Sneezing High School Seniors

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 1: 

          It's almost time to go to her first day of her senior year of high school. 18 year old Danielle is putting on her makeup. She goes to an all-girls high school in California. Like all the other girls, she has to wear the uniform of a white blouse, a blue skirt, and black shoes. Danielle is thick with both extra fat and extra muscle, and she is curvy and busty. While during her makeup, she pauses. She opens her mouth and closes her eyes. She cups her hands for a loud aaaaccchhhheeewww with her naturally husky alto voice. The sneeze made her smile. Her allergies are one of hef enjoyments in life. 

         Later, Danielle walks into school. In the hallway, her bestfriend 18 year old Nicole Hong hugs her. Nicole says "I missed you so much." Danielle says "I missed you too." The near 250 pound Danielle feels so soft to the skinny 120 Nicole. Danielle feels a tingle so she gently pushes off her bestfriend. Danielle opens her mouth, closes her eyes, cups her hands, and does an eeeeccchhhooowww. Nicole asks "Allergies bothering you ? What's new." Danielle feels very uncomfortable sneezing around anyone and also uncomfortable talking about her allergies. Nicole brushes some of Danielle's long blonde hair out of her face. Nicole never has the hair in face problem as her long black hair is always in a french braid. Danielle hears the distance sneeze of a girl. The sneeze sounds so familiar. It takes her back to a time in her life when she was in 7th grade. Her daydreaming is interrupted with Nicole calling her name. Danielle says "Excuse me, got to pee." Danielle rushes to the girl's bathroom. 

     In the bathroom, she sees the last girl ever suspected. Danielle asks "Maddie ?" Madison McCain AKA Maddie asks "Danielle ?" Danielle can't believe her friend from childhood is at her school now. Maddie has grown up to be as thick and busty as Danielle. Maddie though is sporting a short haircut with her dark brown hair. Remembering Maddie's tough tomboy ways, Danielle wouldn't expect long hair out of Maddie though Danielle is surprised Maddie would ever attends a school that makes her wear a skirt. Maddie's nose is red and she looks so sick. Remembering how Maddie was, Danielle assumes either the tough Maddie didn't want to admit to being sick or her parents did not believe her. Nostaglia comes over Danielle as the best days of her life involved Maddie with a cold. The tough girl Maddie opens her mouth, closes her eyes,  turns her head, and sneezes a eeeecchheeewww into the air, and wipes her nose on the back of her hand. Danielle remembers her repressed memories of why she has has such a fantasination with sneezing.

      Nicole walks into the bathroom and sees her childhood enemy. Nicole says "You ?!" Maddie asks "Oh no, (*sniffle*) why do you (*sniffle*) have to come here ?" Nicole says "Ewww, you're sick." Maddie says "Of course a princess like you (*sniffle*) says things like ew." Nicole says "Danielle, let's talk our seats before class starts." Maddie says "No Danielle is (*cough* *cough*) staying with me." Danielle says to Nicole "Come on Nicole, I haven't seem Maddie in like 5 years." Maddie starts coughing in the air, and the germophobic Nicole rushes out of the bathroom. 

       Danielle asks Maddie "Why did you move years ago ? I remember one day you didn't come to class, and I heard you moved. I was so sad and confused to why you just disappeared." Maddie says "Look Danille (*sniffle*) I, I, eeeeccchhheeeewwww, eeecchhhheewwww, eeeeeccchhheww," Danielle decides to go in her schoolbag and take out a box of tissues, and gives it to Maddie. Maddie takes a tissue and blows her nose in a honk. The school bell rings, Danielle decides to wait to ask Maddie again. 

