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Bella. (F) Twilight Fic. - (7 Parts)


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I got out of the warmth of Jacob's car and out into rainy Forks. Earlier, it had been sunny, which I knew couldn't last that long, so Jake and I decided to take full advantage of it and go cliff diving, since Edward was out hunting. That was hours ago, and now the sky was a dull gray and the ground the bright green. You got used to green, it was almost sickening how much there was though. I said good bye to Jacob, and started to walk out of the reservation towards Edward's shiny volvo. I'm glad he was allowing me to see Jacob. Not that he would've stopped me in the first place, but I guess it's better to have his approval. He and Jacob have been throwing me back and forth between the two, like I was some kid that each parent had to take turns seeing. I didnt mind though, I loved them both.

I got into Edward's car. It was warm. Edward reached out for my hand, and kissed it, greeting me hello. His lips were cold, as always, and it sent a shiver up my spine. He always took my breath away. He was perfect. There is no other way to describe it.

"Hello Bella." His voice was like velvet, it vibrated in my head and made me dizzy. I took a sharp breath in.

Edward backed up out of the reservation and the next thing I knew we were going at least a hundred miles an hour down the slick streets of Forks. If there was one thing about Edward that scared me, it was his driving. It wasn't the fact that he was a vampire, no, that was fine. It was his driving.

"How was La Push?" He turned to me, eyes deep amber from hunting, and smiled his perfect smile.

I shook my head and got the excess water from my hair, "It was ok. The water was kind of cold, but I'm not complaining. It was sunny. It's a rare thing. We have to take advantage of it somehow." I reached over and turned the heat up. It must've seemed over a hundred degrees in there to Edward, but I was still shivering uncontrollably from the water.

Obviously, Edward noticed this. "Are you cold, my love?" He reached in the backseat and grabbed a jacket. One he never wore, but it still smelled like him. I loved the way he smelled. It wasn't anything like colonge or perfume. It just smelled like...him. I gratefully took the jacket and put it up to my face and breathed in, letting the aroma fill my nostrils.

Edward focused his attention back on driving. He began slowing down, and I came to the conclusion that we were in my neighborhood, almost at Charlie's house. He made a 15 minute drive a 5 minute drive. It would've been 3 minutes, if he didn't slow down when we hit our neighborhood.

I felt a tingling in the back of my nose. It felt dry, and scratchy. I looked out the window, so that Edward wouldnt notice that anything was wrong. As if I could keep something from him. The tickle grew, and I shoved a finger under my nose. No luck, it got stronger. Crap. I took a deep breath in and tried to stifle a sneeze into my hands, "hxt-nggg!"

Edward pulled over in front of Charlie's house, and turned toward me. "Bless. You ok Bella?"

I blushed, "Yeah, never better." As soon as I finished my sentence Edward was on the other side of the car with the door open, hand ready to escort me out. "Good." He smiled, walking me up the steps.

We got outside the door, under the roof. I sniffed, and coughed into my elbow. Edward shot a worried glance at me, and then to the window, where you could see Charlie sitting on the couch watching a game on tv. "He knows we're back." He said a matter of factly.

"ach-tchoo!" I sneezed freely over my shoulder. Crap. I had no warning that time.

"Bless you, Bella." Edward took a piece of my wet hair and tucked it behind my ears. "I wish I could hear what you're thinking, so I could tell if you are ok or not." He kissed my nose, and suddenly there was no air in my lungs. I kissed him back, more forcefully, before he shook his head and pulled back. "Behave,'' He warned, "I'll be back after Charlie goes to sleep." And he was gone.

I grabbed on to the doorknob to regain my ground before I walked in and saw Charlie. I coughed into my hand, and smoothed my hair out of my face. Sniffling, I turned the doorknob and went inside.

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*says the word* oh definately please write more of this!!! there are so many little details in this i just love! :grad:

im starting to think i should go out and get this series....

