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This is a new story, may or may not be a one-shot. Hope you enjoy.


Trystan- 5’7”, fair skin, blue eyes with straight blonde hair

Julian- 5’11”, caramel skin, hazel eyes with tight curly dark brown hair

Alex- 6’2”, caramel skin, hazel eyes with tight curly dark brown hair

Eliza- 5’8”, tan skin, green eyes, and light brown wavy hair


“Trystan! Trystan! Open up!” 

Julian yelled and pounded in Trystan’s door. Falling faster than the knocks on the door, the rain pelted him and left him soaked to the bone.

“I can’t do it anymore Julian! The rumors these girls keep spreading, it’s too much.”

”It doesn’t matter what they say, they’re just jealous!”

”Jealous or not, they’re ruining my life.”

”We can make this work, please you’re my everything. I love you.”

”And I love you but I can’t handle this.”

”We can do this together.”

There was no reply.


”If you really loved me, you’d want to see my happy.”

”I do, but I want you to be happy with me. Didn’t I make you happy?”

Again no answer. 


When the silence lasted more than ten seconds, he sat down and put his head in his hands. He wasn’t even thinking about being soaked, his heart hurt. Maybe she’d change her mind and coming running back. He sat there for 10 sniffle-filled moments that, before he knew it, turned into 20.

He finally got up and walked back to his dorm. He dried off and changed his clothes, then went to sleep. He slowly woke up to his alarm. He laid there for a good two seconds before a tickling sensation filled his nose. He brought the crook of his arm up and waited for his breathing to start hitching. 

It tickled like a million fire ants carrying a million feathers.

”Hehh,” his body shuddered quickly, “Huh huhhh...hhhhh...hupt!”

His body pitched forward. He sniffled and realized his nose was kinda stuffed up. He half breathed through his nose, half through his mouth. His breath started hitching again.

“Oh no...hhh-hupt’chh!”

His alarm went off again and he looked at it this time: Game Day. GAME DAY?! Today was the game that made up his older brother/team captain/Jonas’s future. 

He looked at the time. He had about 30 minutes to get ready before Eliza, aka Honey Bee/Alex’s girlfriend, came to get him. He sprang up and immediately  felt dizzy like the world was spinning.

He sat back down for a second before getting back up and stumbling to the bathroom. He took a shower and then put on his football windbreaker, adidas pants, and adidas sandals. 

He brushed his teeth and then looked at himself in the mirror. He looked like death warmed over. He felt like death, like he could barely even keep himself upright. His legs felt like noodles and he was pretty sure he was shaking from his shoulders to his ankles.

He couldn’t let Honey Bee see him like that, she wouldn’t let him play..and he needed to play. His nose started tickling and he let his breath start hitching. Then suddenly there was a knock at the door. Crap! 

He rubbed his nose until he didn’t feel the itch as bad. He went to answer the door. 

“Hey JuJu,” Honey Bee greeted. 

“Hey Honey Bee,” he said as enthusiastically as he could. 

“Ready to get Alex into Madison?”

James Madison was Alex’s dream college. 

“You know it.”

”Ok lemme just use your bathroom real quick and then we’ll be on our way to the field.”

Julian nodded and Honey Bee went to the bathroom. Once he was sure she was in the bathroom, he sat down knowing that he needed a break. He felt so weak and he just didn’t know how he could do this. He was a mess. His nose started tickling. One of his eyes closed from how it tickled.

He heard the toilet flush and tried not to give into the sensation taking over his nose.


He put one of his fingers under his nose but his breathing was still hitching madly and he could feel his nostril twitching. His nose tickled even more than it did when he woke up. He started shaking from the breaths and the tingles and just being so sick.

He took a deep hitching breath and pinched his nose shut with the force of both hands, the last attempt at..


He pitched forward and shook violently from the half-sneeze.

”Hupt! Hupt! Hup..hupt’chh! Hupt’chh! HUPT’CHOO!”

He shook harder with each sneeze. The last one sounded so rough and sickly, his cheeks turned red and he didn’t know whether to be angry or embarrassed. He sniffles to prevent his stuffy nose from leaking.

Even the sniffle sounded sickly, it was a squelching sound that made both of them shudder a little.

”Aww honey, you sound absolutely miserable,” she cooed.


Those ones snuck up on him, but he still managed to cover them up. 

“Bless you. You should be laying down. How long have you felt like this?”

She took his arm and led him back to his bed. 

“Sindce this mbornding, but I’mb finde,” he said quickly.

”You don’t sound fine. Now lay down.”

”But the game..Alex, I don’t wannda-.”

He started coughing. He covered his mouth with his fist.

”You don’t wanna let him down?”

He nodded, coughing harshly.

”JuJu, you’re sick. I’m pretty sure Alex would understand.”

”Then you don’t kndow how he acts towards mbe.”


Again..hope you enjoyed. X

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