winterweakness Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 ok well im going to try this, im not a very good writer so i donno how this is ganna turn out. oh and im not the best speller so yeah sorry Prompt:miserableword count:104There he was, currled up on the couch. i have never seen so miserable, his nose looked like someone had painted it red, his face was like looking like a ghost's. i stood in the doorway watching him, wondering how something as common as a cold could bring such a strong boy down so hard. He sneezed hurshly into the sleeve of his hoodie, then looked up at me with his sad, tired eyes. 73 i slowly made my way towards him, putting the back of my hand against his forehead. i sighed, "Wel that will teach you not to play football in the rain."i just do one cause well this one is not the best... sorry Link to comment
aquadyne14 Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 another late one to the club - i don't feel so lonely as a newbie drabble writter now i love your first one! as for the spelling, well, lets just say join the club - lol i just hope he plans on playing lots of football in the rain - heehee Link to comment
Vetinari Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 He sounds deliciously miserable. Thank you! Link to comment
chui Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 oh yes... absolutely nummy! tis wonderful! Link to comment
obsessed Posted June 9, 2009 Share Posted June 9, 2009 Love it. I love football and rain. =D Link to comment
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.