ryan0805 Posted November 25, 2021 Share Posted November 25, 2021 Elaine went back to school to carry luggage on that day. She had severe allergies, so she put on a mask, though it will prevent her from sneezing like crazy. As soon as she entered the dormitory ,she found that the room where no one lived for many days is now covered with dust and even mold.Elaine’s sensitive and fragile nose is still affected even though it is covered by a mask. "Ah...my nose is itchy..." She rubbed her red nose and started packing. After five minutes, Elaine’s nose kept running, and her nose became more itchy. "Hehh… my God..." With the faintly red nose under the mask, she blew her nose and continued to clean up. After another five minutes, she couldn't bear the itching in her nasal cavity. She saw her cute little nose twitching, pinching her nose and letting out a cute stifled sneeze "hehhtch!" Elaine knew that the allergy attack was about to happen, she had to pack her bags quickly to avoid the deterioration of the allergy symptoms, so she speeded up the pace of cleaning up. However, due to the dust flying due to moving things, she still couldn't resist the itch after all”I have to hold it back…heheh…” Her red little nose twitching,started sneezing ”hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! Hehhtch…hehh..hehhtch!” Her chest bounced with the sneezes. “ Oh…stop….sniff…”However, the itch hadn’t subsided.”Oh no..heh..hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch!” After sneezed for dozens of times, Elaine’s cute little nose turned bright red,tears burst out from her eyes,she was in so much pain. Because of constant itch and sneezes and wearing a mask, Elaine felt a little lack of oxygen and dizzy, "Uhhhhhhhhhhh...what to do..." At this time, she was carrying a heavy object. And unfortunately,she fell and knocked over the dusty cosmetics box she hadn't used for a long time.”uhh..it hurts…wait…hehh..don’t sneeze…” She felt an unprecedented itchy sensation in her nose. She knew very well that the sneeze would not stop, so she stretched out her hand and pinched her nose tightly to avoid it”Hold it back…hehh…..don’t…”Her red nose kept twitching, and finally she couldn't bear it anymore “No…hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch!hehhtch!hehh..stop sneezing… hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch!”Cause Elaine always stifled,the itch in her nose wouldn’t came out, it just built up and became more itchy”hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch! hehhtch!” Elaine sneezed so rapidly that she was gasping for air, with her breasts bouncing up and down leaned on the wall with one hand and pinched her nose with another. After nearly a hundred sneezes,she realized that she must let the itch in her nose get released,so she just let the sneezes go “hechew! hechew! Hetchew! “After another hundred of sneezes,it finally subsided.”Uhhhh…my clothes..” Elaine’s clothes was snotted, her face and nose were dark red,and she got breathing difficulties. The mask was also wet with snot and tears , so she chose to take off the mask. No one knows how hard it take Elaine to just dust up her dormitory. Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted November 25, 2021 Share Posted November 25, 2021 This is really good!! Love the description of her breasts bouncing, and the sneezing whilst talking! If you're looking for points of improvement, then I'd maybe recommend italicising the sneezes so they stand out a little more? I'd love to see this continue Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted November 26, 2021 Author Share Posted November 26, 2021 Glad you like it!! Thanks for the advice!! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted November 30, 2021 Author Share Posted November 30, 2021 Part 2 After that crazy sneezing fit, Elaine’s nose became more sensitive, and her mask was totally soaked with snot and tears.Without the mask, she can only pinched her cute red nose with one hand to stop the sneeze inch, and kept on dusting with another. At first, this method was effective that Elaine didn’t sneeze for over ten minutes.But then she notices that if she want to move the huge dusty box in front of her, she could only do it with both hands.She knew that if her poor little nose sniffled it, she would sneezes at least hundreds times. So she decided to hold her breath, and moved it to the door. However, the lack of air caused by holding breath made her so dizzy that she