kiku Posted October 20, 2023 Share Posted October 20, 2023 Happy Halloween! š» First of all, I'd like to say a great big "thank you" to @launderedlace who allowed me to use one of his beautiful photos for my story. The lacy handkerchief is a delicate piece of art, as is the picture itself. Now, on to the story! .................................... āWeāre lost,ā Amanda stated, shivering while pulling up the collar of her jacket. The last bit of daylight was gone now, and the big trees towering up around them made the sky seem even darker. āYeah,ā Charles grumbled, staring at the map on his cell phone to find out where to go, when the display suddenly turned black. āShit! Batteryās dead!ā Amanda looked at her boyfriend, feeling more anxious by the minute. He always seemed so self-confident and smart, always showing a wide grin on his handsome features, always liked to have fun, but whenever a problem came up, he got nervous and fidgety. With a sigh, Amanda took out her own phone ā only to find out her battery was dead too. Fighting down her worry, she said, āLetās try this directionā¦ā Hardly had she spoken those words when a heavy rain began to fall, drenching them both within seconds. A storm began to blow, and thunder was crashing nearby. āThis way, quick!ā Charles shouted, grabbed Amandaās hand and pulled her along a path meandering through the thick bushes and trees. The howling wind blew autumn leaves into their faces, getting caught in Amandaās long blonde hair. So much for a romantic hiking trip, Amanda thought gloomily as she stumbled forward, hardly seeing anything in the dark. Oh well, weāll find our way back into civilization eventually. After all weāre no helpless kids! Weāre both experienced hikers! Weāll be okay! She kept talking to herself in her mind to stay calm, while she felt the cold rain drench her more and moreā¦ āWow! Look at this!ā The path had led them out of the forest, and they suddenly stood in front of a building. Just at that moment, a lightning flashed in the middle of the thick black clouds, and they saw the building more clearly. It was a huge, old castle. āD-do you think we c-can go in there?ā Amandaās teeth were chattering because she was freezing so badly. āLetās try.ā Charles turned the big bronze door knob, and the door opened with a long, squeaky soundā¦ Inside, it was almost colder than outside. The air was humid and dusty, and spiderwebs were hanging everywhere. āHelloooo? Is anybody heeeereā¦?ā Charles called, but it soon turned out it was pointless. One hour later, they had managed to light a fire in one of the big old fireplaces, trying to get comfortable on the thick old black and green carpet as there was no furniture anywhere. They knew they would have to wait here until the violent thunderstorm was over ā which, no doubt, wouldnāt be until the next morning. They had wrapped themselves in some old, flimsy blankets they had found in one of the rooms, sitting as closely to the fire as possible. Soon, Charles felt a bit warmer, but he noticed Amanda was still shivering. āYouāre still cold, huh?ā he asked, putting his arm around her. āYes. Uuughhhā¦ā She sniffled. āThat chilly rainā¦ I think Iāve caught ahhhā¦ caught a coldā¦ hehhhā¦ā As if to prove her words, she sneezed forcefully: āHehEEESSHHHEEW!ā Immediately he shrank back. āUhā¦ bless you,ā he mumbled. āHaaaIIISSHHEEW!... Thanks-hhuuhhh-huuuEEESSHHHOOH!... Agh, I need my tissuesā¦ HaaaaIIISSHHOOH!ā āGeez!ā he muttered as Amanda hectically searched the pockets of her jacket, pulling out a package of tissues that had miraculously stayed dry inside the water-proof plastic wrap. āDid you catch a cold again?ā he grumbled, frowning at his girlfriend who was now pressing a handful of tissues to her rather large, well-shaped nose. āI told you that thin jacket would be useless if it started raining! And look at those shoes! What happened to your waterproof sneakers?!ā Sneezing again violently, Amanda cast a sad glance at her pretty sandals that were soaking wet. āI thoughtā¦ *sniff*ā¦ since the weather was nice when we lehhā¦ lefthhhā¦ heehhEESSHHHOOH!... NNEEESSHHOOH!