          Later at lunchtime, outside the building of the school, Nicole is sitting by herself. Danielle's and Nicole's friend, Adrianna Lopez Aka Anna walks up to her. Anna asks "Sup Kitty-Kat, where's your wife ?" Nicole sighs and says "Don't call my Kitty-Kat and Danielle is with that new girl ?" Anna says "Oh, that girl everyone is talking about." Nicole says "I can't believe I have to deal with her again." The "slim thick" 150 pound fake-blonde Anna says "She is really cute." Nicole groans at that statement. Anna sneezes into the air with a high pitched aacccchhheeeewwww. Nicole covers her mouth and asks "Allergies or sick ?" Anna says "Allergies." Nicole says "Madison is sick, so I can't hang out with Danielle." Anna asks "Is it true that Maddie was pregnant ?" Nicole asks "What ?" Anna says "I was listening to gossip." Nicole says "It wouldn't surprise me." Annna says "Oh, I doubt that was true." Nicole asks "Why you say that ?" Before Anna can answer, Danielle and Maddie finds Nicole and Anna. Nicole sighs and says "You should go home, you're sick Madison." Maddie says "I'm sure (*sniffle*) a nerd like you who remebers everthing, remembers (*sniffle*) I hate when you people call me that." Anna says "Yes, catfight." Danielle says "Guys, cut it out." To annoy Nicole, Maddie sits beside her and holds her hands. Nicole says "Noooooo, you are going to get me sick." Maddie intentionally coughs in Nicole's face. Danielle says "Maddie let Nicole go." Maddie does and Nicole runs off. Danielle says "Be nice to Nicole." Maddie says "Fine." Anna says to Maddie "You are so cool." 

     After school, now Danielle and Maddie are sitting on a bench on the outside of the building of the school. Maddie is honking in a tissue. Danielle asks "Want to hang out at my house ?" Maddie says "You can come (*sniffle*) to my apartment ?" Danielle asks "Apartment ?" Maddie says "I live by myself now." Danielle says "Cool but I was suppose to hang out with Nicole and Anna at my house." Maddie looks disappointed as she coughs. Maddie says "Find." Danielle asks "What ?" Maddie says "Find, find, F - I - N - E." Danielle says "Oh, you are getting stuffy. Hard to say fine with a stuffy nose." Nicole and Anna walks up to Danielle and Maddie, and Danielle says "Nicole, uh, Maddie will be hanging iut with us." Nicole sighs and Anna smiles. 

[bben9-kun]

Try writing the sneezes like this: "Aaaaaaaacheeeeeeew!" And try to mix up how each sneeze sounds and they don't have to be long

[bben9-kun]

You might also wanna chill on that THICC and busty stuff too just SAIYAN

[skeletoncliquegirl]

3 hours ago, bben9 said:

Try writing the sneezes like this: "Aaaaaaaacheeeeeeew!" And try to mix up how each sneeze sounds and they don't have to be long

 

2 hours ago, bben9 said:

You might also wanna chill on that THICC and busty stuff too just SAIYAN

Yeah, what he said. Just follow those tips and I guarantee your stories will get better. c:

[MysteriousAuthor]

3 hours ago, bben9 said:

Try writing the sneezes like this: "Aaaaaaaacheeeeeeew!" And try to mix up how each sneeze sounds and they don't have to be long

Thank you. I really really really hope you don't take this the wrong way because I deeply appreciate the advise. It was already slightly. But I intended it to more different as the parts go on. So I get what you mean. 

 

3 hours ago, bben9 said:

You might also wanna chill on that THICC and busty stuff too just SAIYAN

Thank you so much. Only Danielle and Maddie are both thick and busty. The demography of the USA means out of 4 adults, 2 or 3 of them will be overweight. I just want them to be realistic. But I see what you mean. 

[MysteriousAuthor]

29 minutes ago, skeletoncliquegirl said:

 

Yeah, what he said. Just follow those tips and I guarantee your stories will get better. c:

Thank you so much. I will. 

[M214186]

Please do continue 

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 2: 

      At Danielle's house, the girls are in the living room. Danielle, Maddie, and Anna are on the couch, and Nicole is sitting in a chair. Nicole is wearing a medical masks over of her face. Anna is having a hard time not laughing at Nicole. Maddie's nose is completely clogged and she has become hard to understand. Danielle's and Anna's allergy medications are wearing off. 

