Natto Posted October 1, 2009 Author Share Posted October 1, 2009 @ dove - Hee, I'm kind of surprised that was your favorite (I thought it was kind of rehashing stuff I'd already done), but I'm really glad you liked it! *hugs* And Mello is ridiculous, he's hard not to laugh at. XD;@ FairyDust - I've written about 5 pages of the Experiment expansion...it'll be a bit of time before it's up on the forum, but I'm working on it!@ Sen Beret - I'm sure you can write quite well! I've never seen any of your work, but all it takes is pratice! God, when I look back on my old stuff I cringe. And L is really fun to torment. I left him alone for this set, but that's not going to last long.@ cupkake - Well, I wouldn't say clean freak exactly, I think most people would be pretty upset if their brand new jacket got sneezed on. But I'm glad you're amused, thanks for the comment!~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Gevanni aka Stephen, MikamiWord Count: 100Prompt: #84 – CitySomething Stephen hates about his job is that there are no sick days. There are deathbed days, but there’s no way you’re getting time off for a cold. Even if it is the worst cold you’ve ever been socked with. He’ll manage, trudge through the winding roads of the city, stopping on every block to blow his nose. He’ll tail Mikami until Near tells him to stop. Eventually, he catches a glimpse of his stalkee’s face. Mikami’s nose is firetruck-red, and he’s coughing harshly into the crook of his elbow. This shouldn’t make Stephen grin as hard as it does.~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Mikami, NakajimaWord Count: 100Prompt: #42 – PoisonHe knows it’s silly (mean, unfair, ridiculous), but when Nakajima puts an enormous bouquet of lilies in a vase on her desk, Teru despises her. It isn’t logical, she couldn’t have known how badly allergic he was to the waxy white flower, but on an emotional level it seems she’s trying to poison him. His reaction doesn’t make him anymore inclined to forgive her—he’s immediately catapulted into a ten minute sneezing fit that leaves him utterly wretched with snot. His sinuses burn all day long, and his eyes stay bloodshot until morning. He feels terrible, and he blames Nakajima. ~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Mikami, NakajimaWord Count: 100Prompt: #82 – Magic“Ryuk, what is this?” Light asks, picking up the pale green notebook that the Shinigami placed on his desk. “Cold Note? What does that even mean?”“It gives people colds,” he says, as if Light ought to know this. “I found it lying around in the shinigami realm. Thought you might like it, since you like the Death Note so much.”“There’s no point to giving people colds, it doesn’t benefit anyone in any wa…HAT-schoo!” Light rubs his nose in annoyance, then squints as he’s overtaken by another sneeze. “EHHH-chh!” “I tested it on you,” Ryuk says. “Guess it worked.” Link to comment
dove Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 pfffft, these were all fantastic! I adore Gevanni's reaction, Mikami is beautifully depressing as always, and the last one was a real treat. You've gotta love any Light and Ryuk interaction, especially when Ryuk comes out on top somehow. Excellent work!! Link to comment
VoOs Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 Mmmm, Mikami torture... *purrs* The best there is. Link to comment
doggo Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 I know this is no suprise, but I WANT THE COLD NOTE!!! Link to comment
FairyDust Posted October 2, 2009 Share Posted October 2, 2009 Your probably getting pretty bored of me responding by now...anyway, these were wonderful! The cold note *sigh* Link to comment
Sawyer Posted October 2, 2009 Share Posted October 2, 2009 Okay dude if I can have the Cold Note then you can have.. um... the entire universe.Thanks.xDD Link to comment
cupkake Posted October 23, 2009 Share Posted October 23, 2009 I just realized that all of these have exactly 100 words Link to comment
Natto Posted October 27, 2009 Author Share Posted October 27, 2009 @ dove - Thank you so much for inspiring most if not all of these damn things! <3@ VoOs - I'll be sure to write more about Mikami in future entries--he is my favorite character. None this time, but I'll be tormenting him again soon, no worries!@ Shiny Bug - I KNOW RIGHT? I mean, I'd like it if it could give allergies too, but yeah, BEST THING EVER. @ FairDust - Don't be ridiculous, how could I get tired of such nice comments! I'm really glad you're enjoying these still!@ San Beret - Yeah, this is pretty much what I want more than like, anything. WHY DOES IT NOT EXIST FOR REAL.@ cupkake - Yup! Making them 100 words each is a personally imposed challenge, but it makes it more fun!@ obsessedwithedward - Ooh you say? I'll take that as a compliment! Thanks!~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: B, LWord Count: 100Prompt: #65 – SimilaritiesB’s dopey blue cow-eyes are nothing like L’s dead grey ones, and he cannot eat half the cake that L can. He forces himself to sit on his feet and stand hunched like a crab. Everyday he beats his body into behaving just like L’s. Today, he finds his body behaving like L’s. When a stray kitten wanders into Wammy’s House, they both succumb to violent sneezing fits within seconds. They both blow their noses forcefully into crumpled wads of toilet paper, and they both sniffle and cough for the rest of the day.This, to B, is a victory.~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Light, LWord Count: 100Prompt: #11 – Hot/ColdFire searing his bones, lava flooding his throat, his sinuses, burning burning—HACHOO! God, fuck, hadn’t he just had a cold? Why is he so HOT? Why doesn’t it matter that he’s half-naked with the windows wide open and a fan blasting his sweaty face, why won’t the icy water he’s been guzzling work?! Once he questions it, the heat goes down. It’s replaced with a flurry of snow, drenching his skin and forcing Light to cocoon himself in blankets, which the gremlin he’s chained to immediately steals from him. In his fevered state, he can’t do anything but groan.~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Matsuda, LightWord Count: 100Prompt: #71 – FloorCleaning the floor is an absolutely essential part of Matsuda’s morning routine. He hadn’t cared too much about it before Light started coming to the police station, but now, he does. Light has terrible allergy attacks when exposed to dust or mold, and Matsuda wants to prevent that at all costs. Though Light does look kind of cute when he’s sneezing his head off, it is Matsuda’s sworn duty to make sure that Light (and everyone else!) is in tip-top shape to do their job. And if the only way to do that is to clean the floor, he will! Link to comment
