Contagion on the train

[sneezy24]

Hello everyone, I'm fairly new to the forum and this is my first attempt at writing, I've gone with something I enjoy myself so I hope you do too. 

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For once, the station hadn’t been too crowded, Eve got onto her train and entered the unreserved carriage. Slowly she walked down the train listening out for any tell tale sniffles or coughs. It was the middle of December, peak cold and flu season and she was desperate to catch her own. She knew this train journey was the perfect opportunity if she could just strike lucky with her seat. Then she heard it, a very muffled ‘Hacheew’. She moved a little further up the aisle then she saw her, a youngish looking lady clutching a tissue to her nose. Eve slid into the empty seat at the side of her, placed her bag under the seat and took out her book. 

As she was reading, Eve kept making small sideways glances at the lady, she was sniffling almost constantly and swiping at her pink tinged nose with her incredibly soggy looking tissue. Eve didn’t dare look fully at her, she didn’t want the woman to think she was staring at her but she could tell that this was the cold she had been dying to catch. 

Around 5minutes into the journey, the ladies breath began to hitch again. Eve lowered her book and turned slightly to watch, the lady had closed her eyes and had that almost pained pre-sneeze expression that told Eve this sneeze would not be stifled. Then, she exploded into her same, already destroyed tissue:   AHH-AHH-CHOOOOO, HE-CHOOOO, HECHEWWWW.  This triple had clearly started off a huge river in the ladies nose as she wiped vigorously at her nostrils and sniffed hard. She sounded so full and congested and was clearly struggling to breathe. Eve took her chance, “Bless you,”  she said. 

“Thangk you,” the woman replied before a very gurgly SNUFFF.

“Would you like some more tissues?” Eve offered, hoping to start a conversating with this poor lady so she might breathe on her. 

“ Oh, des please!” she gushed gratefully, “I used up by last one earlier and have beed drying to madage with this last one for too londg”. She took the pack Eve offered out to her and blew a huge, long gurgly blow that didn’t even nearly clear her think congestion. It took a full three tissues before she gave up. Eve thought excitedly that the very last blow had been just as full as the first, this was the worst cold she’d seen for a while. Eve also noticed that the lady had dropped the used tissues onto the floor in front of them. 

“You sound as if you needed that,” Eve commented. 

“Yes, I caught this at work this last week, I was wondering if I should wait to take this trip but I’d bought the tickets so I decided to be brave about it…” she paused and Eve realised that she was hitching her breath again. She was facing Eve now and she could see the womans red raw nostrils flaring before AH-AH-AAAHCHOOOOO, EH-HECHOOOO, HECHIEEEEW. She sighed then blew another huge, gurgling blow into one of Eve’s tissues, even though she had covered, Eve was hopeful that some germs would be escaping and breathed in deeply. Just then, the announcement came through that the train was approaching the next station, 

“Well,” the woman said wearily, “This is me,” She stood up and began shrugging on her coat. “Thangks again for the dissues.” She said and took one last one before handing Eve the packet back. 

“No problem, feel better soon!” Eve insisted before taking the packet and clasping it tightly in her hand, thinking gleefully of the germs that would have covered the pack from the woman’s hands that were now all over hers. 

Eve stood to let the lady out of the seat then shuffled back to sit where she had been sat, taking care to put her hands in the same places as hers had just been. As the train moved off again, now sat alone, Eve reached down and gathered up the tissues left by the lady and rubbed the wet, soggy pieces all over her hands. She lifted one to her own nose and wiped it, breathing in deeply. After she was sure she had done all she could, she lifted her book again, making sure to lick her fingers before turning each page. 

A few hours later, Eve arrived at her station and got off with her bags, heading home gleefully to see if she came down with anything over the next few days….

[Jeff1]

Very nicely written.  Hope you continue!

[NoV]

Thanks for posting this - its well written, and I would definitely encourage you to write more  

By the way, welcome to the forum   

[MzMental]

I love it! Well written, has a good pace. Hopefully we get to see Eve with this doozey of a cold

[M214186]

Please do continue this 

[medstudent]

I'd love to hear more about this story! I love stories about people trying to catch colds from sneezing people-- it actually reminds me of an obs that was posted several years ago about a sneezy woman on the bus

[Geminerdi]

OK, I'm in. Definitely in. Would definitely read more if you posted more and would NOT complain about it either!

[Guest]

Love this..please continue 

[sneezy24]

Thank you all! I was really nervous posting my first time. Here's part 2...