          Danielle sneezes, Maddie coughs, Anna sniffles, Nicole groans. Nicole wanting to cause trouble asks, "So Madison, were you pregnant ?" Maddie says "Whad ? Do ! Ard dou idtend !" Nicole getting revenge for Maddie likely infecting her teases her saying "I don't understand what you're saying Madison." Danielle says "Nicole (*sniffle*) stop teasing Maddie." Anna sneezes an aaaaaccchhhhiiii. Maddie sneezes a sniffled eeeeeggggoooo. Danielle is very uncomfortable with all this sneezing and sniffling and ect. Anna the natural troubler asks Maddie "So, why did you move when you were young ?" Maddie says "Dode of dour busidess." Danielle both wants to knows the answer and want Anna and Nicole to stop bothering a very sick Maddie. 

         Later, Danielle and Nicole are in pajamas and in Danielle's bed. Nicole is staying over Danielle's house. Danielle's nightly take of allergy medications are kicking in. Danielle is thinking about the last day she had seen Maddie before she moved. Danielle remembered at 13 she, Maddie, and Nicole were playing at Maddie's house. Maddie's mom was in a particularly had mood because she had a cold. She remembers she had feel asleep and was awoken by Nicole who told her Maddie and her mom are agreeing. When the two 13 year old starts to listen, Danielle remember hearing a sniffling Maddie's mom shouting "Don't (*sniffle*) lie to me ! I found the evidence in (*sniffle*) your room." Then Maddie's mom's yelling was interrupted by a sneezing fit. 

      Danielle stops daydreaming and asks Nicole "Why do you think Maddie moved years ago ?" Nicole says "I don't know the answer. I just assumed her room had found drugs." Nicole pauses and says "Oh no, oh no." Nicole sneezes an eeeccchhheeee in her hands. Nicole sighs and says "Oh great, the girl got me sick." Danielle realizes Nicole is not in the mood to talk about it. 

         When the 4 comes to school, all they girls have a cold. Each girl have their own reason to not want to stay home. Danielle is holding a tissue to her nose when she meets a fellow tissue-to-nose Maddie. Maddie says "Sorry (*sniffle*) for giving you my cold." Danielle says "Never say sorry for giving me a cold." A groaning Nicole walks up and says "I hate you Madison. I'm eeehhhheewww sick because of you." Danielle says "We should go to the nurse's office." 

        The 4 finds themselve in the nurse's office. Anna now knows the story of the last days of the young 3 because Nicole told her. Anna has her own theories of what happened to decided to keep her thoughs to herself. Some of Maddie's aaaaccchhhhhooowww catches Danielle. Maddie says "Sorry." Danielle smiles. Anna says "You two are (*sniffle*) so cute together. Maddie, did your (*sniffle*) parents move because your mom realized your are a lesbian. I mean, you (*sniffle*) were here for 1 and a half days and I saw the chemistry between you two." Danielle's eyes, Maddie's eyes, and Nicole's eyes are all wide. Anna says "I (*cough*) knew it, and I bet you're back because (*sniffe*) now 18 and you are a legal adult." Nicole runs out of the office, and then Maddie runs out. Anna days "I thought (*sniffle*) knowing the truth would make you two kiss. I (*cough*) wonder what the evidence was that Maddie's mom had found ?" Danielle asks "Why asks (*sniffle*) is Nicole upset ?" Anna says "Because she likes you too dummy." Danielle says "Oh, I never aascccchhhooooww." 

[M214186]

I hope that you continue 

[MysteriousAuthor]

2 minutes ago, M214186 said:

I hope that you continue 

Thank you. Going to write part 3 now.