ā He sighed irritably. āReally, Amanda! Someone whoās so prone to catching a cold as you are should be more careful!ā āI kndow. *sniffle* Youāre right.ā She blew her nose, then her breath hitched again. āUghhā¦ gosh, Ihhhā¦ hahhhā¦ Iāve really caught a cohhhā¦ haaaEEGGSSHHH!ā She desperately tried to stifle her sneezy outburst, but it was no use ā her sneezes were simply too forceful to be stifled. All she managed was muffle the sound a little: āHunnNGGSSHHugh!... HunGHIISSHHuh!... HaaKKSSHHOOagh!ā āThatās it. Iāve had enough!ā Abruptly Charles got up, seizing his clothes and blanket. āIāll sleep in the next room! Sorry, hon, but I definitely donāt want to get infected by all your sniffling and sneezing! Good night! Feel better!ā He hurried towards the door. āWhat?... Charles! You canāt just leave me alone heehā¦ heeEESSHHOOH!ā Sneezing, she struggled to get up too, but he was already gone. Angry and hurt, she wrapped the flimsy blanket more tightly around herself. āWhy did I have to get involved with such a germophobe!ā she hissed to herself. Then, reminding herself she needed some rest now to gather fresh energy for their long way back tomorrow, she curled up in front of the fireplace again, and tried to relax enough to fall asleep. But her nose would not let her. It kept running and tickling, and her nasal membranes were swelling up so she had trouble breathing. āUghā¦ā Sitting up, she scrubbed at her nose, trying to get some control of that constant itch. But as much as she rubbed, pinched, and pressed her nose, the burning tingle was stronger. Burying her nose in a fresh handful of tissues, she shakily inhaled for yet another wet explosion: āHehhhā¦ nyeehhhhā¦ HehhhhEEEESSSSOOOH!ā āHaaaaaaaaaaTTCCHHIIIISSHHHEEEWW!ā What was that??!! Amanda startled, and froze. āIt was just an echo of my own sneeze!ā she strictly told herself. āThis is a huge, empty building after all! No wonder thereāsā¦ā āHeeeeeAAATTSSSHHHEEW!... Haahhhā¦ haaaTTCCHHHEEEooh!ā No. This canāt be possible. ā Amanda felt an icy shiver run down her spine, a shiver that had nothing to do with the freezing temperature in the room. Suddenly, the air seemed to get even colder. And the darkness in front of her began to take a form. A swirling beam of light engulfed the form, and in front of Amandaās horrified eyes, a human figure manifested. It was a woman about the same age as Amanda, who had just turned thirty. She was translucent, shimmering in an eerie light, and her feet didnāt seem to touch the ground. She was wearing an old fashioned lacy nightgown, and her long silvery hair was floating all around her as if wind was blowing. The woman had a long, prominent nose with wide, highly curved nostrils that were twitching nervously as the woman sniffled. āThisā¦ this is not really happening. Iām dreaming!ā Amanda hoarsely told herself, but the next instant she was shaken by another violent sneeze that told her she was wide awake. āBless you!ā the translucent woman said in a soft, breezy voice. āI have been watching you for a while. You obviously suffer from a nasal catarrh, just like me.ā Sniffling, she pressed a translucent handkerchief to her flaring nostrils. Shaking her head in horror, Amanda slowly crept backwards, trying to get away from that vision. āNo need to be frightened.ā The soft, breezy voice seemed to come from everywhere in the room. The ghost woman floated nearer, and Amanda could see her nose was not translucent at all; it was bright white, which revealed that it would have been red if the woman was of flesh and blood. The ghost womanās nostrils were wide, triangular caves, twitching and flaring as the soft, breezy voice whispered, āI mean no harm! Iāve heard you sneeze, andā¦ I longed to be with someone who would understand me!ā Her beautiful, but otherworldly face contorted, and her breath hitched. āHeghhhā¦ aaghhh, my nosehhhhā¦. Aaahhhhhā¦. Haaaahhhhā¦. haaaaCCKKSSHHOOOOOaah!... HaaaaTTCCHHHOOOaaahh!... HeeCCKKSSSHHHOOOungh!