littlesneezer18 Posted September 1, 2009 Share Posted September 1, 2009 Wheeeeeeeee! More story! This is just spectacular cara! Love it so much. Looking forward to the next piece. Link to comment
Marceline Posted September 2, 2009 Share Posted September 2, 2009 Oooh another great part! Thanks for using my idea! Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted September 2, 2009 Share Posted September 2, 2009 U could say somethin about he wakes up in the Slytherin common room and Pansy is trying to care for him and he like freaks out or something Link to comment
cara Posted September 2, 2009 Author Share Posted September 2, 2009 i was gunna have him in the hospital wing with pansy and wen she leaves... ect not gunna spoil it lol Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted September 2, 2009 Share Posted September 2, 2009 I like that ideaAny idea when more will be up ?i was gunna have him in the hospital wing with pansy and wen she leaves... ect not gunna spoil it lolNiceomg im so sorry i havent been on in so long.. im so sad to see there is no more up since last time >>>Mod Note: Merged posts ~Mute Link to comment
cara Posted December 12, 2009 Author Share Posted December 12, 2009 sorry my old comp died along with half my documents i should start it again soon Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 cool beansany idea when it will be postedThis is such a cute story. I love your writing.Im so sad to see there has been no more added. Cara, do plan on continuing or no?Mod Note: Merged posts ~Mute Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Really cute story and Draco is so well into character. I've very much enjoyed reading. Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted June 19, 2010 Share Posted June 19, 2010 I completley agree. Cara, you are such an amazing writer ! Link to comment
cara Posted June 21, 2010 Author Share Posted June 21, 2010 does anyone have any ideas of where they would like this story to go because i am really busy and dont have a lot of inspiration.... Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 I mean someone could continue on with your idea from earlier with Draco waking up in the hospital and Pansy is there Link to comment
cara Posted October 15, 2010 Author Share Posted October 15, 2010 "DRACO! Darling, draco?"Oh no he thought I know that voicePansy was shaking him awake, he realised he was in the hospital wing- who could mistake the god-awful beds and soft smell of pepper-up?"padsy? whad are you do-ig here?""I came to make sure you are alright darling." she said incredibly sweetly. There must be others around he thought, she was never *quite* this sweet. "Well i'b fine-d padsy, you cad go dow." He croaked."I'm never going to leave you sweetie!" She smiled. "Madame Pomfrey is here to see you now.""Miss Parkinson, He needs rest will you please come back another time?" She asked Pansy."But-?" she started"Now!" madame pomfrey interjected. Pansy left quickly, not wanting to lose house ponts like she did last time she disobeyed madame pomfrey."Mr Malfoy, what have you been doing to yourself? you fell more than 200 feet! luckily you have only broken a few ribs which with this (she pointed to the bottle of skele-grow) will heal in no time. you do, however have a pretty high fever, we will have to wait for it to break. it seems a mix of the fever and the conditions caused you to faint and fall off your broomstick." she turned and started to prepare the dose of skele-grow muttering, "dangerous things, never get me on one..."When madame pomfrey had given him the medicine he had a visitor"Potter? whad are you do-ig here?" He sneered."I just wanted to make sure your fall wasnt my fault- i dont like the idea of unfair play." He said solidly, he was remembering years ago when malfoy tried to make him fall."No, id wasnd dow leave! ESHOOO!" "are you ok, you sound sick?" Said harry a small smile playing on his lips "A servant of the Dark Lord, sick as a dog!""GED OUD!" He coughed and pulled his wand."Ok, Ok im going!" He walked out laughing quietly to himself. He met Krissy Cassandris in the corridor leading to the Hospital Wing."Krissy, hi. Havnt seen you for a long time! Are you going to visit someone?"Krissy turned, startled. "Er no, got a bit of a cold..." She lied quickly, Coughing lightly for good measure. "going to get some pepper up." She faked a quick "Ichoo!""Ok, well feel better" Harry Said as he walked down the corridor and around the corner.Phew that was close she thought, she couldn't imagine what would happen if Harry found out she was seeing Draco Malfoy....Aha there we go! some inspiration at last! more soon i hope! sorry about the lack of sneezing too there will be more i promise! Link to comment
cara Posted October 16, 2010 Author Share Posted October 16, 2010 "Krissy? I thoughd i heard you cobing" said Draco, sitting up."Yes its me" She smiled, kissing him lightly on the forehead."Are you sick too?" he sniffed, "I thoughd i heard you sdeeze whed you were talking to Potter." He said emphasising the last word as though it left a bad taste in his mouth. "No i'm not, i faked it to get away from Harry, I'm sure you wouldn't want him to know about us." She stroked his damp hair from his face "How are you feeling?""I'b fine-d""Draco?" She gave him a look."I-" He sighed- so easily defeated- "I really don'd feel well Krissy, by head hurts, by chest hurts, by ribs are kill-ig be- stubib skele-grow! and i cant'd seem to stop sdeezi-g, HECHOOO!" He said getting steadily faster as the tickle built up into a sneeze."Bless you," She said handing him a tissue from the side-table. He blew his nose wetly."I wish i could make you feel better." Krissy sighed. Draco could feel the tickle, building up in his nose, he motioned for Krissy to hand him some tissues. His eyes were almost closed, she pulled out two or three and placed them in his hand. He sneezed desperately."HECHOO, I'SHOO! Eh...Eh... ECHOO! I'SHOO! Huh...Heh HATCHOO!" He flopped back down on the Pillows, Nose running, drained of energy."Honey, you need to blow your nose." Krissy said softly."Doe, can'd. doe edergy... sleep." He sniffled, closing his eyes."Draco," Krissy said, pulling out more tissues, she thrust them under his nose as he sneezed again. "Blow." She said. He shook his head. "Blow! It will make you feel better." She pressed her fingers against his left nostril then his right, allowing him to blow through each."Better?" She asked."Danks." he said drifting into a fevered sleep, "I love you."tbc? Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted October 16, 2010 Share Posted October 16, 2010 Awww... very cute. If you feel like it, I'd love to see this story continued. Link to comment
cara Posted October 16, 2010 Author Share Posted October 16, 2010 it will be. maybe more tonight if i have time Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 awwww its so cute! I LOVE it Link to comment
Merino Sheep Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 This story is adorable. =] I hope that you write more soon! Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 You definitly should continue! Link to comment
Alexandria Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 You definitly should continue!with you! this really something that should be continued Link to comment
Aprilcot Posted October 29, 2010 Share Posted October 29, 2010 I do agree, please do continue!!!I'd love to see more of this! Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted November 4, 2010 Share Posted November 4, 2010 I definitly agree! cant wait for more Link to comment
Miss_Kris Posted January 8, 2011 Share Posted January 8, 2011 Hi Cara,I was just wondering if you plan on continuing this amazing story? Link to comment
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