bumped into another dusty box her roommate had.Looking at the dust all over the room,Elaine knew she had to kept held her breath. But people needs to breath after all, so she took a breath…. Right at the moment she inhaled, the unprecedented itch hit her fragile nose. Before she couldn’t react, she began sneezing crazily” Hehhtch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch…no…Hehhtch…stop…heheh..hehhtch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch…can’t breathe…hehhtch,tch,tch,tch…..” The endless sneezing came again, Elaine could do nothing but just sitting there, sneezing rapidly. Her painful face turned red,, snot and tears were everywhere, soaked her clothe again. Her breast also started bouncing more fiercely with the violent sneezing, and two of the there buttons on her chest had been shaken off, the plump breast was about to jump out. In order not to let this happen, Elaine held her bouncing breast with her hands, tried not to let the last button to shake off. “Oh god…heheh…hehhtch,tch,tch,tch,tch…” After ten minutes of this sneezing hell, her classmate, Eric, walked passed by that time. ”Hi Elaine…oh shit! What happened to you?” He saw Elaine leaning on the ground,sneezing helplessly, snot and tears had totally soaked her clothes. ”Hehhtch,tch,tch,tch…I..tch,tch,tch,tch,tch…heh.. please help me..hehhtch,tch,tch..hand me a mask…tch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch…” Elaine could barely say a full sentence” What? I don’t understand.” Eric couldn’t knew her exactly. “ Hehhtch,tch,tch,tch..I said…hand me…hetchoo choo choo…the…hehhtch tch,tch,tch…mask…” “ The mask? Okay!” Eric found a mask and spray some perfume on it, thought it would help Elaine to stop sneezing. “Here you go!” Eric said. “Hehhtch…thanks..hehhtch,tch,tch,tch…” Elaine took the mask on, but only found here were smell of perfume on it, which she also allergic to. And of course, Elaine started sneezing more rapidly than before “ Why does it smell like per..perfume ..heheh..hehhtch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch,tch…” Countless sneezes burst out more quickly, and her painful red nose wrinkled. Elaine wanted to take off the mask, but she had to keep her bouncing breast from jumping out. Eric was totally stunned, he had never seen a girl sneezes that much before. After sneezed over 200 times, Elaine decided to take off the mask. Once her hands left her breast, the last button bounced off, now she was sneezing only with her bra on. Her breast start bouncing more fiercely than before. But anyway, she took the perfume mask off, the sneezing would subside eventually, Elaine thought. She also stopped stifling, let out her sneezes and started spraying on her almost naked breast. At the same time, Eric pick up the perfume again and walked towards Elaine… (to be continued) (I wonder if this can be post here, but I can promise that there’s no R-18 contents in this, PG-13 maybe) Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted November 30, 2021 Author Share Posted November 30, 2021 English isn’t my native language so I’m sorry if there’s any grammatical errors. Link to comment
Sneezyflowergal Posted December 1, 2021 Share Posted December 1, 2021 It’s really good so far! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 1, 2021 Author Share Posted December 1, 2021 2 hours ago, Sneezyflowergal said: It’s really good so far! Glad you like it! Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted December 1, 2021 Share Posted December 1, 2021 Really glad this updated! I’d love to see more, and I love the ending 😉 Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 1, 2021 Author Share Posted December 1, 2021 4 hours ago, DanniSneeze said: Really glad this updated! I’d love to see more, and I love the ending 😉 I’ll do my best to write more ! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 1, 2021 Author Share Posted December 1, 2021 Also I forgot to italicize the sneezes lol I’m so sorry! Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted December 1, 2021 Share Posted December 1, 2021 No don’t worry about that at all!! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 2, 2021 Author Share Posted December 2, 2021 9 hours ago, DanniSneeze said: No don’t worry about that at all!! Thanks! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 2, 2021 Author Share Posted December 2, 2021 Also I don’t really know how to spell sneezes lol You got any advice? Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 2, 2021 Author Share Posted December 2, 2021 Part 3 Since Eric was young, he has been obsessed to sneezing. Especially female sneezes. So being a classmate of Elaine was such a wonderful thing in his life. He counted her sneezes everyday, sprayed perfume on himself and get close to her to make she sneeze… there were so many things that Eric has done due to his fetish. But this time, his crush, and the most allergic girl he knew by far, was sneezing uncontrollably and was almost naked. Sometimes people get unconscious, and they may do things that are hard to understand, that’s what Eric was going to do. ” Hehhtch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! tch! “ While Elaine was sneezing non stop, Eric picked up the perfume bottle and walked towards her”Hehhtch!Oh…why…hehhtch!” Because of the rapid sneezes, Elaine could barely breathe and of course she couldn’t see anything, including what Eric was trying to do. Eric sprayed some perfume right on to Elaine’s poor little nose” Sorry Elaine…” “Hehhtch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! tch! What…?” At first she didn’t know what Eric was talking about, but just a few seconds later, Elaine felt a unbearable itch coming up, and it was by far the itchiest one “What have you done….Hehhtch! tch! tch! Why…Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! “ Elaine began sneezing like crazy, there’s literally no time for to breathe in between each sneezes, they just came out one after another “ Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Please stop already… Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! “ Eric was stunned again, he always wanted to make Elaine sneezes, and now his dream came true! Without a second thought, Eric sprayed the perfume again, and this time he didn’t stop spraying “ Hehhtch! tch! tch! How dare you did…did that….Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! please…no more…Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! “ Elaine was exhausted, messy hair, her nose was bright red and snot all over her almost naked breast. She wanted to stop sneezing, but with Eric kept spraying that perfume, she would only sneeze more than before. Few minutes later, Eric came up with a new idea. He left the room and closed the door, so there was no one but just Elaine, still sneezing so rapidly “He’s finally done…” She thought Eric had done torturing her poor nose, so she stood up and walked slowly towards the door “Hehhtch! tch! tch! Hehhtch! tch! tch! I must get out of here first…Hehhtch! tch! tch! ” But when she tried to open the door, she found that it was locked from outside. Elaine’s mind collapsed, she had sneezed over 500 times, and she was literally a mess. Obviously, the tragedy hadn’t finished yet. What would Eric do to Elaine next…? Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 2, 2021 Author Share Posted December 2, 2021 Part 3 comes up!! But I’m wondering that should I also italicize the words between sneezes? Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted December 4, 2021 Share Posted December 4, 2021 I love it!! And as for spelling sneezes, I’m not the best, but I always find it best to start with the good old “atchoo” and then vary it from there! You could put more or less of different letters to draw it out and make it more fun! For example, “haschiew, aaaachew, ishoo, estcheeew” It might be better to post a topic asking about this if you want more advice! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 5, 2021 Author Share Posted December 5, 2021 12 hours ago, DanniSneeze said: I love it!! And as for spelling sneezes, I’m not the best, but I always find it best to start with the good old “atchoo” and then vary it from there! You could put more or less of different letters to draw it out and make it more fun! For example, “haschiew, aaaachew, ishoo, estcheeew” It might be better to post a topic asking about this if you want more advice! Omg thank you so much for the advice!! I will keep on writing this! Link to comment
MiraKarat Posted December 7, 2021 Share Posted December 7, 2021 Ryan, I'm so in love with your stories!! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 7, 2021 Author Share Posted December 7, 2021 15 minutes ago, MiraKarat said: Ryan, I'm so in love with your stories!! Glad you like it!! I'm working with the next part!! Link to comment
