Sneezing while hiding story (F) - (2 Parts)

[Daphine]

I wrote this short story and drew the picture that go's along with it about four years ago. I was going through some of my old files and thought I would post it here as an early Christmas present:) .

Susan knew that the information she needed was someware in the CEO’s office. What she hadn’t expected was that there would be others in the office so late in the evening. As she hid under the desk of the CEO’s secretary she could hear voices coming from his office. Talk of dirty dealings and embezzlement of company funds seamed to be the topic of discussion. This was exactly the proof she was looking for. Susan recognized the voice of Mr. Miller the company’s chief executive officer but who was he talking to she wondered?

She slowly crawled out from under the desk and moved to the other side of the cubicle were she looked up over a filing cabinet to get a better view. Stevens she thought as she could clearly see the two of them now in a heated discussion. Perfect just keep talking boys she thought, this was more proof than she had ever hoped to get.

I think I have seen and heard enough for one evening. Now is as good a time to get out of here Susan thought but she still found herself mesmerized by the scene that was being played out before her. Well maybe just a couple more minutes she thought. But right then she found herself quickly distracted from what was going on in Mr. Miller office by an all to familiar feeling. She looked down only to find a vase of freshly picked flowers sitting right under her nose. A wave of horror swept over her as she felt her back quickly become covered with a layer of sweat as her heart pounded in her chest. Her whole life Susan had battled with her allergies and had tried everything to win in the fight against them. Weather it was allergy shots in high school or prescription antihistamines in college it always seamed that the allergies won. She felt a tickling burning type sensation way back in her nose as she starred into the collection of flowers. She thought to her self oh great that is all my allergies need! as she slowly raised her hand to place under her nose. While doing so she accidentally brushed her hand against a magnet that was holding some papers to The metal cabinet causing them to fall to the ground. Susan froze, She could hear the men in the office “did you hear that “ “do you think someone’s out there?” and then they became real quite.

Susan looked down at her hand which was now just hanging in space less than a foot from the underside of her nose . She felt her eyes beginning to tear up as the tickle worked it’s way down to her flaring nostrils. She prayed the men would start talking again but there was nothing but silence. She slowly , ever so slowly started to move her hand again up towards her twitching nose. Her mind drifted in thought to the villain in The Telltale Heart but she was suddenly brought back to reality as she felt her finger come to rest on the underside of her nose. She felt her eyes becoming heavy lidded as she thought to herself those flowers are driving my nose craze. I feel la, as a shuttering breath came over her. Like I’m going to sna, sne, sneeze! A wave of fear crashed over her, no not a sneeze not now they will hear me for sure as she slowly stroked her finger against her nose. She slowly backed away from the flowers as she felt a single tear run down her cheek. Her eye lids grew heavier as she fought to keep them open. Her hitching breaths became audible as the sneeze began to grow, Ahhh, AHHHH, please no she begged herself not now, not a sneeze. She could feel the sneeze building deep inside her nose it’s power becoming unmanageable. Her nose wanted to sneeze it needed to sneeze to expel all of the allergens that were trapped, tickling around inside her nasal cavity. She felt her eyes close and her chest expand in preparing to explode with a powerful sneeze. AHHH, AAAAHHHH.. Susan could hear footsteps coming up from behind her but still there was nothing more she could do the sneeze was appone her AAAH-CHOOO.

[ohnozdust]

Way to go on the newest story contribution,'sneezing while hiding' is also one of my favorite things.

-Merry Christmas,and have a fun and productive New Year

[Blah!?]

I live for hiding stories!

:laugh:

[Guest Thera]

Brilliant as usual Daphine, I love your hiding stories

[Guest medea]

yes, thank you! i love sneezing while hiding!!

[Dawnie]

Excellent story, Daphine. I loved it and your drawing is terrific. Thanks so much for sharing.

[And Beat Him When He Sneezes]

Well thank you!

[Daphine]

Thank you all for your kind comments .

Watch for part II coming to a Sneeze Fetish Forum near you

[ohnozdust]

Thank you all for your kind comments .

Watch for part II coming to a Sneeze Fetish Forum near you

I'll be there

[Daphine]

Here is the second part of my short story. I hope you enjoy it as well as the drawing that go's along with it.

Happy Holidays everyone!

