strong sneeze32 Posted January 26, 2022 Share Posted January 26, 2022 Hi everybody! This is my first original friction. I am not a native English speaker, so my sentences may read a little strange. But in any case, hope you enjoy it! Emma was 5’8, with medium length brown hair. She was overweight, but not obese. She had a buxom chest, large thighs and wide hips. But the most likely to attract the attention of others is not her voluptuous curves, but her unnaturally large nose with huge nostrils. Emma has a moderate degree of allergy, and her nose is much more sensitive than average. However, Emma can always take her allergy medication in advance to prevent her attacks. When the itch in her nose is really too big, she still can't help it and release a gigantic HAAAAATSSCHOOOOO. Two days ago, Emma got a part-time job as a waitress at a barbecue restaurant.During these two days, Emma familiarizes with her work under the guidance of an experienced waitress, Lily. Lily is a woman in her 20s, 5'2, with short black hair.In contrast to Emma, Lily is thin and has a delicate little nose. However, she has extremely severe allergies, especially to pollen and perfume. Fortunately, her sneezes are small and she is very good at stifling. But the series of 5-10 isshoo when she has an attack is still a bit annoying. On a sunny noon, Emma is clearing the table while lily is serving spices to the guests not far away. Suddenly, a tickle of unknown origin attacked Lily's nose. Lily turned her head to sneeze one after another, but still moving ahead. “isshoo! isshoo! aashhoo! uuhshoo! isshoo! ...” This caused lily to accidentally bump into Emma, and the tray in lily's hand flew out, spreading spices everywhere. Some of the spice particles were inevitably drawn into Emma's large nostrils and began to burn her sensitive nose. Her nose was itching so badly that it physically twitched ever so slightly. Her nostrils were flaring in and out in an even rhythm. Emma squeezed her eyes shut, trying to focus on holding back her sneeze. But as the tickle became more intense, she unconsciously opened her mouth, pulling in shuddery breaths. “HAAAAAAA....HHAAAAAAAAAA.....” Even though Emma knows how powerful her sneeze can be, she just cannot hold it back any more. HAAAAAAA..HAAAAAAAATTTTCCHHHOOOOOOO!!!’ This huge sneeze definitely scared lily and many customers. Along with Emma's thunderous sneeze, a powerful jet of air ejected from her nostrils, blowing up the table full of spice. After being blown into the air by Emma's sneeze, more spices entered her wide open nostrils. Emma's head tilted back and a pre-sneeze look appeared on her face again. As a heavy allergy sufferer and a master stifler, lily certainly knows what this expression means.” “Let me help you” Lily reached out and massaged Emma's big nose, trying to help her relieve the terrible itching. "Lily… HAAAH…. I know... I know you're … AH..AAHHH… helping me… but please...AH...AAHHHH...try not to...AAAH...touch my nose...aaaah...when I am...AAAAHH...about...about to sneeze AAAHHH...it’s very...HAAAAH... very dangerous.” Before lily could remove her hand, a huge intake of breath from Emma sent lily's fingers across the sensitive tip of her nose, causing just enough of an irritating tickle to finish off the mighty nose. Her head continued to tilt back and her mouth opened even wider. Then she released a violent sneeze. “HAAAAAAAA.....AAAAAAHHHHHHCCCCCCHHHOOOOO!” "I'm not... I'm not done" “AAAAAAAAAHHHHCHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” But those giant sneezes didn't completely clear the spices from Emma's nose. Throughout the afternoon, people on the street could hear the violent AAAAATSSCHOOOOO from the restaurant once every few minutes. Link to comment
strong sneeze32 Posted January 26, 2022 Author Share Posted January 26, 2022 Oh, I forgot. This will be a three-chapter novel, and I've only finished the first part of it now. Really appreciate any of your suggestion. Link to comment
demon_destroyer7479 Posted January 26, 2022 Share Posted January 26, 2022 Can't wait to read the other parts! I think it would be really interesting if Emma completely lost control of her sneezes at the worst time Link to comment
MiraKarat Posted January 26, 2022 Share Posted January 26, 2022 I wonder if they gonna hide somewhere and take care of each other... Definitely loved this one, thank you so much for sharing!😭 Link to comment
JustReading Posted January 27, 2022 Share Posted January 27, 2022 This is fantastic as a one-off but I can't wait to see the next two installments Link to comment
Engmanny Posted January 27, 2022 Share Posted January 27, 2022 Can't wait for part 2 here, in my head I cunjoured up the image of someone who was paid to clean the noses of poor suffering people who'd like that job hey! Link to comment
strong sneeze32 Posted January 27, 2022 Author Share Posted January 27, 2022 Thanks to everyone who commented above!Your ideas are really great! Link to comment
Demosthenes Posted January 28, 2022 Share Posted January 28, 2022 That you so much for sharing. I really enjoyed it. Link to comment
Erias397 Posted January 30, 2022 Share Posted January 30, 2022 Can't wait to see this continued, I want to see where it goes! Link to comment
SneezeloveronGirls Posted January 31, 2022 Share Posted January 31, 2022 (edited) I'm wanting to see Emma accidently inhale something up her nostrils and her and Lily have to go to a mad scientist to have Lily shrink down and go up Emma's nose in order to loosen it up enough for Emma to sneeze it out. Also, I can't help but LOVE how descriptive you are of Emma's Nose and Nostrils as well as their size and your description of her sneeze blowing air out of her nostrils into the spices. Edited February 1, 2022 by SneezeloveronGirls Link to comment
Engmanny Posted February 1, 2022 Share Posted February 1, 2022 22 hours ago, SneezeloveronGirls said: I'm wanting to see Emma accidently inhale something up her nostrils and her and Lily have to go to a mad scientist to have Lily shrink down and go up Emma's nose in order to loosen it up enough for Emma to sneeze it out. Also, I can't help but LOVE how descriptive you are of Emma's Nose and Nostrils as well as their size and your description of her sneeze blowing air out of her nostrils into the spices. Love this Link to comment
DLC Posted February 17, 2022 Share Posted February 17, 2022 I'd love to see Emma and/or Lily (if not both) help hold back the other one's sneezes [especially with the finger under nose aka F.U.N method]. Link to comment
Should I bless Posted February 19, 2022 Share Posted February 19, 2022 This is a great start! Link to comment
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