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 3: 

       Later, after school, Danielle is at home and her mom is taking care of her. Danielle's mother, Lisa, is a 44 year old woman. A thin, middle age woman with short blonde hair, wrinkles, and age spots. Danielle is in her bedroom trying to text, trying is the key word as she is a mess. The sneezing and coughing is driving her crazy in mostly a good way. 

        Danielle does an eeeeccchhhhheeeewwwww on her phone scene. She wipes it off and continues texting. Anna texts (That cold Maddie gave me is insane. I can't stop sneezing. You made your decision on who you want to be with ?) Danielle coughs a dry cough and then sneezes a sniffled eeeeeegggggoooo. Danielle texts (I like-like Maddie, but Nicole is my bestfriend and don't want to hurt her.) Danielle blows her nose. A wet blow giving out thick clear snot. 

      Danelle suddenly almost faĺls out of bed when she sees Maddie at her 2 story bedroom window. She quickly lets Maddie in. Maddie looks more sick than before. She has the mouth breather look as her nose is clogged. The girls hold hands. The way they are looking at each other, they each know the other's feelings. They kiss. Maddie can't breath with her clogged nose, and Danielle's nose is running on Maddie's lip. Funny enough, Danielle wouldn't have their first kiss go any othe way. The mood is killed when the door opens, and it's Nicole and Lisa. Lisa says "Oh, oh, oh, OH !" Nicole starts crying. Lisa says "I will give you girls some privacy. It's good to see you again Madison." Lisa quickly goes downstairs. 

         Nicole's crying is interrupted by a massive sneezing fit. Sniffled sneezes with frustrates Nicole. Danielle tries to hug Nicole but Nicole resists. Nicole says to with a very congested voice "I hade dou ! Dou bacd idto dy dife add ruided adythidg !" Maddie actually looks guilty. She sits on Danielle's bed. Nicole does a huge aaaaacccchhhheeeewwwww. A wet spray that causes snot to fly. A force so powerful she almost falls. She is too beated down by this cold to argue so she too sits on Danielle's bed. Nicole says "It's find. I ddow dou didn't like me like dhat. It's dot Dadisod's faudt. I should go." Danielle hugs Nicole as Nicole is trying to leave. Danielle says "You're (*sniffle*) my bestfriend and I love you." 

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 4: 

        The following Monday, Danielle comes to school holding hands with Maddie. Nicole is absolutely miserable. She developed a sinus infection from the cold Maddie had gave her, and her parents made her come to school. Anna asks her "How are you holding up ?" Nicole says "My sinuses are killing me. This is just what I need." Nicole sneezes into an eeeehhhhgggooo tissue, yellow snot is coming out of her. Anna says "You look pretty." Nicole says "Your fake compliments are not going to cheer me up." Anna says "Look, you are not the only one who likes someone who doesn't like you back." Anna storms off. Nicole asks herself "What was that about ?" 

        During the first class, the usually attentative Nicole is distracted. She looks over at Anna and wonders what Anna's statement means. Anna is in a particularly bad mood. Nicole had not notice until now because she was focused on her own problems. Nicole is wondering who Anna ment. Nicole watches as Anna sneezes into her hands, and  wipes it her in her shirt. The germophobic Nicole is disgusted. It's things like that why Nicole never saw Anna as more than just a friend. But, Anna is one of the most popular girls in school. All the out lesbians in school, except Danielle and Maddie, are gaga over Anna. When Danielle, Nicole, and Anna hang out, Anna is usually asked iout by boys. What is it about Anna that drives boys and girls crazy ? Is Nicole missing something ? Nicole watches as Anna picks her nose. Nicole is disgusted again. 

