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[Kiwifruit]

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Edited July 28, 2016 by Kiwifruit

[zneeze]

Aww, this is adorable Kaira's awesome, but I don't really like Dan But very very nice and well-written, Kiwi! Cannot wait for more

[Blah!?]

That was really cute. xD I'm trying to avoid just saying what zneeze just said, but he summed it up pretty good.

I do actually kind of like Dan though. I can tell that even though he acts like a jerk, he really does care.

[untiluntiluntil]

eee, so cute!

[chalkdust]

This is a very cute begining. Cn't wait for more

[dontnoqit]

This is great! A little short, but I'm betting you can rectify that...