Subtly Clashing Wishes Posted January 15, 2017 Posted January 15, 2017 This is amazing! OMG! Sneezy Spock and fascinated Nyota--this is a fantastic story. And clueless Jim creating the whole wonderful mess. This bit is perfect because I think it describes us so well. Ouch. This one might have hurt. A part of her felt sorry for him. Really. The other part… Well, the other part was yelling and screaming and rolling on the floor (if there was a floor in her mind) in pure ecstasy. In these kinds of situations, she completely understood her boyfriend, divided in two irreconcilable halves. Sometimes she wondered if she wasn’t half-alien too. Thank you, thank you!
cally Posted January 15, 2017 Posted January 15, 2017 It was absolutely no problem to help proofread such an adorable piece. I look forward to reading more of your work. @Sanguine Cheerful Worrier I am very glad you enjoyed, as I've been keeping this a secret for over a week!
AngelEyes Posted January 17, 2017 Posted January 17, 2017 OMG. I adore you. This is just...yeah. Incredible. On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: She knew what he was doing. It was the game “I don’t feel so good, therefore I’m trying to divert your mind from it.” So Spock! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: And of course it had to be James Inconvenient Kirk. LOL On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: - I did interrupt something, didn’t I? He whispered. I can totally see Kirk's look. On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: The Vulcan, shoulders heaving, breath hitching, eyes half-closed, was absolutely not in control anymore. Oh dear! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: She couldn’t explain to him that the absolute lack of control was the best thing of all, could she? It sounded heretic for a Vulcan. Exactly! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: Ouch. This one might have hurt. A part of her felt sorry for him. Really. The other part… Well, the other part was yelling and screaming and rolling on the floor (if there was a floor in her mind) in pure ecstasy. In these kinds of situations, she completely understood her boyfriend, divided in two irreconcilable halves. Sometimes she wondered if she wasn’t half-alien too. So true.
Shamaël Posted January 21, 2017 Author Posted January 21, 2017 @Sanguine Cheerful Worrier and @cally and @AngelEyes: Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked it. I must confess that I feel like Nyota very often, torn between excitment and guilt, when someone sneezes next to me... I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms).
AngelEyes Posted January 23, 2017 Posted January 23, 2017 On 1/21/2017 at 10:19 AM, Aliena H. said: I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms). Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Subtly Clashing Wishes Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 On January 21, 2017 at 11:19 AM, Aliena H. said: I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms). Do we get to hold you to this?
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