dove Posted October 27, 2009 Share Posted October 27, 2009 *dies from absolute cuteness*Oh my lord...there are no words. The L/B one is perfection., Light with a bad cold is so yummy, and Light/Matsuda...brb, wibbling forever. Wonderful job. I love these so much. Link to comment
doggo Posted October 27, 2009 Share Posted October 27, 2009 Eeeeek! God, fuck, hadn’t he just had a cold? That line is so effing sexy. I can't get enough of it. !!! Link to comment
FairyDust Posted October 28, 2009 Share Posted October 28, 2009 B finally manages success (and in the perfect way too)!!! These were all gorgeous! Link to comment
lalaland~ Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 oh my I hadn't read these in a long time! Hehe I have to say the ones with Mello and Matt are my favs =] but they are all fabulously delicious ^^ Link to comment
Natto Posted December 3, 2009 Author Share Posted December 3, 2009 Hey guys, it's been quite some time since I've posted, but I return with some more drabbles! One involving Mello and Matt as per lalaland's request. Anyway, thank you for your lovely comments, and enjoy! I did three this time as usual, but one of them can only be found on the adult board.~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: MikamiWord Count: 100Prompt: #33 – CryA man named Sheldon Cohen ran a study that determined that social interaction was critical to immune function. He purposely infected hundreds of people with the common cold, and determined that those with superior social lives also had superior immune systems—they were far less likely to catch cold. Mikami Teru has no social life, but takes great measures to avoid becoming ill. He tries to cultivate a friendship with a coworker. His failure is as inevitable as it is humiliating, but he can handle it. He can’t handle catching a cold anyway. That particular failure nearly makes him cry.~`~`~Series: Death NoteCharacters: Matt, Mello, NearWord Count: 100Prompt: #58 – AnnoyingThe Target: Near aka Nate River (yes, Near, we know your fucking name!)The Intelligence: Near is violently allergic to grass pollen.The Mission: Make that little shit suffer.The Method: Pull fistfuls of grass out by the roots and litter his room with it.The Reason: Near is an obnoxious little bastard who keeps scoring better on Mello on exams and then acting like it’s no big deal.The Objection: There would be none if Matt would just shut the fuck the up and play video games like a good boy.The Result: HAHH-Chhmph! Hehhh-chhh! Ahhhchh! Ehh…ehh…mmm…HECHOOO! Ahhhchh! MISSION ACCOMPLISHED Link to comment
dove Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 Poor Mikami...just poor Mikami. And I absolutely love Annoying. I could hear Mello's voice in that one so well! Excellent job, Natto! I can't wait for more! Link to comment
cupkake Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 Near chaaaaaaaaaaaan!! Oh my yumminess! I love you! On this whole forum theres almost no sneezing Near and the image of him sneezing is just burned adorably in my mind. Thank you for writing this and keep up the good work. Link to comment
FairyDust Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 Very cute! The format of Nears was awsome Link to comment
Lady Blessington Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 I don't know this fandom, but I'm enjoying your drabbles. They're varied and complex, and smokin' hot - especially when the characters get interrupted mid-word by deliciously spelled sneezes. Link to comment
everest Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 Ahhh... Death Note. Definetly one of the greatest animes ever made. Link to comment
mrs_pheles Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Oh my god where to begin? I loved every single one of the Light drabbles. If i were Matsuda i wouldnt clean those floors The Mello and Matt ones were funny especially the tatto one. Great job! Link to comment
Emily Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 are you still into Death Note? these are so cute! :x Light is a really easy character to torture >D thanks, Midnight88 for bumping this up btw ♥ Link to comment
mrs_pheles Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 are you still into Death Note? these are so cute! :x Light is a really easy character to torture >D thanks, Midnight88 for bumping this up btw ♥My pleasure, Emily! I would really like to see some Child!Light drabbles. That would be adorable Link to comment
Natto Posted June 16, 2011 Author Share Posted June 16, 2011 Guys, thank you so much for your appreciative comments! Unfortunately, I'm not super into Death Note anymore--it's always in my heart, but I don't see myself writing fic of it for a while. I have written other Death Note sneezefic, which can be found here:http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=33496&hl=http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=33127&hl=http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=31109&hl=Also there's some amazing Death Note fic written by dove, which can be found here:http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=29501&hl=http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=29038&hl=http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=32911&hl=http://www.sneezefetishforum.org/forums/in...c=32394&hl=These are if you need a Death Note fix. I'm really sorry to say I don't think I'll be writing anymore Death Note drabbles, at least not for the time being. ^^; Link to comment
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