      After school, the 4 girls are at Danielle's house. Danielle's mom, Lisa, is home from work because she had caught Danielle's cold. Nicole sneezes into a tissue, eeegggooowww. Anna is now in a super good mood now. Nicole blushes as Anna is looking at her. Anna asks Nicole "Nicole, you're the smartest girl here. I have a question. What if you liked someone for years, but never told them because it would awkward ?" That question makes Danielle uncomfortable due to the whole Danielle-Maddie-Nicole love triangle so Danielle takes Maddie to her bedroom leaving Nicole and Anna in the living room. Nicole says "My advise would be to tell them how you feel ASAP." Nicole is wiping her nose as she watches Anna gets up. Nicole is thinking (She's gross, and annoying, and and and sweet, and street smart, and gorgeous.) Nicole goes upstairs to follow Anna. She doesn't see Ana but hears Anna's voice say "I like you." Before Nicole can react she hears a sniffling Lisa says "Adrianna, (*sniffle*) you're are one of my daughter's bestfriends. This is so (*sniffle*) inappropriate." Nicole pauses to not make a sound as she listens. Nicole hears Anna say "But I saw a dating profile you made and it says you seek a woman age 18 to 60. I am 18, an adult. The qualities you listed for your dream girl sounds just like me. I liked you since the first time Danielle made me hang out here." Nicole needs to sneeze. She pitches her nose trying to stop the sneeze. It didn't help. Eeeeeeggggooo. Anna and Lisa rushes out of Lisa's bedroom. A red nosed Lisa has a tissue in hand. Nicole says "I didn't hear anything." Anna says "There was nothing to hear." Lisa says "Agreed, (*sniffle*) we ever talk about (*sniffle*) this again." Lisa sneezes an acchhooowww into her tissue. 

[M214186]

Ahhhh so sneezy and filled with angst......

[MysteriousAuthor]

3 hours ago, M214186 said:

Ahhhh so sneezy and filled with angst......

Thank you for reading and for responding frequently. 

 

What is angst ? 

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 5: 

     The next day, Tuesday, Anna is buying allergy medication before school. Anna makes sure buys non-drowsy as drowsy made her make a huge mistake last night. After buying and taking some, she is driving to school and she is wondering why Nicole has not told Danielle what happen. She is sniflling as she is waiting for her allergy medication to kick in. She says to herself "Nicole did a (*sniffle*) solid keeping her mouth shut. It's (*sniffle*) not like her." Anna does a quick aacchhhiiiwwww in the air while driving. Anna feels for the first time that Nicole consides her a friend. Before now, Anna thought Nicole was only friendly to her because of Danielle. 

          When Anna gets to school and parks, walking to the building of the school, Anna gets sees tissue-holding red-nose sniffling Nicole sitting on a bench. Anna's heart metaphorically melts for Nicole. Anna knows too much now how it feels to get reject from a crush. Anna sits next to Nicole. Anna asks "How you doing today Kitty-Kat ?" Nicole says "I feel (*sniffle*) horrible. I got antibiotics for my sinus infection though." Anna puts her arm around Nicole. Anna says "I'm really (*sniffle*)  sorry about Danielle, and your sinuses." Anna accidently did an acchhhiiww right in Nicole's face. Anna feels guilty and embarrassed doing that, especially to the germophobic sad Nicole. Anna says "I'm so sorry." Nicole says "It's fine." Nicole blows her nose in a tissue. After the nose blow, Nicole gets up but she does a violent accchhooowww which caues her to fall. Anna helps Nicole to get up. Nicole says "I'm disgusting." Anna says "You're beautiful." Nicole gets her face close to Anna's face. Anna takes the hint and kisses Nicole. A group of shocked students look at the girls kissing, two of which are hand holding Danielle and Maddie. 

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 6: 

     The following Saturday, Maddie is in her apartment getting ready for a date with Danielle. She, out of character, puts on a fancy dress, heels, and makeup. Maddie wants their first offical date to go well. Walking out the door, Maddie sneezes a violent acccchhheeeeewwwww. Maddie stubbles. Maddie wondered why she sneezed. Come to think of it, her throat is a little scratchy. Maddie hopes she is not getting sick. 

