The Closet

[Nocturnal]

I was playing around with some scenarios and this short story was born. There is no specified gender here so you can use your imagination  Enjoy!
 

"Quick, get in the closet!," you whispered, pulling my sleeve as I followed you into the cramped and dusty old room, the door closing with a quiet "click." We sat across from each other, legs falling into each other's laps. Then we hear it. Voices on the other side of the door. 

 

You put a finger to my lips, telling me silently to be as quiet as possible. I nod my head. You slide your arm back to its position at your side, but you brush past a few boxes in your way, causing dust to stir into the tiny space. The light from the room outside just barely illuminaes thousands of tiny dust particles in the air around us.. Your eyes widen in horror.. Suddenly, I feel a tickle deep inside my nostrils..it's small but just barely there. 
 

A tiny irritation that starts to build.. I can fight this. I won't sneeze. Not here. 
 

I cover my nose, desperate to keep the irritants out of my sinuses. But it's no use.. my breathing starts to hitch.. my irritated nostrils start to flare, desperate to rid themselves of dust. The itch builds, so strong that my breath comes out in pants, i'm so utterly taken over by the need to sneeze when you notice my struggle and lean in close, "please.. please hold it back." you whisper urgently. Suppressing a moan, I knod, wanting to please you, and also knowing that if we're caught you'll be very upset with me.

 

I'm helpless to the torture this dust has caused me, my nose is on fire, the tickle becoming unbearable as a few tears escape my eyes. "Hh.. heh.. I'm gonna.. sn.." my breath catches in my throat and i take a gulp of air when suddenly I feel the warmth of your finger against my allergic, twitching nostrils. 
 

Even with your finger under my nose, my nose itches like crazy, I pant desperately, looking up at you.. "I.. can't.. h-h- heh hold it.. back.. hah! huhhtsschhoo!! Hhhitssschchhh!! huh.. hhh.. HHIITSSSSCCHUH!!" With no time to cover, I let out three huge uncovered sneezes all over, covering both of us with spray. You look at me with your eyes wide, but my nose isn't done. 
 

"hh.. it tickles so.. b-bad" I gasp, my chest heaving as I pant and gasp, unable to control the intense tickle any longer.. "im *sniff* hh- sorry.. hhh, hahh TSSSSCCHOOO!! TSSCHHHH!! hahTSSCHooo! AhTSHHUHH!! *snnnff* ahh..hhii..huhttssstsSSSCHHH!!" Huge, spraying sneezes explode from my flaring nostrils, one after the other. You desperately try to cover my nose and muffle my huge, desperate sneezes, but there's no use. With nowhere else to go in this tiny closet, I helplessly sneeze again and again. 
 

The force of my sneezes disrupts more dust.. and we watch as it wirls in the air around us, I look at you again helplessly as my eyes begin to shut.. my head tilts back so that you can see my wet, pink nostrils flaring like mad.. mouth dropping open to silently gasp, trying so hard to hold it back for you.. "ahh..hhiih *snnff*.." I pant as I rub my fingers over my tortured nose, desperate to relive the itch in any way other than sneezing. I need to sneeze so badly.. but i can't..

 

 Did you hear that?"

"What was that?" 

Voices murmur nearby.

My heart hammers in my chest, this is it, we're done for. Your eyes say it all, "please.. don't sneeze.." 

I sniffle desperately as liquid threatens to overflow onto my upper lip. Nostrils quivering like mad, but "oh no.. ahh..hheh *snnnfff* hhhiii heh..." We're so close, faces only inches apart, you watch as my eyebrows knit together in concentration, eyes half lidded.. 

"I.. c-can't.. hhii.. hold it.." 

You watch, frozen in place as my nostrils flare helplessly, mouth dropping open in a silent gasp before i finally explode into another fit of uncontrollable sneezes.

"ehhTSCHHII!! tschchhh! hiiTSCHHoooo!

huhhtSSHHOO! *snff* hii.. h-heehhhsstchhh! ATSSCHHHHH!! 

[ID2006]

As someone allergic to dust, I love these types of scenarios.

[prismaticpollen]

I’d love to be the person who caught these two!

[Guest]

This is sexy af, I’d love to read more!!

[Kolen]

Ooh, sexy 😏🤤

Moar, pleez

[Snez gud]

I absolutely adore these kinds of scenarios! Thank you so much for posting this!

[NotWho]

I love all of this!

[DLC]

This is one of my favorite types of scenarios, and I wish more people still did them; it's hard to find these anymore.

[Jettous]

Amazing 🤩 

[NickG1998]

please update this amazing story I really love it and I would love to read more but take your time there's no rush

[Tyko93]

Wonderful buildups.  Loved this short story.

[BananaBlaster]

great story

[Icyfall]

This was very good thank you for sharing 

[JohnnyOxn]

The sneezes in this story are incredible. Descriptive and spray-full are always a plus.

[Evian]

Exceptionnal. I loved every minute of it 

[JustASneeze]

I love your descriptive language! 

[Darkjolteon]

I love these senarios. My favorite is cat allergies, if a tail threatens to get to close or the cat leaves just far enough to stop a sneeze causing a false start or something.

This was a great story. Thank you

[Evian]

Hmmm delicious 

[AntheaHolmes]

Oh this is lovely. Amazing Sneezes. Great scenario. 

[anna]

Love this 😍

[SneezeFae]

I absolutely loved this!! Very well written!

[Turtles]

God damn

[Dingle]

it was a great story but could have used a small extension. would love to see more

[farre385]

oh I LOVE failed holdbacks