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A couple of days later, Eve woke up and swallowed hard. There was a scratchy feeling in the back of her throat that wouldn’t shift. She sat up and coughed a little, then from the back of her nose she felt a wet AH-CHOO. She sniffled then grinned to herself. The plan had worked. 

She got up and began getting ready for work. Her cold wasn’t too bad yet so she might be able to pass it on to some people at the office. She kept sniffling and she could feel her nose getting bunged up to match her razor-sharp sore throat. On her way out of the front door, she grabbed a pocket pack of tissues and some soothers – just in case!

Eve walked quickly to the tube station, sniffling heavily as she walked. She was just in time for her usual train and as the doors closed behind her, she felt a huge tickle building up in her nose. She reached into her pocket for a tissue and waited. She knew she would have to cover but she still wanted to pass this cold on if she could. Suddenly, she breathed in deeply before raising the tissue to her nose and releasing a very wet sounding HI-CHEEW, AH-CHOOW. After this double, she needed to blow her nose which was very gurgly and several passengers turned to stare at her. She knew it must have sounded coldy. Then, instead of thrusting the tissue back into her pocket, she curled in into the hand she was using to hold the tube rail. ‘This’ll pass on a few germs,’ she thought to herself. However, these sneezes had switched on a tap and her nose was now running. She could feel the watery liquid trying to escape her nose and sniffled again. This set off another tickle so again she brought the tissue to her nose AH-HA-CHOOO, HICHEEEW, HACHOOOO she groaned a little before trying to blow but the congestion was making it more difficult. 

This cold is evil she realised, there was no way she was going to keep this secret at the office. 

Her tube stop arrived and, still wiping her nose, she walked the last few steps to her office. As usual she hung her coat on her chair and then placed her tissues and soothers on her desk. She moved the bin closer to her chair, having a feeling she may need it. 

“Morning Eve!” came the cheery greeting from her best friend and desk-mate Julie. 

“bording,” she replied with a huge SNORKKK.

“Oh dear, you don’t sound great?” Julie questioned. 

“do,” Eve replied “I was Ok firsdt thig bud dow I’m so condgested” Eve blew her nose into a fresh tissue. She knew Julie would be catching this horrendous cold. 

They started their work and apart from the occasional sniffling and nose blowing from Eve, their desk was fairly silent, eventually, Julie sat back, “Is it coffee time?” she asked. Eve sighed, “OOH, des please!” She smiled at her friend who got up to make the drinks. 

When she placed it into Eve’s hands, Eve made sure to brush fingertips. The coffee was hot and the steam got up into her nostrils, AHCHOO, she sneezed suddenly and completely uncovered as both her hands were gripping the coffee cup. “SORRY!” she exclaimed, “Jules I’m so sorry, you’ve made my coffee and I go and sneeze on you!” 

“It’s OK,” Julie replied, “Your struggling so much this morning I doubt I’ll escape this one anyway!” Eve smiled to herself, so Julie had accepted the inevitable had she?

A couple of hours later, Eve felt more sneezes building up in the back of her nose. Julie was concentrating on something so she took her opportunity. She lifted a tissue but as she released her wet, messy sneezes, she missed slightly, spraying the desk and Julie in her germs, AH-CHIEWWWWW HECHOOO. HE-HACHIWWWWW. She blew her nose then grabbed the edge of the desk with her tissue hand, wiping it along as she did so. By the end of the day, Eve counted she had possibly sneezed on Julie 5 times and the desk must have been covered in her sickness. 

By the time she got home, Eve had started to feel really run down because of her cold, but she knew she would still be in work tomorrow to see who else she might be able to pass it onto, and of course to watch Julie come down with it...

[Scandinavius]

That is some good contagion, nice writing. I like how Eve is deliberate but discreet about sharing her cold.

[M214186]

Will you be continuing with the story 

[macrotwentytwo]

I think she should go out shopping or out with friends orrr to a meeting or in an elevator or focus on other co-workers orrrr watch julie catch it and watch julie spread it too (unintentionally but possibly surprisingly more effectively than eve)

[poiub]

Very nice indeed, there's definitely something about public transport stories that strikes a chord with me!

[Likesn]

Welcome to the forum! I so like F/F contagion stories, and yours seemed to be going just the way I like it ;) Please continue.

[CheekyGuy]

That's a gorgeous story - Eve is cute but very wicked, wanting to get lots of other women (including herself) pumping up thick snot plentifully! Have you actually sat deliberately next to someone you thought was going to be doing some big blows?