       Driving to pick up Danielle, Maddie sneezes several times before arriving at Danielle's front door. Danielle opens the door and says "Wow !" Maddie says "I feel silly in a dress." Daniele says "You look gorgeous, as usual." Maddie smiles as Danielle goes to kiss her. Maddie turns her head and eeehhhhhheeeewwwwwooo in her hands. Maddie looks at Danielle as Danielle has a wide smile. Maddie asks "What ?" Daniele says "Nothing." 

       At the restaurant, a waitress is walking them to her table and Maddie sneezes a violent aaaaacccchoooowwweeehhhhaaaaa, she breaks her right heel and falls on the ground. The whole restaurent is looking at her. The tough Maddie is actually embarrassed. Danielle helps her up and they continue to their table. At the table, Maddie is sniffling. Maddie talks to distract Danielle from the memory of the sneeze and fall. Maddie says "I use you write (*sniffle*) what about you everynight in my diary. Too bad my stupid mom found it." Danielle says "I'm sorry that writing about me ruined your life." Maddie says "It's my stupid mom's fault (*sniffle*), she got so upset (*sniffle*) just because I like girls." Maddie sneezes a violent, loud aaaaaccccccchhhhoooowwwwwwwhhaaaaaaaaa. The restaurent is again looking her. The usually shy and quiet Danielle yets at the on lookers. Danielle shouts "Stop staring at us ! YES we ARE GIRLS on a DATE ! She has a cold she can't help SNEEZING !" Maddie is impressed Danielle did that. Danielle says to Maddie "I have a diary too. Everytime you sneezed I wrote about it because uh ....... I have a thing for sneezing, especially your's." Maddie says "That's (*sniffle*) the sweetest thing I ever heard." Maddie does a violent aaaaahhhh   ah ah ah aaaaaaaaaccccchhhhhhoooooowwwwwwwhhhhhhaaaa  aaaaccchhhhheeeewwww   aaaaccchhhooow   eeeecccchhhewww eeegggoooo egggggeeeee   accccchhhooowww. Danielle, this display was one of the most beautiful things she ever saw.

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 7: 

      The following Monday, Nicole is completely different. Though she haven't shaked off her sinus infection, she is really happy. Before school starts, she is on a bench on the outside of the school's building talking to her new girlfriend Anna. A sniffling red-nose Nicole says "Adrianna, you (*sniffle*) made me so happy. I can't believe I finally (*sniffle* *snifflee*) have a girlfriend. My first girlfriend." Anna says "I am happy too Kitty-Kat." Nicole says "I bet I (*sniffle*) am like your 10th or 20th girlfriend hehehehe." Anna says "That number is a little higher." Nicole frowns and says "Oh." Anna says "My 57th ?" Anna sniffles and asks "What ? How many go to this school ?" Anna says "40." Nicole says "40 out (*sniffle*) of a high school of about 2000 girls. That's 2 percent." Anna says "Hahahaha, sounds freakishly high when you say it like that." Nicole sneezes an eeeeeccchhhheeewwww. Anna says "Babe, don't overthink the number." Anna realizes how silly that sounds of all people not to overthink something bu before she can say something, Stacey approaches them. Stacey is a tall, skinny but curvy, long haired blonde. Stacey's body, face, hair, and skin intimidates Nicole. Stacey says "You look extra pretty Anna." Anna says "Uhhhh, thanks dude." Stacey looks at Nicole and says "Nicole yoy are so pretty too. Who says a girl with a face full of blemishes can't be pretty ? Have you ever tried proactiv Nicole ?" Nicole sneezes into her sneeze. This is one of the most embarrassing thing that ever happened to her. Stacey says "See you later, Anna." Stacey walks off, and Anna doesn't know what to say to Nicole. Nicole blows her nose as Anna says "Don't listen to her, you're still pretty." Anna knows 3how awkward her attempt at a compliment was. Anna says "Not that your zits would make you not pretty. I, I don't care how you look." Nicole says "Geee, (*sniffle*) thanks a alot (*sniffle*)." Nicole storms off.