ā the ghost woman snorted three more violent sneezes into her translucent handkerchief. It was those sneezes, so familiar in their force and tickliness, that made Amanda lose her fear of that spooky apparition, even though the whole situation still made her feel as if she had lost her mind. āBā¦ bless you!ā she finally managed to say. āIā¦ uhmā¦ Iām Amanda Sizzlewood. Iāve come here to seek shelter from the rain and stormā¦ā āPleased to meet you,ā the ghost woman sniffled, dabbing the handkerchief to her widened, twitchy nostrils. Now that she was closer, Amanda saw that the handkerchief was bordered with lace, looking very beautiful and precious. āI am Lady Amelia Wendleworth. Welcome to Snootingham Castle. It has been my home once. I moved here inhhhā¦ hhyyAAATTCCHHEEEaah!... in fifteen hundred eighty-six.ā āWā¦ wow!ā Amanda was speechless for a moment. Then her nose began tickling again, and she rubbed it fiercely before she continued speaking. āHave youā¦ been all alone all the time?ā āHiTTCCHHHEEEagh!ā Lady Amelia sneezed so abruptly she didnāt have time to raise the hanky to her nose, so a fine mist of glittery stardust floated around her head, like a mystical aura. āBless you!ā Amanda whispered, mesmerized. āThank you,ā the ghost lady sniffled, wiping her nose. āI have always been aloneā¦ for the most time of my life, anyway. My husband, the Lord of this castleā¦ā she frowned slightly, ādetested the frequency of my nasal infections. I have the tendency to catch a catarrh when the weather is wet and chillyā¦ā āJuuhhhā¦ haaaIISSHHHOOH!... Just like me!ā Amanda whispered, still rubbing her itchy nose. āThe weather was wet and chilly all the time in this region *sniffle*. So I caught a catarrh every couple of weeks. And every single time, the catarrh settled in my nose, lingering there forever, making it run, and causing a persistent tiiihhhā¦ ticklehhhhā¦ā The ladyās face contorted again, and she raised the hanky to her twitchy, sniffly nose. āHyeTTTCCCHHHOOOOH!... Excuse meehhEEETTCCHHHagh!... YYYEEEKKKSSHHaagh!ā āBless you, my lady,ā Amanda sniffled. She had lost all her fear by now. This woman was a fellow sufferer! She felt herself bonding with the sneezy ghost more and more. Looking at her more closely, she noticed Lady Ameliaās hanky didnāt really serve a purpose since there was no real fluid in her nose. Still, the lady was sniffling wetly, and there was this glittering sneeze-mist floating around her when she didnāt cover her nose!... Amanda was fascinated by that mysterious phenomenon. āMy husband, Lord Philip Wendleworth, could not endure my incessant sneezing!ā Lady Amelia sighed, pressing her white translucent fingers to her widely flaring nostrils. āHaaaaEEEESSSHHHOOH!... Just like my boyfriend!ā Amanda sniffled. āBoyfriedd?ā Lady Amelia looked confused, still pressing her fingers to her nose. āYou beadā¦ your fiadcĆ© *sniffle*?ā āHeeeeAAASSHHHoogh!... Ughā¦ something like that,ā Amanda mumbled, wiping her nose. Trying to distract herself from her constant urge to sneeze, she asked, āSoā¦ are you here all the time? Donāt you feel lonely?ā āOhā¦ā Lady Amelia gave a sniffly smile. āAs a matter of fact, I donāt live here anymore. I have long since moved to a much more pleasant place. A place where Iām no longer alone. I have found my one true love, my soul mateā¦ or shall I say, my spirit mate.ā Her smile deepened, and the aura around her lit up a little. āBut sometimes, I feel the nostalgic need to come back hereā¦ to look after things. I still think this is a beautiful castle. However, once I arrive here, I immediately catch a catarrh againā¦ just like in old times. Hehhhhā¦ā Her cold-stricken nose quivered, and her breath hitched. āHehhhhh---heeeyYYYYEEEKKSSHHaagh!... Aghā¦ haaaaEETTCCHHHaagh!