NMS Legacy

[VividBubbles!]

Hey people. Okay, the NMS Legacy is my school's literary magazine.

Before the beginning of spring break I submitted a poem and a shortish story to be put in the magazine and I've been really anxious since.

So, because I won't be back in school for another 5 days and I'm not sure when they'll tell me if I'm in or not, I'm posting it here, on Off-Topic.

I'd really like to get some feedback on this so if you guys could just leave a comment (constructive criticism, compliment, ect.) here that'd be great. Thanks!

BYE!

My Poem: The Grey

My Story: The Panther of Dimon (pronounced Dih-mon or Dia-mon)

Edited April 6, 2012 by Bubbles!