Furry-Sneezes Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 (edited) Here's the first story that was written of a random character that was made for me by someone else (see image)I believe these three chapters were by DragonDustMacro-Foxies and Pollen Don’t MixVikki the macro-foxie was walking along the river bank one day. She loved walking in the countryside, taking in the natural beauty and enjoying the way the grass tickled under her feet. The only problem was that sometimes the plants set off her allergies. It didn’t happen often, but when it did, she sneezed uncontrollably for hours…and when you’re 25-feet tall, you have some big, big sneezes. She looked up as she heard a screech, watching a hawk circling overhead. While she was looking up however, she wasn’t looking where she was putting her feet, and she slipped on the wet rocks beside the river. *crash* Vikki flopped on her face into a field of wild flowers. Getting up to her knees, she looked around, then took a sniff, smelling the fragrance of the flowers. Unfortunately, this turned out to be a bad idea. A grain of pollen drifted into her nostril and started to tickle her nose."Ahh…Ahhh…Ahhchooo!"The force of Vikki’s sneeze blew the flowers around like a gale, and caused a cloud of pollen to puff up from the meadow, and right into the sniffling vixen’s nose."Oh no!" *sniff* "Ehh…Ahhh…"She quickly put both hands over her muzzle, trying to stop the sneeze, but it was no good. All her hands could do was muffle the sound."Uh...Uhh…Uhhh…Atchoo!"The sneeze blew Vikki’s hands away from her face, and sent birds for miles around flapping around in panic. The foxie scrambled back to the stream, plunging her snout into the water in the hopes of washing away the pollen. Her eyes began to water, and she felt the itch in her nose again."Ehh…Ahhh…Ehhh…Ahhhh-chooo!"Water fountained up, soaking the vixen’s face. As she wiped the water from her eyes, she felt the tickle begin again."Ahh…Ahhh…"Vikki shook her head, trying to dislodge the tickly thing from her nose, but without success."Ehhh…Ahhh…"She took a deep breath and blew it out through her nose, but it was no use."Ahhhh…CHOOO!!!"This sneeze was powerful enough to blow the leaves off the trees, and sent Vikki reeling back in a daze. Wiping her nose, the sneezes seemed to have stopped for now. Vikki set off to continue her walk.A Walk in the Park After a bit of a trek, Vikki found herself away from the hustle and bustle of the city and inside one of the nearby parks. This particular one was a mass of forested land that had very few indications that humanity had ever set foot in the place. The sun’s rays reached clear down to the bottom of a small lake that was about a mile walk from the entrance, which, given Vikki's size, was like nothing. She sighed and sat down on the grass, the beauty of it all just mesmerized her. The air was fresh, clean, nigh untouched by the pollution that was abundant in the city. (Not to mention the havoc that played on her senses!) It was a welcome change. The wind picked up a bit, and Vikki enjoyed the feeling of the cool air going over her fur. It was relaxing. But, what she didn’t know was that the wind had a few little presents to give her… and it took her a while to notice that there was a huge patch of various native large grasses nearby, all of which happened to be pollinating. Her nose had figured it out already. "Ah" she started. The tickle had come, unwanted but unavoidable. Vikki's nose wrinkled as the familiar sensation started to build up. "Ahhh, ahh…hhhAAahhhh.." She held her paws up to her nose, hoping to contain the impending sneeze. Not that it would really help much. "Hhhhuhhnn.." Her eyes shut for a moment, and it seemed that the feeling was gone, but when she opened her eyes and put her paws back down the tickle flared up which she was unprepared for. "HaaaAAAHHHSSHEEWWW!!!" The force of the sneeze caused her to double over, which nearly threw her off balance. But wait, there’s more… "Hhh-hhhaahhhh, aahhh hAAASSSHEEW!!! Unh…HHSHOO!!" Teary-eyed, the macro-vixen stumbled forward, sniffling. She looked desperately for somewhere to go, and saw a small rocky area that didn’t harbor any of the plants whose pollen her immune system despises. She made her way there, impeded a little by her current sneezing fit. "AHHHSHOO!! Haahh, ahh AAAHH AHHHSSHOOO!! HHEHHSHEW!! *sniffle*" Vikki gets there in a daze. Her nose is worn, and her vision is bleary. She quickly gets behind a small (well, to her) rock face that blocks the accursed pollen