ā āBleehhhā¦ haaaaAAASSHHOOH!... Bless you, my lady! I knohhhā¦ haaEESSHHHOOH!... I know how you feel *sniffle*ā¦ā Amanda sighed, struggling against the raging tickle in her nasal passages that were all stuffed up and swollen. Her eyes fell shut as the next sneeze was about to burst out of her nostrils ā when she suddenly sensed a cool touch on her tickly, twitchy nose that felt soothing and pleasant. It was as if a very soft ice pack had been put on her nose. āAahhhhā¦ā she exhaled with relief. The tickle was still there, but the urge to sneeze had been calmed down for the moment, and the stuffiness had eased off a bit. When she cautiously opened her eyes, she saw that the foggy shape of Lady Amelia was hovering very close to her, and that her milky white translucent hand was covering her nose. āI have never done thisā¦ touching the nose of a mortal human being,ā the sniffly ghost lady whispered. āBut I felt the strong desire to do so.ā āItā¦ feels good,ā Amanda whispered in return. āThank you, my lady.ā Just at that moment, a strange sound startled Amanda, and she impulsively flinched back. āWhat was that?ā she asked anxiously. It sounded like some heavy cloth being dragged across the carpet. A second later, her eyes widened in shock when a second ghost appeared in front of her ā a man, tall and lean, with a long cloak around his shoulders. āMy dear heart!ā the male ghost sighed in an eerily wheezing voice. āI have been looking for you, knowing you felt a yearning to see your old home again. And not long did I have to search! I heard that delightful sound your precious nose producesā¦ a cascade of sneezes echoing through the halls of Snootingham Castle. And there you are!ā A blissful smile spread on the pale, translucent face of the ghost man. āHeeeEETTCCHHHEEWah!... Oh, my beloved!ā Lady Amelia sniffled joyfully. āLet me introduce you to Miss Amaaahhhā¦ haaaaTTCCHHEEEaagh!... Amanda Sizzlewood. *sniff* Sheās waiting here for the storm to pass, along with her fiancĆ© who sleeps next dohhhhā¦ oh myhhhā¦ā Her crystalline face contorted, and she launched another fierce, snorting sneeze into the hanky she clasped in her hand. āBless you, my heart!... Bless your miracle of a nose!ā the ghost man breathed softly, and then he did something that made Amandaās jaw drop in amazement: He gently laid his fingers around Lady Ameliaās cold-stricken nose and began to massage it. Then he turned to Amanda, still smiling blissfully. āItās a pleasure to meet you, Miss Sizzlewood. I am Lord Arthur Haddledyfax. Like you, I am merely a guest in this castle. But unlike you, I donāt need to seek shelter from rain or stormā¦ā āHaaaahEEESSHHOOH!... Excuse me!ā Amanda sniffled, wiping her dripping nose with her tissues. āI think itāsā¦ uhmā¦ interesting that even a ghost can catch a cold!ā āOh yes, they can indeed!ā Lord Arthur beamed as he continued to rub and caress his sweetheartās impressive nose. āThank you, my darling! Your massage works wonders as always!ā Lady Amelia sighed happily, wiggling her nose against her loverās rubbing fingers. āI can hardly think of anything I enjoy doing more, my precious.ā Letting go of her nose, Lord Arthur touched his lips to it, covering it with soft sweet kisses,which immediately made Lady Amelia gasp. āOooohhhhā¦ it tiihhhā¦ ticklesā¦ HYAAGGH!ā The mighty sneeze that was about to burst out was stopped at the last second by Lord Arthurās finger pressing firmly up against the ladyās big, widened nostrils. āHaaaaaAAARRSSHHH!ā Instead, Amanda had to sneeze again. The cold infection was raging inside her nasal passages, making them tickle and itch furiously. It was always like that when she had a cold ā one sneeze after another, all day longā¦ āHehEEESSHHHOOH!... HenNNEESSHHUUH!... HaaaaEESSHHHHHagh!... Oh myhhhā¦ HeeeYYAAARRSSHHHugh!... EeeeYYYAASSHHOOH!ā āGoodness gracious me!ā With a stunned expression on his handsome glassy face, Lord Arthur stared at the human woman who was now blowing her nose. āBless you, Miss Sizzlewood! You have caught quite a severe catarrh yourself.ā His finger was still resting under Lady Ameliaās flaring, twitchy nostrils. āHaaaaaEEESSHHHHaah! *sniffle* Yes, I did,ā Amanda sighed, scrubbing at her tickly nose with the tissue wad. āThatās the reason why my boyfā¦ uhā¦ fiancĆ© wonāt sleep in the same room as meehhā¦ heehhIIISSHHUH!