snottynsneezy Posted August 18, 2021 Share Posted August 18, 2021 DREAM GIRL CORP. we find YOU the woman of YOUR DREAMS (for ALL your needs) >the large heavily tinted glass sliding doors revealed a sheen pristine minimalistic interior. in the center of the room lay a desk with a screen, "fill in this survey to reach your dreams" >after filling in the form you enter an all white room with a single bed in the center. >an employee of the establishment, dressed head to toe in lab gear, hands you an "about" card regarding your soon to come dream girl Name: Bea Condition: congested (sniffly) sick with a sneezy cold (+sneeziness) allergies: dust, cat dander >you enter a room fitted with a bed at the center, a stack of old dust frosted books beside it. A handful of cats, from ragdoll cats to ragamuffin cats (all known to shed mountains of fur) you could only imagine the woman that stand before you in your near future >it was her, Bea, a tall woman with long dirty blonde hair tied up into a messy bun. She was dressed professionally in a suit. Her nose had a bright red composure, raw looking from presumed constant rubbing and blowing, creased along the bridge from upwards rubbing/stroking. Her cheeks were an intense red blush from being sick. Her eyes widened, pupils sharpening from the sight of such an amount of allergens >she walked over to you slowly, weakened from her cold. "H-Hey, I'm Bea" she introduced herself. you could hear her congestion, wet nasally sounds from her nostrils. It was a wet kind of congestion. She walked up beside you on the bed, sniffling and aggressively rubbing her nose as she approached you. As she rubbed her palm against the front of her nose you could see her hand glistening in the light from her runny nose. >you adjust the bed's blanket *knowing that it would blow the dust from the books all over the bed. >a cloud of dust is blown in the direction of Bea's face "Argh..." she grunts as the dust particles make their way up into her nasal passages, dust bunnies dancing against the inner walls of her nostrils, causing them to run profusely. "I'm very allergic to dust" she says through her hand against her nose. "My nose has been messing with me all day" she complains, pinching her nose. >it appears that her extremely congested nose prevented her from letting out a sneeze "Humphxxnt" >she let out a nasal sounding stifled sneeze. the congestion in her nose stifled the sneeze for her without even trying you seemed a tad disappointed in the lack of sneeziness you were promised. >then you remember something >you go "pspspspspspsp" and a family of cats pounce onto the top of the bed, rubbing themselves against the both of you. >Bea's eyes begin to water, her body tensing up with the urge to sneeze, she takes a breath, then another breath, a hard buildup. ... "HESCHIEWW... HESCHIEW... HESCHIEW HESCHI HESCHIWE" she releases a volley of wet uncovered sneezes, like a shotgun filled with snot. >at this point she was covered in cat dander and dust, her nose was running, the tissue she had in her hands were destroyed as she kept sneezing, struggling to catch a breath you wrap your arms around her in an attempt to care for her in her midst of an uncontrollable sneezing fit. "HESCH- HESHIEW HECHIE- HESCHIEWW" she couldn't stop, the sneezes kept coming. The sneezes sounded as if an attempt to stifle them was made despite having no control over it at all. >a book drops >a frightened ragdoll cat, notorious for shedding a lot, pounces on top of Bea's poor red face "UARGH!" she groaned as the cat jumped off her face, leaving behind a sprinkling of dander all over her nose and face at this point her face was twitching, her eyes were watering, her nose had a slow waterfall of snot. Her breath was hitching as she scrunched up her nose which had a sheen on its tip from her running nose. She took a massive deep breath... "HASH HASCH" she let out massive wet sneezes. Rapid, unleashed in doubles, triples, QUADRUPLES, making no bother of trying to hold them in whatsoever. She would not stop. Despite the amount of sneezes, her nose would not clear up, still stuffy with every sniffle. Showering you in the mucus that glistened against the darker contrast of the dust in the air. >cats fled from the bed as they were drenched in the moist spray of Bea's wet sneezes >you hold her in you arms you feel her body relaxing and contracting with every set of sneezes you hear the wet sounds of her sneezing and congested sniffling you admire her wet, raw, red nostrils and she rubbed them between sneezes she was everything you could have ever dreamed of Link to comment
NickG1998 Posted August 18, 2021 Share Posted August 18, 2021 This story is really amazing I can’t wait to read the next update keep up the great work I always like people with sneezy colds Link to comment
prismaticpollen Posted August 18, 2021 Share Posted August 18, 2021 This looks great, I’m excited to see where you go with it if you choose to continue! Link to comment
NoV Posted August 18, 2021 Share Posted August 18, 2021 Welcome to the forum - new writers are always much appreciated I enjoyed reading this - you have a very unique and readable style. Link to comment
Nspringthorpe321 Posted August 18, 2021 Share Posted August 18, 2021 Oh this is very good. A woman with a lovely cold and a nice red nose to go with it. Keep it up, you've got proper talent. Link to comment
NotWho Posted August 20, 2021 Share Posted August 20, 2021 I really like this, it’s a unique story line! Link to comment
DanniSneeze Posted August 21, 2021 Share Posted August 21, 2021 On 8/18/2021 at 9:08 PM, Nspringthorpe321 said: Oh this is very good. A woman with a lovely cold and a nice red nose to go with it. Keep it up, you've got proper talent. Link to comment
CPrime97 Posted August 23, 2021 Share Posted August 23, 2021 That's a really cool story. Link to comment
Jettous Posted August 27, 2021 Share Posted August 27, 2021 This was great. I love sneezy and messy colds. Link to comment
Nocturnal Posted September 4, 2021 Share Posted September 4, 2021 Super hot I loved it! What can be better than a sneezy blonde with a cold Link to comment
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