      The Nicole is looking at herself in the mirror. The prectionist competitive Nicole can't help comparing herself to Stacey. She draws up mucus and spits in a tissue. She feels disgusted with herself. Projecting her views of herself on to Anna, Nicole thinks Anna must be disgusted with her too. She sneezes an eeeeegggghhheeee into the air. A very wet sneeze. 

           At lunchtime, walking in the cafeteria holding hands with Anna, a much sicker Nicole notices the amount of girls looking at Anna. Nicole knew all along Anna was popular and stuff, but she never realizes how much. The 2 girls sit with Danielle and Maddie. Nicole sneezes an eeeegggggeeee into a tissue. Danielle, the sneeze expert, asks "Are you sure you are okay Nicole ?" Nicole asks "What you mean ?" Danielle says "All your sneezes and coughs today are wetter and you sneeze like your throat hurts." Nicole and Anna both looks at Danielle with a strange look because of the fact Danielle notices that. Anna feels her forehead and says "You're burning up babe." Nicole coughs and Danielle says "Those coughs are from pharynitis not a post-nasal drip, and you are all sweaty and flushed. Maybe you caught the flu in addition to your bacterial sinusitis." Anna says "Babe, you should go home." Nicole looks and sees Stacey at another table staring at Anna. Nicole say "I'm find." Danielle says "You said I'm find and not I'm fine. You're not fine." Nicole sneeze a sniffle eeeeeeggggggoooowwwww. Nicole doesn't want to go home with girls like Stacey eyeing her girlfriend. 

       In the class after lunch, the teacher can't teach because Nicole's coughing is distracting. Several students push their desks to the other side of the classroom as to not get infected. The teacher had no choice but to send Nicole to the nurse. In the nurse's office, the nurse says "103.1, wow, I am surprised you ever tried to stay in class. You are very sick." Nicole says "I (*cough* *cough* *cough*) don't want to (*cough*) go home." The nurse says "I am afraid you have to, you likely caught the flu." 

      After school, Danielle visits a sick in bed Nicole. Danielle says "You look horrible." Danielle didn't know today was a very bad day to say that Nicole. Nicole says "I know (*sniffle*), I'm an ugly, flat chested (*sniffle*), zit faced, greasy haired nerd." Danielle says "Whoa that escalated quickly. Why would you say that ?" Nicole sneezed an eeeeggggoooo into a tissue and says "Anna dated 57 girls." Danielle asks "So what ?" Nicole says "I think (*sniffle*) the only girl to ever (*sniffle*) reject her as your mom." Danielle days "Whoa, your feve must be dangerously high. You are talking crazy." Nicole asks "Why (*sniffle*) you never liked me ? Is it (*sniffle*) because I am ugly and no fun ?" Danielle says "It's not that because you are plently beautiful and fun. It's because Maddie is the only one I ever liked and I never got over her." Nicole sit up and hugs Danielle, Nicole says "I never thought I would never like (*sniffle*) Anna not even as a friend but (*sniffle*) now I am crazy about her." Anna pushes open Nicole's door just inches. Anna sees Nicole and Daniele hugging. Anna leaves and neither Danielle nor Nicole heard her. 

[M214186]

I love how you do so many updates close together.....

[MysteriousAuthor]

13 hours ago, M214186 said:

I love how you do so many updates close together.....

You have yourself to thank for that. If someone shows interest in my writing, I can write. 

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 8: 

    The next day Nicole and Danielle wake in Nicole's bed. Nicole's mom, Lee, loves Danielle almost like a daughter and allows her to stay over at request. The 2 girls wake soaked in sweat with high fever. Sneezy, coughy, weak, and achy. Nicole sneezes a weak eeeehhhhooo. Uncovered as she feels so weak the act of putting her hands to her face seems like hard work. As the girls are face to face, that sneeze goes right into Danielle's face. The girls talk and Nicole realizes how silly she was being jealous, paranoid, and clingy. 