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I can think of no good reason that you shouldn't continue on and would be very disapointed if you didn't.

You're off to a great start, IMHO! :grad:

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You have no idea how excited this made me to see another Twilight fic. YES continue! Great start. I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort.

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:)

WHOLLY FUDGEBUCKLES!

THE WORD!! THE WORD!!

I love Twilight! Pleeease continue!

Oh and chui I compleatly reccomend the series. Its very very good.

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I walked in. Just as I thought (and as Edward probably knew) Charlie was plopped on the couch watching a basketball game on TV. He didn't look up, thank god. He would wonder why I was so wet. He just muttered a "Hi Bella" and went back into the zone. We had that type of relationship. No unnecessary talking, I guess you could say.

I walked upstairs and took a warm shower before Edward would be coming back. I stepped in the shower, and turned it up at hot as it would go, but I was still cold. My nose was beginning to run, and I shoved my face under the shower head to warm it. I felt a tickle growing in my nose, and before I knew what was going on, I had my hand in front of my mouth and I sneezed. Again. I turned off the shower and got out, dripping wet, colder than I was before. I walked over and blew my nose into a tissue, got ready for bed, and headed to my room.

Naturally, Edward was spread out on my bed, waiting for my arrival. He smiled at the sight of me, awakening the butterflies in my stomach, and reached out for me. I got on my bed, and buried myself deep in his cold embrace. His skin made me feel even colder still, but warm at the same time.

And there it was. That damn tickle again. It was burning. I took a sharp breath in and let out "heehchhh" into Edward's chest, muffling the sound so Charlie wouldn't get so concerned.

"Bless you." Edward pulled back, and put his hand under my chin, lifting it up so I had no choice but to look into those heart melting eyes of his. "Are you alright? You look kinda beat."

I nodded and sniffed. "Yeah I'm...." I sniffled and took a quick breath in. In a half of a second Edward was gone and back with a tissue in my face. Yay vampire boyfriends. They can get tissues faster than the speed of sound. "Thanks." I blew my nose.

"HEHCHOO!" Another unexpected sneeze. And another tissue in my face. Good thing, too. I was getting embarrassed with my constant sneezing and sniffling around Edward, who was perfect.

"Bless you." He sighed and rolled over on his stomach, "what's up with you?"

"Oh, nothing." I coughed into my shoulder.

"Liar." He kissed my nose. Damnit.

I felt the air being sucked out of my lungs. The butterflies started doing all sorts of stunts in my stomach, and I was soon pushing myself against him, wanting more.

He pulled back.

"Really, I'm fine." I smiled.

He kissed me again. I was getting weaker.

"Really..."

Another kiss. Another sneeze and then...

"I'm sick."

He smirked. He sure was proud of himself. Apparently teasing the non-vampire girlfriend was the lastest thing with vampires.

"How did you get sick?"

"I was cliffidiving with Jake today. It was sunny, remember? That's why you left in the first time." I sniffed. "The water was cold, I guess I never dried off enough."

Edward sighed.

"Oh, like you've never been sick." I added as a matter of factly.

He laughed, "Honestly, I can't remember the last time I was sick. Unless you count when Carlisle found me, but even then it's all a blur." He rubbed his fingertips up and down my back. He was close, I could feel his breath on my neck.

Suddenly, I felt a warmness in my nose. The constant feeling I had to sneeze. Then I smelled something metallic, and before I knew it, I had blood on my hand, dripping from my nose.

Great. A nosebleed.

Two things wrong with that:

1. More sneezing which equals more embarrassment

and 2, the worst one of the two, was I was with a vampire.

A vampire that always controlled himself not to drink my blood.

A nosebleed was the last thing I wanted.

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Woooow a nosebleed. .....that is creative. And an evil cliffhanger. He'll probably react okay but still, biting my nails here. Great so far! Keep going!

