Oolia Posted August 10, 2021 Share Posted August 10, 2021 I've managed to write a quick one-shot, which is pretty rare for me! This one is loosely inspired by something that happened to me when I was in college (I've changed all appearances and personalities, so no one is recognizable of course, including me). I just thought it was a great jumping point for a group-of-friend platonic care-taking type of fic, although there's a budding little romance thrown in there too đ Hope you enjoy!  Friday Night Fever Annabel left the sandwich shop at the end of her evening shift, feeling the cold autumn air seep through her jacket. Darkness had blanketed the town hours ago, and college students were already filling the streets on their way to the bars to celebrate the end of the week. Not that theyâd really needed a reason to drink, of course. As she launched the trash bags in the large dumpster in the back alley, Annabel felt an uncomfortable shiver running down her back. Sheâd been feeling under the weather for a couple of days, downing vitamin C fizzy drinks to stave it off. What sheâd hoped would end up being a little annoying cold was turning out to be more than sheâd bargained for. She could feel the icy tendrils of a fever crawling on her skin, and all she wanted to do was slip under the covers of her warm bed and sleep all weekend. Her phone pinged as she started making her way back to her apartment. Finn: Weâll be there in 40 minutes. Zack wants to pick up some pregame vodka from the store first. Annabel sighed. Sheâd met Zack, Finn and Alex at her second jobâa fancy new restaurant in the heart of town where sheâd been waitressing part-time for the past two months. Theyâd hit it off on opening day, when Zack had accidentally broken a whole stack of plates. No one had seen what had happened but the four of them. Zack had gotten his dishwasherâs apron stuck on the door handle, and his hands had slipped at the sudden pull. The crash had been deafening. Right before the owner had rushed in to ask what had happened, Zackâs best friend, Finn, had kicked the wheel of the cart where the plates had been sitting a few moments ago, giving Alexander and Annabel a knowing look. Theyâd all told the owner that the cart was broken and had tipped over without anyone touching it. Somehow, the owner had bought the lie. That night, Zack insisted on paying them a round of shots at the bar, and a tradition was born: The four of them. Every Friday. With lots of alcohol. It was the only time Annabel let loose. With her two jobs and college, she was struggling to find free time, but Friday nights had become sacred. There was nothing like downing drinks and letting the buzz take over, following her three new friends wherever they wanted to go. It was always an adventure. Especially with Zack at the helm. But tonight, there was no way she could make it. Annabel: Actually, I canât come tonight. Sorry. She walked past a group of friends laughing and hollering, wishing sheâd felt as good as they did. But the headache growing behind her eyes wasnât going to let up, and adding alcohol to the mix would only make it worse. Not only that, but her nose had started running in the past two hours. Sheâd had to go blow it in the restroom every half hour, getting herself banished from the front of the store by the manager. Sheâd washed her hands so often that her skin was almost raw. Just like her nose. Finn: Nah, youâre coming. Nobody cancels Friday night. Come on. Annabel couldnât hold a smile. She typed back, sniffling. Her sinuses were prickling like crazy, as if sheâd accidentally inhaled a cloud of tiny fireworks. She stifled a sneeze in the crook of her elbow, mid-word. âEhhâEhhâKSHHeeww!â Her eyes watered from the force of it. She wiped the tears away and resumed typing. Annabel: Iâll make it up to you guys next weekend. Drinks on me. She grabbed a crumpled tissue from her jacket pocket and dabbed at her nose. Her apartment was only a few blocks away, beckoning her. As she crossed the last stretch of sidewalk to the entrance, she kept checking her phone. No reply. Shrugging, she unlocked the front door and took the stairs.  ***  Back in her apartment, she made a beeline for the bathroom to the right and used toilet paper to blow her nose, finally free to make as much noise as she wanted. She winced from the roughness of it on her chapped nostrils, but it was all she had. She wasnât exactly the planning type. Her idea of a grocery list was memorizing the first three items and hoping the rest would come to her as she walked through the aisles. Most often than not, sheâd have to make a quick run at the convenience store down the street to get what sheâd forgotten. She gathered her thick curly hair into a bun and looked at herself in the mirror. It was enough to confirm that sheâd made the right decision. Her eyes were glazed over, her skin was so pale that her freckles popped like they did in the summer. Except for that slight flush high on her cheeks, of course. She popped a thermometer under her tongue and removed her work clothes, leaving them in a pile in front of the bathtub. Shivering from the sudden change in temperature, she covered her arms with her hands and ran to her dresser. Her warmest, softest sweater was the first thing she grabbed and put on, before throwing on a pair of comfy leggings and wool socks. The thermometer beeped. 100.8 °F. Figured. She rolled her eyes and shuffled over to the âkitchenâ of her studio apartment, which was the size of a matchbox and only contained a mini fridge, a microwave and an old sink. She poured herself some water and walked over to the bed, placing her glass and the thermometer on her nightstand. She would have brought over medicine as well, but sheâd run out last semester after catching the flu going around campus, and had forgotten to replenish her stash. No matter. She could sleep this off. It was just a cold. She suddenly sneezed twice in a row, as if her body wanted to protest her minimizing her illness, then got under the cover. Just as she was getting a little warmer, propping up her laptop to watch a movie, there was a knock at the door. Annabel sat up, startled. âAnna, open up!â a voice said behind the door. Zack. Annabel chuckled. Of course they wouldnât give up that easily. She groaned, getting out of the warmth of her bed. She considered rushing to the dresser and putting on cuter clothesâthey were her friends, but they were still boys, and she didnât want to look like shit in front of themâbut the thought of it was enough to drain her energy. Screw it. She walked over to the door and opened it. âFinn told us you donât want to come,â said Zack as he walked in. It was her friendsâ first time coming up to her apartment. Theyâd usually wait for her downstairs. âSo weâre here to change your mind.â He didnât look at her, too busy checking out her place. He was dressed for the nightâa buttoned-up shirt, navy blazer, jeans and dress shoes. His casual chic style always stood out in the local bars filled with broke college students, but he liked it that way. Finn walked in after him, a crooked grin on his lips. âSee, I told you you canât cancel Friday night.â His shaggy blond hair half-covered his eyes, as always. Finn and Zack had been best friends since high school, and couldnât have been more different from each other. At least physically. Finn was tall and lanky, Zack was smaller and worked out a lot. But they were both party guys, always ready for a crazy nightâeven though Finn was a bit more mellow than Zack. Finally, Alex came in, and Annabel closed the door behind him. He had a sheepish look on his face, as if apologizing for the other two. He was a lot more like Annabel. Quiet, chill, along for the rideâwhatever it may be. His deep brown eyes held her gaze for a second too long, and Annabel noticed one of his eyebrow raise ever so slightly. She bit her lip, feeling self-conscious about her appearance. Theyâd never seen her in such a state before. Thank god she hadnât had the energy to remove her makeup yet. âSo this is where you live, uh?â Zack said, sitting on her desk chair and spinning it around and around. âI like it. Dorms suck.â Before she could reply, Finn tsked. âWow. So no love for your roommate, uh?â âDude, I love you,â Zack said, âbut between you and an apartment all to myself, the choice is obvious.â He stopped spinning and turned to Annabel, crossing his arms over his chest. âSo whatâs so important that you canât come with us? Do you have a date?â All three boys turned to her. Annabel almost laughed. Could they not see the condition she was in? She cleared her throat. âNo, Iâm just not feeling well.â Finn sat on the edge of her bed and examined her from afar. âLike what? Stomach thing? Flu?â âProbably a cold, I guess.