Hayley has a cold

[sneezes]

Hayley was a 22 year old girl who lived at home with her mum as she hadnt raised enough money to move out of her house.

It was Monday morning, and she woke up feeling awful. She had woken up with a congested nose and a sore throat. She sniffed, and sneezed.... hashooooooooo. She rubbed her nose, sniffed, and pulled out a tissue from the box next to her bed, and gave her nose a good blow. At this point, her mum knocked on the door. " Hay, u alright hunny?", " dobe, she said with her voice full of congeston. Her mum came in and said " you relle dont look well, you shouldnt go to work". Hayley agreed she really felt rough. She grabbed some more tissue and blew her nose.

She got out of bed, and sneezed 3 more times. hashoooooooo, hashooooooooooo, hashooooooooo. She sniffled and blew her nose again. She put her sweats on and went downstairs. When she got down, her mum gave her a drink and a box of tissues, and said " Here i gota go work, here's some tissues hope you feel well later".

Any good??

[Alexandria]

I think its good