     Nicole focuses her weak body to text but Anna is not answering. Danielle is blowing her nose in a honk watching Nicole getting slowly agitated as Anna is taking too long to respond. Nicole goes an eeegggoooo before saying "Why is (*sniffle*) she not answering ?" Danielle says "I don't (*sniffle*) now. Maybe she is (*cough*) sick too." 

      Danielle is right, Anna is at home sick in bed but she is intentionally ignoring Nicole as she thinks Nicole is not over Danielle. Anna who is at home alone hears a knock at the front door of her house. She answers to see Stacey. Stacey says "Oh honey, you look so sick. Still beautiful." Before the sick Anna can ask Stacey to leave, Stacey walks in her house and closes the door. A heavily congested and hoarse Anna speaks words which politely ask Stacey to leave. Stacey who honestly didn't understand helps the sick Anna to her bedroom. When Anna is in her bed, Anna types on her phone and shows it to Stacey. It says (Please leave, Nicole is my girlfriend.) Stacey says "You know what, I don't need this. I know I am 100 times hotter than Nicole." Stacey storms out of Nicole's house. Anna decides to respond to Nicole's text. The 2 girls sort out all the confusions. 

[M214186]

I am so happy to read what you write..... 

[elizachoo]

This is like a sneezy soap opera! I'm enjoying it very much.

[MysteriousAuthor]

On 3/3/2018 at 0:29 AM, M214186 said:

I am so happy to read what you write..... 

Thank you so much.

 

On 3/3/2018 at 1:32 AM, elizachoo said:

This is like a sneezy soap opera! I'm enjoying it very much.

Thank you so much also.

[MysteriousAuthor]

PART 9: 

   The next day, Stacey finds herself soaked in sweat, red nosed, and sneezy in a doctor's office as her wealthy parents are willing to spend to make sure their daughter is okay. The doctor is Danielle's mother, Lisa. Their connection is unknown to both women. Stacey finds herself attracted to the lady who is older than her mother. 

          Lisa says "The quick test confirmed you do instead have influenza. I have written down some medications you can take to help with the symptoms. Bed rest and lots of water for you." Stacey says "Thank (*cough* *cough* *cough*) you." Stacey not wanting to leave ask "Can (*sniffle*) you (*cough* *cough* *cough*) check my (*sniffle*) forehead ?" There was no reason to do that because Lisa already check her temperature. Lisa takes the hint that this lady wants to stay. Lisa feels her sweaty feverish forehead. Stacey asks "Am I (*cough* *cough* *cough* *cough* *cough*) hottest girl you've seen today ?" 

       Hours later, Lisa is sneaking Stacey into her home. Lisa had told Stacey on the ride over that she has a daughter who is sick at home who doesn't know she is trying to date. When upstairs, Stacey does an aaaaccchhhhheeewww. The sneeze expert, Danielle, recognizes the sneeze and despite being weak from the flu, she bolts out of bedroom in the hallway. Danielle asks "Stacey ?" Stacey asks "Danielle ?" Lisa says "Oh no no no no. Why do you know each other ? Oh no." Stacey says "Danielle (*sniffle*) is a classmate ?" Danielle asks "Mom, why is (*sniffle*) she here ?" Lisa doesn't answer. Stacey says "I'm your mother's date." Lisa says to Danielle "Danielle, you are hallucinating from your fever. Your clasmate is not here." Stacey laughs at Lisa's attempt to confuse her daughter, a laugher which turns into coughing. Stacey says to Lisa "I can call an Uber, and we can (*sniffle*)go  to my house, my parents are not home." Danielle looks at her mother, and her mother seems to be thinking about doing it. Danielle shouts "Mother !" Lisa says "Go back to bed sweetheart. I have to go buy, uh, milk. Also don't tell anyone about your hallucinations." Danielle goes back into her bedroom and starts texts only Maddie about this.

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