â Annabel could feel Alexâs gaze on her at her side. She glanced at him, then looked down, feeling silly. Now that she was saying it out loud, it sounded like a poor excuse. But she did have a fever, after all. She just didnât want to start listing her symptoms. Zack clasped his hands together. âYou know what will make you feel better? Alcohol!â He grinned, as if proud of his solution. âDidnât they used to give brandy to people when they were sick? Weâll make a special mix for your throat. Something with lemon and orange juice. Youâll be fine.â âI donât know, I already have a headacheâŠâ Annabel said. âJust take a couple of Tylenol. Itâs like a hangover in advance,â Finn said with an encouraging smile. âOne time, I went out clubbing with an ear infection and everything was fine. Actually felt better the next day, weirdly enough.â âI donât know guys, I wonât be much fun ifââ Annabel was interrupted by a fierce tickle deep in her nose, spreading like wildfire. She ducked to her side, away from Alex. âEhhâKSSHeeew! âKSSSHeeew!â âBless you,â the three boys said almost in unison. âSee?â Annabel said, pointing at her nose and sniffling. âYou want me to sneeze all over you guys all night?â Finn shrugged. âWeâll bring tissues. Whatever.â Alex walked over to the bathroom and grabbed the toilet paper roll from the counter, then handed it to her. âHere.â Annabel ripped a piece off and wiped her nose. âThanks,â she said, sheepish. Alexâs gaze paused on her for a few seconds before he turned to the other two. âGuys, sheâs obviously sick. Letâs just go and let her sleep.â âItâs just a cold,â Zack said. âSheâs young and healthy. Itâs nothing.â He got up and put his arm around her shoulders. âCome on. Give it an hour, and if youâre not feeling better after a few shots, weâll walk you home.â Annabel considered it for a second, trying to fight the shivers. Maybe if she wore something warm and took a few shots, she would feel better. Numb the pain a little, at least. While she pondered it, Finn laid down on top of her bed spread and locked eyes with the thermometer on her nightstand. He frowned and sat up, picking it up. He looked at her, thermometer in hand. His voice softened. âItâs that bad, uh?â Annabel blushed. Why did admitting that she had a fever feel so vulnerable? She looked down and nodded. âKinda.â Zack looked at the thermometer, then back at Annabel. He narrowed his eyes and put a hand on her forehead. âOoof,â he said, a hint of concern slipping in his tone. Finn got up. âLet me see,â he said, walking up to her and placing his own hand on her forehead. His eyebrows shot up. âYikes.â âYeah, you need to be in bed,â Zack finally said, guiding her back to bed. âWhy didnât you say you had a fever? Jesus, Anna.â She shrugged, sitting on her mattress. âI donât know. I just get fevers with colds. I guess itâs normal for me.â âFevers suck,â Finn said. âLast time I had one, I stayed in bed for two days and everything hurt.â He walked over to the front door. âWeâll miss you tonight, though.â Zack followed. âHope you feel better. Weâll text you all the crazy shit thatâs going to happen so you donât miss anything.â He followed Finn out of the apartment, leaving the door open for Alex. Alex watched them walk by, then grabbed the roll of toilet paper on the counter where Annabel had left it. He brought it over to her nightstand and gave her a sad smile. âDo you need anything?â Annabel shook her head, relieved that she was going to be able to stay in bed. âIâll be okay.â He seemed to hesitate for a second, then nodded. âLet us know if you want us to get you food later. I know I can never sleep when I have a fever.â âThank you.â She smiled. Her nose scrunched up, overtaken by another annoying prickle. âEhh⊠IihhâKSSSHHeeww!â âBless you.â Zackâs voice sounded from the hallway. âAlex, you coming?â Alex snickered. âI guess I should go.â He walked to the door, then turned back. âFeel better, okay?â âI will. Thanks.â  ***  Annabel tried to sleep, but her fever and runny nose kept waking her up, leaving her floating halfway between dreams and reality. It was clear that she wasnât going to get any rest in her state. She needed cold medicine. It took her a long time to finally convince herself to get out of bed and go to the convenience store, but she managed to push the covers away and get up. She shivered, causing another tickle in her sensitive noseâit had only gotten worse in the hour since the boys had left. She ducked at the waist in an exhausting triple. âEhh⊠HehhâKSSSHeeeew! âKSSHHeeew! HiihhâKSSHeeew!