DesperationLover Posted March 13, 2023 Share Posted March 13, 2023 Caitlin's a petite young woman, barely five foot two. Though she's got an athletic little body, it’s toned through and through. She’s a small girl, but her sneezes aren't what one wants to face. When her breath starts to hitch, people look for cover all over the place. It doesn't matter what sets her off; pollen, dust, or just a tickly touch. Once her breath starts getting shaky, there's one thing you can trust. Caitlin's nose is normally sized, maybe on the tinier side; it’s certainly not well endowed. However, her lungs suck in more air than should be physically allowed "Heh... ihhh...." It keeps on building, she can't fight it, no strength for her to muster. Her button-nose keeps on trembling and flaring, and her eyelids begin to flutter. "Ah... ahhahh...AH!" Her nose has to be pinched, it's nearly the apex of her allergic reaction. She's looking desperately where to aim, what's the best course of action? It's direction can't be controlled once her build-up is complete. Thankfully there's no people or cars on a nearby city street "Ehhhh... Ahhh! AHHH!" The time had come, and she hopes and prays for it not to be that big a sneeze. Her nose has other plans, and it'll be much more than a light breeze. She freezes in place, preparing for what’s to come. From her itching, twitching nose, she removes her index finger and thumb. “AH… AHH… AHHHH!!!” Her heart is pounding like a drum! “AHHHH…. AAACCHHHOOOOO!!!!!” Leaves get blown right away, both from on the trees and on the ground. The grass ripples, garbage cans fall over, and random objects get thrown around. Windows get thrown open and shut, it’s truly a sight to be seen. The force of the sneeze blows the area in front of her very nearly clean. “I-IHHH….” But it’s not over yet, for Caitlin knows the way she will always sneeze. Her lungs fill up with air again. They always come in threes. “EGH… EHHH… HEPSCHEEEWWW!!!!!” Only for a moment, there is a brief bit of rest. But that won’t last long, for her sneezes have brought up a little pest. All the dust from the ground, and pollen from the plants, Have just made her nose immensely more tickly, a grave new circumstance. “HHHIIIIHHHHH!!!” Her eyes grow wide as they roll back, and her nostrils flare as wide as they can. This will prove to be even worse than when it first began. She says a prayer in her head to try to help her through, That from her colossal sneezing, not too much damage will accrue. Then there was time before only a hitch or two…. “AHHHH…..” “HEGGHHHH….” “IIIIIGGGSSSHHHHEEEEEEEWWWWWW!!!!!!!” Needless to say, there was immense commotion imparted. When she regained focus, Caitlin looked on, heavy hearted. She hated to cause such a scene from her bothersome little nose. But the euphoric feeling of relief outweighed it, she supposed. Link to comment
Spacesneezeman Posted March 13, 2023 Share Posted March 13, 2023 6 hours ago, DesperationLover said: Caitlin's a petite young woman, barely five foot two. Though she's got an athletic little body, it’s toned through and through. She’s a small girl, but her sneezes aren't what one wants to face. When her breath starts to hitch, people look for cover all over the place. It doesn't matter what sets her off; pollen, dust, or just a tickly touch. Once her breath starts getting shaky, there's one thing you can trust. Caitlin's nose is normally sized, maybe on the tinier side; it’s certainly not well endowed. However, her lungs suck in more air than should be physically allowed "Heh... ihhh...." It keeps on building, she can't fight it, no strength for her to muster. Her button-nose keeps on trembling and flaring, and her eyelids begin to flutter. "Ah... ahhahh...AH!" Her nose has to be pinched, it's nearly the apex of her allergic reaction. She's looking desperately where to aim, what's the best course of action? It's direction can't be controlled once her build-up is complete. Thankfully there's no people or cars on a nearby city street "Ehhhh... Ahhh! AHHH!" The time had come, and she hopes and prays for it not to be that big a sneeze. Her nose has other plans, and it'll be much more than a light breeze. She freezes in place, preparing for what’s to come. From her itching, twitching nose, she removes her index finger and thumb. “AH… AHH… AHHHH!!!” Her heart is pounding like a drum! “AHHHH…. AAACCHHHOOOOO!!!!!” Leaves get blown right away, both from on the trees and on the ground. The grass ripples, garbage cans fall over, and random objects get thrown around. Windows get thrown open and shut, it’s truly a sight to be seen. The force of the sneeze blows the area in front of her very nearly clean. “I-IHHH….” But it’s not over yet, for Caitlin knows the way she will always sneeze. Her lungs fill up with air again. They always come in threes. “EGH… EHHH… HEPSCHEEEWWW!!!!!” Only for a moment, there is a brief bit of rest. But that won’t last long, for her sneezes have brought up a little pest. All the dust from the ground, and pollen from the plants, Have just made her nose immensely more tickly, a grave new circumstance. “HHHIIIIHHHHH!!!” Her eyes grow wide as they roll back, and her nostrils flare as wide as they can. This will prove to be even worse than when it first began. She says a prayer in her head to try to help her through, That from her colossal sneezing, not too much damage will accrue. Then there was time before only a hitch or two…. “AHHHH…..” “HEGGHHHH….” “IIIIIGGGSSSHHHHEEEEEEEWWWWWW!!!!!!!” Needless to say, there was immense commotion imparted. When she regained focus, Caitlin looked on, heavy hearted. She hated to cause such a scene from her bothersome little nose. But the euphoric feeling of relief outweighed it, she supposed. You're quite the poet! I genuinely enjoyed reading that, you did a great job writing it. Thanks for sharing! Link to comment
Holdbacks Posted March 15, 2023 Share Posted March 15, 2023 Imagine massive people got a cold for this 💀 "Ah... ahhahh...AH!" I gonna run away and hide somewhere 😂 Link to comment
demon_destroyer7479 Posted April 15, 2023 Share Posted April 15, 2023 These kind of giant sneeze stories/drabbles are always my favorite! Amazing work describing the buildup! Link to comment
LazyExplorer Posted April 21, 2023 Share Posted April 21, 2023 Hehe a lovely sneezy little poem Link to comment
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