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I flung myself out of Edward's arms and ran across the room to the tissue box. I grabbed a tissue, and turned around to face Edward, slamming the tissue to my face under my nose. He seemed to have control over himself, but God only knew what mental battle he was going through. I decided that I should stay on the other side of the room, until he gave me the ok. I sat down in a rocking chair across my room, and pinched my nose. He seemed relaxed enough, but I didn't want to take a chance. I felt my nosebleed slow down, and within five minutes it stopped completely, and took the tissue away from my nose.

He sat there and stared at me, finally saying, "Are you ok, love?"

I sniffed. "Yeah. I hate nosebleeds. They make me sneeze like crazy, not to mention, it's the weirdest feeling in the world. As if I haven't been sneezing enough." I sniffed again.

He walked over and sat on the floor next to me, rubbing my legs. "It's okay, I got it all under control."

I tossed the bloody tissue in the garbage across the room. My nose felt dry, but I was still sniffling constantly. I went back over to the bed and crawled under the covers, shivering. Edward came over and felt my forehead.

"You feel warm, Bella."

I laughed, throwing myself into a coughing fit. When I got myself back together, I explained, "I would feel warm to you no matter what. Your skin is ice cold, of course I'm going to feel warm." I felt my nose tickle, and I squinted my eyes and held my breath. I couldn't sneeze if I wasn't breathing. I couldn't take it anymore, and I let out a "Hachoo!!!" In a matter of a half a second, Edward's hand shot out in front of my face and covered my sneeze. I sprayed all over his hand. I blushed and put my own hand to my mouth, muttering "I'm sorry I'm sorry" through my fingers.

He took my hand away from my mouth and kissed my forehead. I sniffled and coughed into my hand.

"I think it's time that you go to bed." He traced his fingertips over my neck, and leaned in a smelled it. This never made me nervous. No, he was a vampire, but I was never scared.

I sneezed. "Ettchhhh!" I tried to stifle it into my bedsheets, but it didn't really work all that well.

"Bless you." Edward lifted the covers off of my head and crawled into bed next to me. "You look like death."

I groaned. "Thanks."

He laughed his velvet laugh and brushed the hair from my eyes. He knew how to relax me and put me to sleep, I'll give him that.

I cuddled up and sneezed into his chest. "Hachoo!!!" I rubbed my nose. My head hurt, and my eyes were starting to water. Who gets sick in the summer?

"Bless." Edward pulled my in closer to his chest, so I couldn't get away from him. I felt my nose tickle again, I tried to get away. I've sneezed on him enough. I tried breathing fast, but it only made it worse. I sneezed. "Ahchoo!" I did it again, and he held me tighter. It felt good. He kissed my hair, and I fell asleep almost instantly.

(Don't worry, I'm not done)

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  • 2 weeks later...

I woke up the next morning, still in Edward's arms. My head hurt, my throat was dry and scratchy, my nose was stuffy yet running at the same time, and my head felt hot as fire. There was a dim grey light coming in through the window. I opened my eyes. There was water on the window. Yep, another rainy day in good ol' Forks.

I rolled over to look at Edward. He was still wearing the same clothes, which meant he had been with me all night. He of course, never slept. Til this day I still don't get how he can spend hours on end doing nothing and not fall asleep. Edward brushed hair from my eyes and kissed my forehead. "Good afternoon..." He whispered in my ear.

I jolted up. "Afternoon?" I grabbed my alarm clock. 2:46. I had been asleep for over 12 hours! "Edward, why didn't you wake me earlier?"

"You've been waking up and going back to sleep all night. You were coughing so much, I thought you were awake." He looked worriedly at me, with a calm expression, however that was possible, I'm not sure.

I swallowed. "My throat kind of does hurt."

Edward got to his feet and extended an arm out to me. "Come on, love, let's go downstairs. I'll make you some tea."

I got up, wobbling. "Where's Charlie?" I asked.

Edward chuckled, "He left at 6 in the morning for work. He's going fishing after, too." He put his arm around my waist and led me downstairs to the kitchen, plopping me in a dining room chair.