āĀ āI see. That is such a shame.ā Lord Arthur frowned, and Lady Amelia nodded vigorously, scrunching up her nose and pressing it against her loverās finger. Obviously she was fighting against her next impending sneeze. āAmanda dear,ā she sniffled. āYou deserve someone better, just like I did! Donāt make the mistake I made, waiting until you die! Go out and free yourself!ā As if to emphasize her words, she inhaled sharply and let her violent, snorting sneezes be caught in her loverās protecting hand: āHyyAATTTCCCHHHOOH!... HaaaaaTTCCHHEEEah!... Hahhh---haaaAATTCCHHHEEW!ā āA thousand blessings, my darling!ā Lord Arthur breathed with devotion, resuming his skilful massage on his ladyās infected sneezy nose. Seeing how Lady Ameliaās facial expression changed from desperate sneeziness to dreamy relief as she let her spirit mateās fingers work on her nose, Amanda suddenly felt sad and determined at the same time. Itās true! I donāt want to waste my life beside a man who doesnāt love me the way I am! she thought, pinching her nose as she struggled against her urge to sneeze again. I want to feel this too ā the hand of the man I love on my sneezy nose, stroking and caressing itā¦ Closing her eyes with relish at the thought, Amanda abruptly felt another tickle in her nose. āHyyeehhā¦ā she gasped, fumbling hectically for fresh tissues. Hurriedly sitting down on the carpet again, she rummaged through her bag, all the time hitching and gasping. Finally digging out a fresh handful of tissues, she held them to her nose, andā¦ ā¦ nothing. āHaaahhhā¦ hyaaahhhhā¦ aahhhhaaaahhhā¦ā The tickle in her nose was overwhelming, she felt her nostrils twitch and flare to those huge caves Charles disliked so muchā¦ but the sneeze was stuck. āOoooohh, I know that feeling!ā she heard Lady Ameliaās sympathetic, breezy voice from above her. āWhen your nose is tickling unbearably, but the sneeze just wonāt come out!ā Amanda could only nod as her breath kept hitching. āDarling, will you give the girl a hand?ā Lady Amelia asked gently. āOf course, my sweetheart! Your wish is my command.ā Lord Arthur gave a beaming smile, then floated down next to Amanda on the carpet. āIf you allow me, Miss Sizzlewood?ā Amanda felt a bit shy, but touched and happy at the same time. Her torturous false starts, again and again, drove her crazy, and she desperately needed some relief. Nodding and gasping, she tilted her head back to present her quivering, twitching nose to the ghost man. A split-second later, she felt the cool, feathery touch of Lord Arthurās subtle fingertips gliding along her flaring nostrils, gently tickling and teasing them. āAaahhhā¦ā she gasped shakily, again and againā¦ The ghostās fingertips slid inside her nostrils. It felt as if a butterfly with wings of ice were fluttering inside her nose. Softly, those icy wings were tickling and teasing the very sensitive nasal liningā¦ āHaaaaaEEEESSSHHHHEEAAHH!ā Amandaās nose exploded in a ferocious sneeze. āOh, finally!ā Lord Arthur smiled. āWhat a heavenly outburst!ā āHaaahhā¦. Haaaaahhhhā¦. Ehaaaahhhā¦ā Another sneeze started building up in Amandaās nose, but again, it wouldnāt come out. Lightly, Lord Arthur tickled and teased her flaring, itchy nostrils again, expertly finding the most sensitive spots. āYYYEEEAARRRSSSHHHHaaaghh!ā The most powerful sneeze Amanda had ever experienced burst out of her nose. āAghhhā¦ my lord, that wasā¦ā she began to speak through her hitching breath as she felt the ghost manās fingers leave her nose. āThat was incrediblehhhhhhā¦ heehhhEEESSSHHHHAAAGH!... Heehhh---heeeeIIISSHHHHUUUGH!ā āBless you!ā she heard both the lord and the ladyās voices speak to her. āAmanda dear, the blockade has been released!ā Lady Amelia said cheerfully. Amanda could only nod as sneeze after sneeze shook her whole body. She blew her nose, sneezed, and blew her nose again. āMy lordā¦ my lady,ā she said in a stuffy voice when she could speak again. āThank you so much! Thank you both so much! You were so kind and helpful to me.