from bothering her nose any more. She sits down, wrinkles her nose and sneezes ("HHAHHSHEW!!" into her arm. The tickle in her nose slowly faded, and she lay against the rock face, clearly worn out. The sun had started to set. Vikki watched it for a while, as the sky changed colors like some sort of otherworldly canvas. So pretty… It was at this point that the rock she was leaning on decided it wasn’t cool with this arrangement so it decided to collapse on itself. Vikki fell backwards, which, combined with the rocks crumbling, made a large dust cloud. Her nose started to tickle again as she accidently sniffed some up. "Ahhh..hhaaaahhh" she started. Her eyes were tearing again from the intense feeling. She tried to subdue it, holding a finger under her quivering nose, but that only seemed to make things worse. "Ahhh huhh, AHHH HEHH,AAAAAHHH" Her hands wee halfway up to her face when the sneeze exploded. "HAAAHHHSSSHOOOO!!!" The sneeze was so forceful it caused Vikki to topple over. Her nose was protesting the constant abuse, and as soon as that one ended another one started up. "hhh…haahh, aaaahh..unh..AAAAAHHHSHOOO!! HEHSHHOOO!! *sniff*" This last one seemed to be the end of it, but Vikki was dizzy. Well, enough for today, she thought. She sniffled a little, wiggling her nose, and started back the way she came.Fox and the CityAfter walking for about an hour, Vikki arrived at the city. She liked to come into town every so often to shop and admire the architecture. The only thing she didn’t like was the pollution, because it sometimes bothered her nose. As she was looking at the buildings, however, she wasn’t looking where she was going, and she tripped over a parked bus. She grabbed hold of the building in front of her and managed to stay on her feet, but her nose ended up directly over a chimney. The smoke drifted up her nose, and it started to itch."Oh no, I'm gonna…gonnahhh…ahhhh…ahhhh-chooo!"The force of the sneeze blew Vikki off the building and sent her stumbling across the street."Aw, not ahh…ahhgain…ahhh…ahhhchooo!"This sneeze set off car alarms all around the block. Vikki wiped her nose frantically, trying to avoid any more destructive sneezes, but it was no good. The tickly feeling in her nose continued."Ehh…ehhh…ehhhh…unghhhh!"She managed to contain the sneeze in her paws, but as soon as she removed her hands…"Atchoo! Oh drat."By now, people on the street below were starting to get angry with the vixen for the trouble she was causing. Vikki turned to leave the city so she wouldn’t cause any more damage, but once again, the itching in her nose got worse."Ahh…ehhh…ahhhh…ahhh-chooo!"The force of the sneeze shattered windows on the buildings nearby and left Vikki dazed. By now, the people were fleeing from the sneezy fox."Wait, please, don’t run away! It's not my fault, I just…ahhh…just…ahhhh…ahhhchooo!"The people in the streets were knocked flat by the blast. Vikki turned and started to run out of the city, before she demolished the place, or worse, the army showed up and tried to demolish her! Unfortunately, she met the army on their way into town!"There's the target!" yelled the general in charge. "Load all weapons! Take aim! Open fire!"A swarm of missiles and cannon shells flew toward the vixen, but…"Ahhh-choo! Ahhh-choo! Ahhhh-chooo!"Vikki's sneezes blew the artillary back at the army. The troops ejected and dived for cover as their tanks and choppers were blown to pieces. The foxie took the opportunity to escape while the soldiers were trying to put out the fires. She fled into the forest and hid, and her sneezing eventually stopped, but not before half the trees got blown over.And that, as they say, is the last word."Ahchooo!"Oops, I guess Vikki had the last word after all! Edited June 24, 2008 by Furry-Sneezes Link to comment
Furry-Sneezes Posted February 9, 2008 Author Share Posted February 9, 2008 So like, is -anyone- interested in seeing other Vikki stuff? http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...showtopic=27167 I have some RPs that I'm willing to share, but if noone's interested then... :| Link to comment
Demosthenes Posted February 10, 2008 Share Posted February 10, 2008 Sure, I'm interested. Link to comment
Vendetta Posted February 12, 2008 Share Posted February 12, 2008 really cute! i know i wouldnt mind reading more Link to comment
megacycle Posted August 9, 2012 Share Posted August 9, 2012 I knew there was a furry sneeze story on here somewhere.Still an evjoyable read. Link to comment
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