â Just then, another knock sounded at the door. Annabel frowned and made her way to the door, cracking it open. It was Alex. Alone. âBless you,â he said with a shy grin. Annabel let him in. âArenât you supposed to be out with the guys?â He shrugged, closing the door behind him. âI thought you might need this.â He showed her a plastic bag filled with tea, tissue boxes, ramen, cough drops andâshe gaspedâcold medicine. Alex chuckled. âSo I was right. You donât have any medicine, do you?â Annabel laughed. âHow did you know?â âYour nightstand. You only had a thermometer on there. When Iâm sick, I take Nyquil everywhere I go.â He handed her the bag. âAnd I wanted to make sure you had tissues instead of toilet paper. Your nose will thank me.â Annabel touched her chapped nose, smiling. âThatâs so sweet of you. Thank you.â âItâs nothing.â He stood there for a second, as if not knowing what to say. âIâll uhâIâll let you rest.â Before he could go, Annabel put her hand on his elbow. âWait. Do you want toââ She stopped halfway through her sentence, her nose scrunching up yet again, her eyes fluttering. She spun around and sneezed, covering her nose with the sleeve of her sweater. âHehhâKSSHH! HtâKsshht!â She turned back around, blinking away the tears and laughing. âSorry!â Alex laughed, too. âBless you.â He held her gaze, then looked down. âWhat were you going to say?â âOhâI was just wondering ifâmaybe if youâd like to watch a movie with me. I donât think I can sleep until the medicine kicks in.â As soon as the words left her mouth, she regretted saying them. Of course he didnât want to watch a movie with her. This was Friday night. What kind of college guy wanted to hang out with a sick, sneezy, nose-drippy girl on a Friday night instead of getting drunk with his friends. âSorry,â she added quickly, âI forgot that the guys are probably waiting for you. I guess Iâm kind of loopy from the fever.â Alex took a step forward and placed his hand on her forehead. The gesture was so gentle, so soft, that Annabel closed her eyes, appreciating the coldness of his palm on her hot skin. âYou are definitely burning up,â he half-whispered, frowning. âI was wondering if the guys were exaggerating. Guess not.â Annabel bit her lip. âIâll be okay after I take the medicine. You donât have to stay.â Alex removed his hand. âI do,â he blurted. âI mean, I do want to watch a movie with you. And stay.â âAre you sure?â Annabel asked through her blossoming smile. âArenât you worried youâll catch my cold?â âActually, I have a confession to make.â Alex led her to the bed and placed the content of his bag on her nightstand. âLast Friday, I kind of had a cold. It wasnât as bad as yours, pretty minor, but⊠Zack convinced me to come out anyway and IâI think I might have given it to you. You drank out of my glass and I didnât have time to stop you.â He looked at her, his eyes wide with guilt. âIâm so, so sorry.â Annabel laughed. âI canât believe Zack didnât rat you out earlier. It would have been the perfect example of someone going clubbing with a cold and âbeing fineâ anyway.â âHe probably knew it was partly his fault that youâre sick and didnât want to admit it.â Annabel shook her head. âWell, you owe me a Friday night.â She got into bed and patted the spot next to her. âThat means I get to pick the movies.â Alex grabbed the throw blanket at her feet and draped it over her. âThat sounds fair.â He walked over to the other side of the bed and settled next to her. âBut when you fall asleep, I canât guarantee I wonât change it.â âDeal.â After taking a dose of Nyquil, Annabel started the movie, snuggling under the blanket. She wondered what kind of crazy adventures Zack and Finn were getting themselves into. She expected to feel FOMO, but instead, she shot a glance at Alex next to her, and realized she wouldnât want to be anywhere else. Maybe it was the fever, or maybe it was Alexâs shoulder touching hers, but it felt like this was the start of a different kind of adventure. Maybe not alcohol-fueled, but Nyquil was pretty close. All because theyâd shared a not-so-secret cold. And Annabel had a feeling it would be worth the fever. And the countless sneezes to come.  THE END  Link to comment
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