I put my head down on the table and groaned. I could feel Edward's eyes glaring into my back, filled with concern no doubt, but I was too tired to lift my head up and return his gaze. I felt my nose tickle. I breathed slowly this time, knowing that faster breathing does no good. But I sneezed anyway. I cupped my hand over my mouth and flung my head up, letting out a "HACHOO!" before sniffling and slamming my head back down into my arms.

"Bless you darling." I could hear swift movements, and within a few seconds I felt a tap on my shoulder.

"Whhaaaattt?" I sniffled, struggling to lift my head.

I got upright, and I saw Edward in my face with a tissue in hand. "Blow." He commanded.

I groaned. "I'm not a kid. I can do it-" I threw myself into a coughing fit. Damn it.

Edward chuckled again. "Come on." He shoved the tissue into my face. I had no choice. I blew my nose forcefully into the tissue with a wet gurgly noise. "Good." Edward chucked the tissue over his shoulder and it landed into the garbage. Of course.

A few moments later, he set a steaming cup of tea in front of me. I looked warm, and very appealing. I slid it closer to me, letting the steam come into my nostrils. Almost instantly I could breathe again, but with my wonderful luck, it make my nose tickle again. I blew across the top of it, and slowly took a sip. The warmth of the tea felt good going down my throat, and I was so grateful to have Edward there with me. I turned my head to the side and sneezed. "Heh-choo. Heh-choo!"

Edward rubbed my shoulders. "Bless you, bless you. Wow Bella, are you ok?"

I grumbled under my breath, "I'm wonderful."

Edward laughed and leaned in and kissed my neck, "No need to be cranky now." I could smell his breath. My heartrate must've doubled.

I had to sneeze. Badly. So far, I was doing a good job keeping it under control and out of my mind.

Edward grabbed my hand, "You have to sneeze." He stated a matter of factly.

I sniffed, "I thought you...you can't read my mind...heh...heh...." It was coming.

Edward laughed, "I can't. I don't have to. I can tell by the look on your face."

"HEHCHOO!" I turned and sneezed straight into his chest. "Sorry! I really need to stop doing that." I grabbed a tissue out of the tissue box that Edward had conveniently placed in the middle of the dining table and gave my nose a good blow.

Edward picked my up in his arms and cradled me, "You're okay..."

I didnt have the energy to fight anymore. I was weak and tired, despite all my sleep I got during the night. And the morning. "Where are we going?" I snuggled closer to his chest, and closed my eyes.

"We, my sick little angel," Edward began, "Are going back to bed. Where you belong."

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*totally melts at that last line* omg...this is just wonderful!! im so glad you gave us a bit more!!!!!

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  • 2 weeks later...

Oh my lord...I've totally envisioned this situation sooo many times in my own deluded little head. I think it's weird, because it's not Bella's sneezes that do anything for me; it's the way I've imagined Edward taking care of her. And, so far you're hitting the nail right on the head. :D

I really, really love it!

So pleeeaaase keep writing, cuz I can't wait!!

*~*~Rika~*~*

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  • 3 months later...

HOLY SHIT Armor. I was one of the ones who asked for the bella fic...YOU my friend...ROCK. hardcore. Thank you SOOOO much! Your writing is so on target! I really like her stifles :) I picture her to be a stifler since she hates when people catch her injured or miserable. yummmm! Thank you thank you thank you! I dont know how you will end it cause its like crack and I just want more more more more more.....you could write FOREVER and I would contiinue to read and enjoy

did i mention THANK YOUUUUUU!!!!!!!

ahhhh!

and I love how you have some lines that are SO similar to the book, and he calls her love and stuff...you kept true to the material which is GREAT....so much more realistic that way.. and I LOVE how you just have him say bless. it is just more unique and I can totally picture him doing that.

THANK YOU!

oh yea

YOU ROCK! :cry::hyper: :hyper: :D :D :D :D :(

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