ā āIt was my pleasure to be at your service, Miss Sizzlewood.ā Lord Arthur smiled at her with a slight bow of his head, and Lady Amelia smiled too, snuggling close to her spirit mate. The two of them now seemed to melt into one form as they slowly began to dissolve in white mist. āFare thee well, sweet lady of the modern world,ā were the last words Amanda heard from Lady Amelia before the two ghosts were swallowed by the white mist that was filling the whole room now. Suddenly the air was very chilly again, and Amanda felt a fierce tickle in her nose. Gasping, she searched for fresh tissues. āHaaghhhā¦ haaaaEEESSHHOOH!... HeyyYYEESSHHoogh!... HaaaaAAARRRSSHHugh!ā she sneezed forcefully into her tissues, then blew her nose, curled up in front of the fire, and pulled all blankets she could find around her. Within seconds, she was fast asleep. A strong tickle in her nose woke her up. āUghhhā¦ā she sniffled, wiggling her nostrils as she hastily groped for her tissues. āHeeeeYYYAAASSHHaagghhā she sneezed heavily into the sleeve of her shirt she had hurriedly raised to her nose. ā Well, at least my clothes are dry now, she thought as the next sneezy explosion burst out of her nose. Opening her eyes again, she saw a warm red light shine through the big old window. The sun was rising ā it was the beginning of a beautiful new day. āHegghhhhā¦ā Still looking for her tissues, sniffling while her nose was tickling more and more, Amanda had to smile shakily as she remembered the crazy dream sheād had last night. Two ghosts! And one of them had a cold, like her! āHaaaaAAASSHHOOHnngghhheeheehee!ā Amanda sneezed and giggled at the same time, wiping her itchy nose with her shirt again. ā Oh well! At least I got a good message from that dream! she thought. I will start a new life. Thatās for sure! āHaaaaghhhhā¦ā Inhaling sharply for the next sneeze that urged to get out of her cold-stricken nose ā a sneeze that felt as if it would emphasize her decision ā Amanda suddenly let out her breath in surprise instead. What was that??... In front of her eyes, on the black and green carpet, lay a beautiful, pristine, white handkerchief bordered with the finest lace. Link to comment
launderedlace Posted October 21, 2023 Share Posted October 21, 2023 This is incredibly skilful and imaginative writing, and a thoroughly enjoyable read - thank you for letting us into this world! Very happy - it was a real privelege - to have played a tiny part in supporting this wonderful creationĀ š¬ļø Link to comment
kiku Posted October 21, 2023 Author Share Posted October 21, 2023 Awwww @launderedlace Thank you so much! ā¤ļø š Link to comment
NoV Posted October 21, 2023 Share Posted October 21, 2023 23 hours ago, kikuwitch said: She desperately tried to stifle her sneezy outburst, but it was no use ā her sneezes were simply too forceful to be stifled. All she managed was muffle the sound a little: āHunnNGGSSHHugh!... HunGHIISSHHuh!... HaaKKSSHHOOagh!ā Lovely Halloween fic! You certainly manage to get a lot of sneezing into this story and it was glorious Ā Amanda's sneezes sound so harsh and desperate Link to comment
kiku Posted October 21, 2023 Author Share Posted October 21, 2023 Thanks a lot, @NoV ! š» Glad you like it. I'm crazy about harsh, desperate sneezes. š Link to comment
Schnippi Posted October 22, 2023 Share Posted October 22, 2023 Thank you for bringing us a spooky story!!!!š» Link to comment
kiku Posted October 22, 2023 Author Share Posted October 22, 2023 You're welcome, @Schnippi , and thank you for your feedback! šø Link to comment
Sneezingnonstop Posted October 22, 2023 Share Posted October 22, 2023 This was a very very fun read, how fitting for the month of October! Link to comment
kiku Posted October 22, 2023 Author Share Posted October 22, 2023 @Sneezingnonstop Thank you so much! ā¤ļø I had a lot of fun writing it. š Link to comment
jke1995 Posted October 23, 2023 Share Posted October 23, 2023 Love this festive story! Great work Link to comment