“Did you hear that, it came from over there” she heard one of the voices shout. Susan’s mind cleared as she realized that she had to move fast. She backed up back under the desk and found a loose panel on the side of the cubical. She pushed it out of the way and crawled threw to the next cubical and did the same. At this point she looked out of the opening and could see that the two men had converged on the site were she had sneezed. She waited to just the right moment when both of there backs were turned and quickly scrambled across the floor to the exit. Once in the hall Susan got to her feet and headed to the first door she could find.

The entire building was dark but this room was pitch black . Susan waited till her eyes adjusted to the darkness it was then that she found that she was in a store room were they kept all the mannequins for different displays. She slowly tried to maneuver her way threw them when she accidentally knocked one over. The crash echoed threw the room and Susan could hear the sound of footsteps racing in her direction. She ducked behind one more mannequin when she heard the door open. She stood perfectly still as she watched a hand come threw the opening and start to fumble about the wall looking for a light switch. The first switch it found turned on a large overhead fan but the second one turned on spotlights that were positioned in every corner of the room. One of the spotlights shinned right in Susan’s eyes causing a photonic effect it was the first time that Susan realized that her allergies were still bothered by all the pollen she had inhaled earlier. She could feel the terrible sneezy sensation return. She fought hard to not even squint her eyes knowing that any movement would give her away. Slowly her eyes adjusted to the light and the sneeze began to back off a little.

Susan watched nervously as the two men worked there way through the room. It was right then that Susan felt a painful itch on her cheek. She looked down only to see a lock of her brown hair being pushed across her face by the powerful overhead fan. It scratched and tickled it’s way across her cheek coming closer and closer and finally coming to rest on the underside of her nose. The hair prickled and tickled at her left nostril. Susan tried to blow air up from her lips hopping to push the hair away but it only caused it to vibrate and for the tickle to become more intense. She could feel the sneeze beginning to grow. Her eyes began to tear and she could feel her nose becoming runny. Her heart was pounding in her chest as she tried to riggel her nose around but quickly stopped when she realized her mistake. The lock of hair had now gone up her nostril. She could feel the hairs scratching against the soft inner side walls and gently tickle against the soft small hairs that lined the inside of her nose. Susan felt her body begin to shake as a single tear ran down her cheek. The tickle was like no other she had ever felt before and this only caused the sneeze to grow in force. She could see threw watery eyes that the men getting closer. She could feel her fingers squirm at the ends of her hands. She wanted so badly to raise them up to her nose and put an end to the torture. Ahhh, the sound even surprised her AAAHHH, the sneeze was building quickly now and Susan’s stalkers were already alerted to her wear a bouts but still she struggled with the sneeze still hoping that maybe there still was a chance to escape. She thought to herself "o'h please not now, not again, not another sna, sneeze!" She desperatly hoped the sneeze might subside but instead it only grew stronger till finally Ahhhhh, EEEYYY, AAAAH-CHOOO!

[ohnozdust]

Very nice, very dramatic, though I'm surprised you didn't have scooby Doo hiding instead.

I was wondering that myself

[ohnozdust]

Another great story & picture

[Daphine]

Very nice, very dramatic, though I'm surprised you didn't have scooby Doo hiding instead.

I was wondering that myself

Well I thought I would post a story/ comic that more members would enjoy .

I always have time for a good Scooby sneezing while hidding fanfic

[ohnozdust]

Well I thought I would post a story/ comic that more members would enjoy .

I always have time for a good Scooby sneezing while hidding fanfic

That was nice of you to think about the rest of the group like that,even when your

main interest is in Scooby and his special talent.

[Dawnie]

Excellent, Daphine. Thank you for sharing. Terrific drawing as well. You're so talented.

[(hippo)]

LOVE the piccy, soo good.

[TN1]

What a great gift!!! Thank you so much for the story!

[Guest Thera]

Tantalizing story, can't wait to hear what happens!

[mysterysneeze]

I smile whenever I look back at this story. Daphne, you make a heck of a great sneezing while hiding story. This may not be long and it may not have an amazing plot, but I really enjoyed this story .

[thesneeze123]

This was one of the first stories I ever read on here and it is still always one of my favorites!

[blum]

Thanks for sharing

[megacycle]

Gotta love the sneezing while hiding stories.

I remember reading this story before I became a member of the forum.

[dontnoqit]

Hiding sneezes are the best! Thanks!

[Mash]

I love the sneezing while hiding stuff. xP

[dontnoqit]

Ooh, hiding! My favorite!