it’s my best yet! Please comment and let me know!

[47Bears]

10/10 would read many times over

[MeLikeGirlsWhoSneeze]

10/10 would read many times over

Thanks! I worked hard on that story. Glad to see that my work paid off! I am always open to suggestions for continuations of my current stories, and new stories. Feel free to leave suggestions if you like!

[jamesdear1]

pls  continue this i really enjoyed the inducing, maybe more like that if you don't mind

[Beatris]

Can the sneezing be stifled ? Like for example they are in a movie theater and the boy has new cologne. She starts sneezing, but has to be quiet and it'seems stifled. Do you like my idea?

[Balmora]

This post is over a year old. Hell of a necrobump.