MiraKarat Posted December 7, 2021 Share Posted December 7, 2021 1 hour ago, ryan0805 said: Glad you like it!! I'm working with the next part!! Can't wait for more!❤️ Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 9, 2021 Author Share Posted December 9, 2021 Part 4 ( This part will be a torture part, I'm sorry for those who don't like it. But anyway, here's part 4!! Enjoy it!) ( PG-13 WARNING!!) (NO R-18 contents) It's been an hour since Eric had left the room, Although Elaine had sneezed for numerous times, her allergy symptoms had finally subsided. Now she had to find a way to get out. She walked to the door, but it was locked. Her cellphone was also taken away by Eric, so she couldn't call anyone for help. Just as Elaine wanted to give up, she heard someone walked pass '' Hey!! Over here!! I'm locked in here!!'' Elaine yelled. " Elaine? Why are you still in there?'' That was Jason, Elaine's crush. '' Jason? Is that you? So glad you're here! Help me get out of here! '' Elaine was so happy that she even forgot the sneezing nightmare in just an hour ago." Okay! Wait a second!" Said Jason. A few seconds later, the door was finally opened. Elaine stood up and ran towards Jason " Thank you Jason!! '' But then, she saw Jason carrying a bag and a rope '' Oh, What are you going to do with these things?" Elaine asked, she didn't realize the danger. " Eric told me..." Jason whispered. " What? What did he tell you?" Asked Elaine. Jason smiled and said ''About your lovely sneezing..." Elaine was confused, but the next moment , she was pushed on the ground " Ouch! It hurts...wait... what are you doing? Let me go!!! Jason!! '' Jason tied Elaine up by the rope. " I'm sorry Elaine but I just can't help it..." " What do you mean!?'' " I've been hearing you sneezing the whole time, this was my plan.'' Elaine was shocked, but she still believe this isn't real, how come a handsome, attractive guy turned out to be a devil? '' You...you're kidding, right...?" Asked Elaine. Jason didn't answer, he just took a few thing out from the bag, they were a mask, perfume bottle, dust and flower, if Elaine's poor little nose touched them, she would start sneezing like crazy !! " Wait...what are you trying to do...? '' '' I'm in love with your sneezes for a long time...and you did sneeze a lot!! '' Said Jason, who also like Elaine's sneezes. " Okay! Let's get Started!! " Jason said. Elaine was in desperation... " So...where should we start at?" Jason said. '' Please let me go... I'm begging you Jason..." Elaine begged. Jason's eye changed, he yelled '' Don't you know what I mean? I said, where should we start at? Is it that hard to understand? '' Elaine was scared. " If you don't choose one of these, I'll poured them all over you! I bet you'll start sneezing until you pass out hahaha!! " Said Jason. Elaine gave up, she chose the flower, which is the least she allergic to. Jason pick up the flower, and put it in front of Elaine's nose. " Oh...so tickle..." Her nose twiched, shivered, and let out a cute stifled sneeze '' Hehh...Hehhtch!'' At first, Jason was disappointed cause she only sneezed once. But then Elaine started a sneezing fit '' Don't sneeze...oh...huh...Hehhtch! Hehhch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch...heh...Hehhtch!tch!tch!'' It seemed that the fit wouldn't stop! She just sneezed and sneezed..Jason stare at Elaine: Her painful face turned red, tried to pinch her nose to stop sneezing but hands were tied up, her plump breast started bouncing with the sneezes again. " Hehhtch! Hehhch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch...heh...Hehhtch!tch!tch! Please.. sto..stop....Hehhtch! Hehhch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch...heh...let me go....Hehhtch! Hehhch! Hehhtch! Hehhtch...heh...Hehhtch!tch!tch!" Elaine couldn't even say a full sentence, it would interrupted by the rapid sneezes. Jason was stunned, his dream came true!! Saw Elaine sneezing that much, Jason showed no mercy. He sprayed a huge amount of perfume on the face mask.... To be continued... Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted December 11, 2021 Share Posted December 11, 2021 Poor Elaine, but this was really good, as always! Love to see it continue!! Link to comment
ryan0805 Posted December 13, 2021 Author Share Posted December 13, 2021 On 12/12/2021 at 2:34 AM, DanniSneeze said: Poor Elaine, but this was really good, as always! Love to see it continue!! Thanks! There will be a good end haha😂😂 I will keep on writing this! Link to comment
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