alwaysbored84 Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 ‘Tickle, tickle, Mara...’ She could practically hear the Tickle whispering as dust particles danced from deep within the sensitive cavities of her large nose Snnniiiiifffff... “N-no... snnniiiifffff.... p-please...” she shuddered silently. This closet was more dusty than she’d thought it was. Still, she had to stay in there. She had to stay quiet! While Mara was doing fine at this, her nose was not as cooperative. “Heh.... sniiiifff.... h-heh... snnniiiiiffff....” The poor girl couldn’t help herself - oh, her nose. Her poor, itchy nose. It had been so long since she’s dusted! And how could she tell? Well, her nostrils - wide-set and fluttering - picked up the dust with each and every sniffle. But she couldn’t stop, oh no... the Tickle wouldn’t let her. ‘That’s it, Mara, keep sniffing in that dust.’ Her pink nostrils flared with each hasty breath. Slowly in... slowly out. “H-heh.... sniiiiffff.... nyeh-heh.... sniiiiiffff” God, that dust tickled her! But she couldn’t help but sniff. And sniff... and sniff... ‘Oh, is your nose ever excited, Mara. One little sneeze ought to solve that.’ Mara could feel her eyes begin to water. Her breaths were becoming more hitched as the Tickle worked its way further into her nose. “N’yeH... heh... hueh... hueh... Heh... hueH.. h’heh... h’HEH...” Her large bosom rose and fell with each hitching breath: her nostrils keeping in time with the erratic rhythm. “N’yeH... heh... hueh... hueh... Heh... hueH.. h’heh... h’HEH...” It felt like a million fingers were caressing the inner walls of Mara’s nose. Almost like... like little feathers or something, walking up and down her nasal cavity. She held her finger beneath her quaking nose as if that would help. Her circular nostrils continued to flare, picking up speed with her hitching breaths and reflexive snorts. “H-heh, ihh, sn-sniff, hueh - Heh... Eh, snuuuurk, heh... ihh, hehh...” The Tickle was pleased, though never satisfied. ‘Come on, Mara, you know I’m going to win in the end sooner or later.’ Meanwhile, those two gaping holes of hers leaked with mucus all the way down into the crevice of her cleavage. “Gah, n-nuh, no...” Still, her nose continued comfort and twitch and dance with itch. This was becoming torturous for Mara. “Gah, p-pleeeaaase d’huh - d-don’t m-meh-heh... m-mbake *snnnuurrrk*... mbake m-mbe sn...snnuuhh, ih, huEH...” As the Tickle grew ever stronger in her nose, Mara could feel control slipping away from her with each and every snort, every nostril twitch, and every desperate breath. A sneeze was coming, whether she wanted it or not. “NyyehHEH! P-puh-p-please... I ca’HAH’n’t huh-ho... huuuh... ho ndo...” This was the Tickle’s favorite part: the buildup. “Hhhh’uuuhhh....” Mara’s chest heaved against her tight shirt. “Ny’uhhhuuuhhh...” Her nostrils flared out to the size of half dollars. “Heh,hIH.... HUEEEEH.... E’EHHHHH.... IHHHHH...” Oh, her nose. How it twinged. How it ached! Each twitch of that huge nose allowed another gaping breath to escape. The impending need to sneeze was coming closer and closer. “G’YEEEEEHHH.... h’HEEEEEEHHH...” ‘Tickle tiiiickle, Mara’, the Tickle sang. “HEHEHEHEH.... N’Yiiihhhh... H’leEEH....” Mara’s jaw went slack. Her eyebrows crossed as her large nose began to scrunch. “Y-YUH... Y-IH... Y-you... wuhh... wi’IH... w-win...” This was it. Her battle with the cursed Tickle was over. “HuuuUuuhhHHH.... HehHEH’HEHHH.... AH’AaaaAAAAHHHHH... H’hAH.... H’hAAAHHH..... HaaaHHHAAAA’EEEiiiiiSHHHOO!” One trumpeted sneeze was all it took to satisfy the urge. The Tickle was pleased. ‘You know I always win, Mara. Until next time.’ Link to comment
Usagi Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 Oh lord this one was good super good. You should write more often your style is really good. Link to comment
alicex Posted July 18, 2018 Share Posted July 18, 2018 this was rlly good. ^I agree, I like ur style Link to comment
RediChalyn Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 I like how the Tickle was personified...really put a whole new spin on things! Love it! Link to comment
NoV Posted July 22, 2018 Share Posted July 22, 2018 This was really great - especially how the Tickle had its own personality. And for a fan of torturous build-ups, this story definitely ticked all the boxes. Link to comment
MzMental Posted December 1, 2018 Share Posted December 1, 2018 This is still my favorite story so far. I wish there were more like it! Link to comment
Mimaneneko Posted September 15, 2022 Share Posted September 15, 2022 Sorry for the Necro bump but this is REALLY good! Link to comment
Dgrayman Posted September 15, 2022 Share Posted September 15, 2022 Incredible build-ups! Link to comment
Tyko93 Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 Those buildups were awesome. Great job. Link to comment
Icyfall Posted November 11, 2022 Share Posted November 11, 2022 This is very good thank you for sharing Link to comment
Dawsio Posted November 11, 2022 Share Posted November 11, 2022 Really good story! Poor Mara. Everyone succumbs to the tickle... Eventually... Link to comment
BigECheese Posted February 6 Share Posted February 6 This story was fun to read. Good job! Link to comment
Engmanny Posted February 7 Share Posted February 7 Love the premise of this story and the build up 🤯 Link to comment
Guest Posted February 7 Share Posted February 7 As a proud supporter of big buildups, this story is amazing. I loved how descriptive it was, and how desperate the sneezer was to get rid of the tickle! My only suggestion would be to maybe use a less big font in future sneezefics? Other than that, this story was great! Link to comment
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