kiku Posted October 23, 2023 Author Share Posted October 23, 2023 @jke1995 Thank you! š» Link to comment
AntheaHolmes Posted October 23, 2023 Share Posted October 23, 2023 Oh my. This is a fantastic and delightful story. Such handsome and lovely Ghosts. I loved it when his Lordship touched Amanda's nose. So cute. And I adore their chemistry. Full of love and understanding. That's so beautiful. The sneezes are beautifully written, as always, dear @kikuwitch!Ā Link to comment
AntheaHolmes Posted October 23, 2023 Share Posted October 23, 2023 Can't wait for your next "Halloween" Story, if you have another one. Always appreciated. Really enjoy reading them.Ā Link to comment
kiku Posted October 23, 2023 Author Share Posted October 23, 2023 @AntheaHolmes Danke schƶn, Du Liebe! ā¤ļø I'm happy you liked the chemistry between Lord Arthur and the two women, both the ghost and the human one. š I had so much fun writing it! As for another Halloween story, hmmmm... I'm afraid the time might be too short to come up with another one for this year's Halloween! š But let's wait and see what else might happen to all my sneezy characters out there... š Link to comment
AntheaHolmes Posted October 23, 2023 Share Posted October 23, 2023 15 minutes ago, kikuwitch said: @AntheaHolmes Danke schƶn, Du Liebe! ā¤ļø I'm happy you liked the chemistry between Lord Arthur and the two women, both the ghost and the human one. š I had so much fun writing it! As for another Halloween story, hmmmm... I'm afraid the time might be too short to come up with another one for this year's Halloween! š But let's wait and see what else might happen to all my sneezy characters out there... š Yes, Arthur, he's real charming! Oh I really adore and appreciate your stories and characters. Always patiently waiting for more.Ā Link to comment
kiku Posted October 25, 2023 Author Share Posted October 25, 2023 On 10/23/2023 at 9:04 PM, AntheaHolmes said: Yes, Arthur, he's real charming! Oh I really adore and appreciate your stories and characters. Always patiently waiting for more.Ā Thank you again! ā¤ļø Your kind words mean so much to me. š· @Glatissant Thank you for your kind feedback too! š Link to comment
Lady Blessington Posted October 27, 2023 Share Posted October 27, 2023 Ahhh such a happy story ššāØ Link to comment
kiku Posted October 27, 2023 Author Share Posted October 27, 2023 Thank you, @Tumblesworth! Glad you like it. ā¤ļø Link to comment
Its All Sternutation Posted October 28, 2023 Share Posted October 28, 2023 OMG this absolutely AMAZING Ā I seriously thought about writing a sneezy ghost fic myself, but this takes it out of the ballpark and I have to say I'm glad you beat me to it. I know this is probably a one-shot, but if you would be willing to consider it, I would LOVE to see some more sneezy ghosts (heck, I might have to write some myself).Ā Link to comment
kiku Posted October 28, 2023 Author Share Posted October 28, 2023 @Its All Sternutation Thank you! š§” And please, go ahead with writing a sneezy ghost story yourself! š š I'll be glad to read it whenever you feel like sharing it. Link to comment
Random Magic Posted November 1, 2023 Share Posted November 1, 2023 Fabulous, I love all your stories, they're right up my street, and this one is no let-down! And the timing so good too! Thank you for sharing! Link to comment
kiku Posted November 1, 2023 Author Share Posted November 1, 2023 @Random Magic Thank you so much for your kind words! š Link to comment
bingochamp7 Posted November 1, 2023 Share Posted November 1, 2023 This story is so amazing, like it hit all my feels. You have a way with words - the love and tenderness between Arthur and Amelia was so beautifully written. Link to comment
kiku Posted November 1, 2023 Author Share Posted November 1, 2023 Oh @bingochamp7 What a wonderful feedback to my story, thank you so much! ā¤ļø Your words mean a lot to me. š· I hugely enjoy describing love and tenderness between people. It makes me so happy. š Link to comment
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