Finn (Star Wars)

[MoonDuck]

Hey guys! I made a quick thing. I know it doesn't compare to any of the other awesome stuff posted here, but I wanted feedback/constructive criticism so I can figure out how to make awesome stuff (I'm not going to go out asking my vanilla friends ). I've never drawn a person with my tablet or tried this style before, so I'd really appreciate any comments. Thank you!  

https://sta.sh/09050kt3k9p 

[luckyleprechaun]

That looks really great Moon!

[mysterysneeze]

Whoa. For something that you have not tried before, this is a really great first attempt! Have you drawn anything else before in the past, like animals or plants or cartoons? The way you drew the clothing is very nicely done, and the colors on the hair and clothes to me are good ^^ The shape of the fingers to me also look good! They are not too long or too short. They look the right size to me, and it is sweet seeing them go against the nose. Speaking of, great work on drawing his nose! =) 

The eyes and eyebrows look a little too small and the left eye seems higher than the right eye, but other than that I really enjoyed seeing what you drew! Thank you for taking the time to draw something sneezy related like this! You did a really good first drawing! I hope you draw things you want to draw in the near future. I personally would like to see other drawings from you when you want to draw more.

[MoonDuck]

13 minutes ago, mysterysneeze said:

Whoa. For something that you have not tried before, this is a really great first attempt! Have you drawn anything else before in the past, like animals or plants or cartoons? The way you drew the clothing is very nicely done, and the colors on the hair and clothes to me are good ^^ The shape of the fingers to me also look good! They are not too long or too short. They look the right size to me, and it is sweet seeing them go against the nose. Speaking of, great work on drawing his nose! =) 

The eyes and eyebrows look a little too small and the left eye seems higher than the right eye, but other than that I really enjoyed seeing what you drew! Thank you for taking the time to draw something sneezy related like this! You did a really good first drawing! I hope you draw things you want to draw in the near future. I personally would like to see other drawings from you when you want to draw more.

I've done little sketches of faces on paper and I made part of a full-sized person with line art + fun times coloring a few months back, but I generally try to stick to stuff like the sky or trees or anything that's not a real human being. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts! I see what you're talking about with the eyes, I'll definitely focus on that more in the future.