Jane and Kathy

[ShamanBodyan]

Hello everyone! It's my first writing here. English is not my native language, so I can make grammar mistakes. Don't be afraid to talk about it and point out mistakes. Thank you!

I prefer female sneezing ( especially with handkerchiefs), so maybe l will avoid tissues in this story ( or use them rarely) and I will avoid male sneezing. Waiting for your suggestions.

Jane woke up in the morning with a slight sore throat, but decided not to pay attention to it.She had a day off and decided to lie in bed for a while. After 20 minutes, Jane got up, put on sweatpants and hoodies. Suddenly she felt a tickle in her nose.Akchoo! She sneezed softly and femininely, covering her nose with her hand. Jane rubbed her nose with her fingers, but only elicited another sneeze:Apchoo! She felt a trickle of snot on her upper lip. Jane opened her bedside drawer and pulled out the first handkerchief she came across.It was her boyfriend's big blue cotton handkerchief that he once gave her. She carefully wiped off the mess and blew her nose.This calmed her nose flow for a while. Jane decided to make chicken soup for the common cold. When she finished, she decided to pepper the soup, but inhaled the pepper. This caused an incredible tickling in her nose. She turned away from the plate, but did not have time to cover her face with a handkerchief that was in her pocket. Akshu! She was able to suppress the first sneeze.The second sneeze got a little stuck, so Jane managed to cover her face with a handkerchief, and very in time, because it was quite messy. Apshoo! The sneeze made Jane bent to her knees. She wiped her nose, which had already begun to turn pink, and blew her nose. After that, her throat began to hurt more and the runny nose worsened. After eating some soup, Jane made herself some tea and went into the bedroom.On the way, she sneezed into her handkerchief several more times:Apshoo! Apshi! Her handkerchief was wet, so she threw it into the washing machine.Her nose was running like a tap and the girl was sniffing desperately.Entered the bedroom, Jane put the tea on the nightstand and pulled out a fresh handkerchief from the drawer. It was one of her favourite handkerchiefs: a large cotton white with a floral pattern and pink edges.Taking a handkerchief, Jane brought it to her nose, wanting to blow her nose, but she was overcome by a strong tickling. She sneezed softly but wet two times: Apchoo! Achoo! And blew her nose with delight.Jane lay down on the bed and put the handkerchief next to her. She decided to have some tea to feel better. Raising the cup to her mouth, she inhaled a little steam, which again caused a tickle in the girl's nose. Jane felt her sinuses fill with snot. The tickling increased. Jane grabbed a handkerchief and sneezed: Epshi! She gently wiped her nose and was relieved. After drinking a little tea, she fell asleep.She was awakened by a phone call.Jane sat on the bed, it seemed to her that she was feeling better.When she got up and took a few steps around the room, she found that her runny nose worsened, she returned to the bedside table and took another handkerchief out of it: big white with blue flowers and wiped her nose. By the time Jane arrived in the kitchen, the call was over.She called back.A familiar voice answered her:"Hi Jane! How are you? Do you recognize me?"    It was Jane's old friend named Kathy.  :"Hi,Kathy! I'b fide, add how are you?"-Jane replied, frightened by the sound of her voice.   :"I'm fine, but you don't sound good.Do you mind if I come to visit you?".          :"Ok. Apchoo!"-Jane was unable to stifle a sneeze. 

To be continued! 

[bben9-kun]

It's in a really weird format, that kinda makes the story a lil hard to read, or well uncomfortable, but that's just my opinion.

[SneezeAbbie]

I love a good F/F story! Carry on  

[ShamanBodyan]

38 minutes ago, bben9 said:

Это действительно странный формат, из-за которого рассказ становится немного трудным для чтения или даже неудобным, но это только мое мнение.

This is my first job. Besides, English is not my native language, I mentioned that at the beginning. I will try to do my best.  Thank you for understanding.

[ShamanBodyan]

26 minutes ago, SneezeAbbie said:

I love a good F/F story! Carry on  

Thank you.

[ShamanBodyan]

20 hours ago, SneezeAbbie said:

Я люблю хорошие истории F / F! Продолжать 

I'm glad you liked it. I have published an edited version and will continue to work with it. If you are interested, please take a look.