 

Really hope you'll write some more stories along these lines.

[guitrman53]

I really enjoyed this one, great storytelling. I think I'd be kinda cool for her to meet up with that woman she caught her cold from, and the tables would be turned. 

[NickG1998]

Please continue this amazing story and keep up the good work 

[RedVelvetHeart]

Oh my goodness. Love this! You know this type of thing is exactly what I like but I am too shy to write it!

[CPrime97]

Great story. Hope you continue this story.

[Carost]

Absolutely marvelous. Im on my way to find more similar stories.

[Should I bless]

Love this stuff!

[Leasneezingfit]

On 12/22/2018 at 10:21 PM, sneezy24 said:

Hello everyone, I'm fairly new to the forum and this is my first attempt at writing, I've gone with something I enjoy myself so I hope you do too. 

_______________________

 

For once, the station hadn’t been too crowded, Eve got onto her train and entered the unreserved carriage. Slowly she walked down the train listening out for any tell tale sniffles or coughs. It was the middle of December, peak cold and flu season and she was desperate to catch her own. She knew this train journey was the perfect opportunity if she could just strike lucky with her seat. Then she heard it, a very muffled ‘Hacheew’. She moved a little further up the aisle then she saw her, a youngish looking lady clutching a tissue to her nose. Eve slid into the empty seat at the side of her, placed her bag under the seat and took out her book. 

As she was reading, Eve kept making small sideways glances at the lady, she was sniffling almost constantly and swiping at her pink tinged nose with her incredibly soggy looking tissue. Eve didn’t dare look fully at her, she didn’t want the woman to think she was staring at her but she could tell that this was the cold she had been dying to catch. 

Around 5minutes into the journey, the ladies breath began to hitch again. Eve lowered her book and turned slightly to watch, the lady had closed her eyes and had that almost pained pre-sneeze expression that told Eve this sneeze would not be stifled. Then, she exploded into her same, already destroyed tissue:   AHH-AHH-CHOOOOO, HE-CHOOOO, HECHEWWWW.  This triple had clearly started off a huge river in the ladies nose as she wiped vigorously at her nostrils and sniffed hard. She sounded so full and congested and was clearly struggling to breathe. Eve took her chance, “Bless you,”  she said. 

“Thangk you,” the woman replied before a very gurgly SNUFFF.

“Would you like some more tissues?” Eve offered, hoping to start a conversating with this poor lady so she might breathe on her. 

“ Oh, des please!” she gushed gratefully, “I used up by last one earlier and have beed drying to madage with this last one for too londg”. She took the pack Eve offered out to her and blew a huge, long gurgly blow that didn’t even nearly clear her think congestion. It took a full three tissues before she gave up. Eve thought excitedly that the very last blow had been just as full as the first, this was the worst cold she’d seen for a while. Eve also noticed that the lady had dropped the used tissues onto the floor in front of them. 

“You sound as if you needed that,” Eve commented. 

“Yes, I caught this at work this last week, I was wondering if I should wait to take this trip but I’d bought the tickets so I decided to be brave about it…” she paused and Eve realised that she was hitching her breath again. She was facing Eve now and she could see the womans red raw nostrils flaring before AH-AH-AAAHCHOOOOO, EH-HECHOOOO, HECHIEEEEW. She sighed then blew another huge, gurgling blow into one of Eve’s tissues, even though she had covered, Eve was hopeful that some germs would be escaping and breathed in deeply. Just then, the announcement came through that the train was approaching the next station, 

“Well,” the woman said wearily, “This is me,” She stood up and began shrugging on her coat. “Thangks again for the dissues.” She said and took one last one before handing Eve the packet back. 

“No problem, feel better soon!” Eve insisted before taking the packet and clasping it tightly in her hand, thinking gleefully of the germs that would have covered the pack from the woman’s hands that were now all over hers. 

Eve stood to let the lady out of the seat then shuffled back to sit where she had been sat, taking care to put her hands in the same places as hers had just been. As the train moved off again, now sat alone, Eve reached down and gathered up the tissues left by the lady and rubbed the wet, soggy pieces all over her hands. She lifted one to her own nose and wiped it, breathing in deeply. After she was sure she had done all she could, she lifted her book again, making sure to lick her fingers before turning each page. 

A few hours later, Eve arrived at her station and got off with her bags, heading home gleefully to see if she came down with anything over the next few days….

Mhh, really nice 😋