SweaterWeather Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Harro So lately my friends have been reading the manga Naruto (which I used to be OBSSESED with, but I kind of out grew that phase) which is about a young boy who.....eh, I'll just post the link to wiki. They can explain it better than I can lol. Aaaaaaanyway, there's a certain character (Deidara be his name) that I have been dying to see sneeze, but it seems like it's never gonna happen and I really can't stand the wording when I write, so I would like to kindly request (for a trade of art or anything else if I can manage ) a story about this little blonde senpai right chere...http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/820/deidara3620.jpg/An here is the info on Deidara: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Narut...onists#AkatsukiI guess to be specific, just to include his partner tobi: http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/195...93-1280-720.jpgIf anyone would like to take on this request (no pressure though ) I would gladly trade something in return. Pwease and Tankyou! Link to comment
CDK114 Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 Harro So lately my friends have been reading the manga Naruto (which I used to be OBSSESED with, but I kind of out grew that phase) which is about a young boy who.....eh, I'll just post the link to wiki. They can explain it better than I can lol. Aaaaaaanyway, there's a certain character (Deidara be his name) that I have been dying to see sneeze, but it seems like it's never gonna happen and I really can't stand the wording when I write, so I would like to kindly request (for a trade of art or anything else if I can manage ) a story about this little blonde senpai right chere...http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/820/deidara3620.jpg/An here is the info on Deidara: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Narut...onists#AkatsukiI guess to be specific, just to include his partner tobi: http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/195...93-1280-720.jpgIf anyone would like to take on this request (no pressure though ) I would gladly trade something in return. Pwease and Tankyou!I will gladly write it! Just one question. . . do you want it to be allergies or a cold? Link to comment
SweaterWeather Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 Harro So lately my friends have been reading the manga Naruto (which I used to be OBSSESED with, but I kind of out grew that phase) which is about a young boy who.....eh, I'll just post the link to wiki. They can explain it better than I can lol. Aaaaaaanyway, there's a certain character (Deidara be his name) that I have been dying to see sneeze, but it seems like it's never gonna happen and I really can't stand the wording when I write, so I would like to kindly request (for a trade of art or anything else if I can manage ) a story about this little blonde senpai right chere...http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/820/deidara3620.jpg/An here is the info on Deidara: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Narut...onists#AkatsukiI guess to be specific, just to include his partner tobi: http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/195...93-1280-720.jpgIf anyone would like to take on this request (no pressure though ) I would gladly trade something in return. Pwease and Tankyou!I will gladly write it! Just one question. . . do you want it to be allergies or a cold?Oh my goodness, r-really!? WOW thank you sooo much!!! Umm gee, I think I would rather have a cold. I'd love to see him suffering and sick. Thx again you made my day!! Link to comment
CDK114 Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 Oh my goodness, r-really!? WOW thank you sooo much!!! Umm gee, I think I would rather have a cold. I'd love to see him suffering and sick. Thx again you made my day!!Okie dokie! So you want Tobi in it, too? Link to comment
SweaterWeather Posted July 22, 2011 Author Share Posted July 22, 2011 Yes please! Thx again! Link to comment
CDK114 Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Okay! The story is below. I'm sorry it took so long! The air was icy cold and snow drifted down from the bleak gray sky. Deidara shivered and tugged his scarf a little tighter around his neck. He and Tobi were on a mission to the Land of Snow for important maps.The blond Akatsuki member walked quickly through the fine layer of snow that coated the ground. The frozen wind nipped at his numb face.Could things possible get any worse?Actually, yes."Hettschoo!" Deidara sniffled as he wiped his nose with his sleeve.Tobi cast him a worried glance. "Senpai, are you OK?""Yes, Tobi, I'd fibe," he replied. "Hatcshoo!"Just as Deidara was about to sneeze again, Tobi held a white handkerchief in front of his face."Thanks, un," he mumbled, swiping the handkerchief out of his hand."Senpai, you're sick!" Suddenly, Deidara felt a warm hand on his forehead. "You're burning up, senpai!""I'm fined!" he shouted, causing Tobi to jerk back in surprise."When you add a d to fine, you're not fine," Tobi insisted."I'm not sick!" Deidara snapped. "I-I don't heh. . g-g-get. . Heh. . Heshoo! Sick. Sicknesses are for weaklings."Tobi didn't believe him but decided just to go along with itBy nightfall, they had taken refuge inside a cave, away from the blizzard. (Well, you cannot spend the night outside during a blizzard! xD)Sleep is not easy when you have a cold. And Deidara was no exception. He lay in his sleeping bag having sudden fits of sneezing coughing, wheezing, and sniffling. It was miserable.In late hours of the night, Deidara found himself in the worst fit he'd had. For what felt like hours he was caught in a storm of sneezes and coughs. When at last it ended, Deidara noticed something. Despite the loud noises, he hadn't heard anything from Tobi.Deidara crawled to over to Tobi's sleeping bag. He found the sleeping bag empty. Panic struck him, sending his heart racing. The tickling sensation returned to his nose. He pinched his nose tightly, refusing to breathe, ashe continued to search for any sign of Tobi."Had he been abducted?" Deidara shook his head violently. "No, no one would abduct Tobi. If someone did, he/she probably doesn't get bored easily."Deidara felt a tap on his shoulder. He whirled around to see Tobi standing behind him."Where were you?" By looking at his wind-tousled hair, he could almost guess where he had been."I went to get medicine for your cold," he answered, lifting the small red bottle for him to see.Deidara stared at him. He appreciated his considerate action, but thought he must have been insane to go out during the blizzard."I don't need medicine; I'm perfectly fine without it." He announced, offering no gratitude for his selfless act. Deidara then crawled back into his sleeping bag and tried desperately to fall asleep, but with a headache and a runny nose, this task became harder than he thought. "Tobi, could I have a tissue?" he asked meekly. Normally, it would have been more of a command, but he was far too weak to get it for himself."Nope, not until you've taken your medicine," he replied sternly.Deidara scowled. "OK, fine, I'll take it!" he conceded.Tobi smiled underneath his lollipop mask. For he had Deidara in a corner. Link to comment
Zane Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 Haha that was really cute! I love Deidara! I didn't even notice this was here lol anyway thank you so much poptropical1 for writing this and thank you Grey on a Sunday for requesting this Link to comment
Secret98 Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 Very AWESOME! I love how his cold just takes him over... Link to comment
SweaterWeather Posted August 8, 2011 Author Share Posted August 8, 2011 AAAAHHHHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!! SENPAIIIIII!!!!!! Thank You Thank You Thank YOU poptropical1 for this hawt sneezy Deidara fic!! I L-O-V-E how Tobi went out to get medicine in a freaking blizzard. (Only Tobi would lol ) You captured their personalities puuurfectly aggghh im sososososososososo happy!!!! Link to comment
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