Kiwifruit Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 DISCLAIMER: I know my proportions are way out. I know the colouring is off. I know I have a severe issue with consistency. And there are some glaringly obvious errors that I'm just too lazy to correct. This project is going to have a LOT of (not always very successful) experimentation on my part and I want to use it to improve. If you're willing to put up with that...read on xDThis is a collaborative project I'm doing with Blah-San. We work out the plot together, he writes the story and I draw the *cough* crappy *cough* comic To read his writing, go herrrrre! Might be an idea to read that first for a better understanding of what is going on...;PAnywayyy here is Part One: Link to comment
Chanel_no5 Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 Wow Kiwi, it's really well-drawn! And not embarrassing! Link to comment
Pilgrim Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 Last panel of the fourth set is <3. So looking forward to what comes next! Link to comment
Pearlised Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 It's sooo good, you guys make an awesome team!!(and now you're drawing with Blah ) Link to comment
SweaterWeather Posted June 11, 2011 Share Posted June 11, 2011 This comic + The story idea = Great things to come. Go Teamwork! Link to comment
LeapYearKisses Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 This is great! The last panel especially is getting me all excited. <3 Link to comment
Anonymouse Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 WOAH NOSERUBBING This is an amazing collaboration, can't wait to read the story now! Link to comment
Buford Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Can't...wait...any...longer...so...good...must...have... Link to comment
Shadow Dragon Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 *Dies from anticipation* Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 Awesome. Love the concept, very curious to see where it goes. *runs off to read story* Really quite like your drawing style. Link to comment
NoV Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 Literally cannot wait to see where this one goes... although I may already be able to guess! You and Blah-San make a killer team! Link to comment
Hayley Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 Can't wait for this to be continued! So good!! Link to comment
RoseFever Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 Haha, hey N-035Nose in l33tspeak. You crafty people you >:]And great comic, seriousily, I cant wait for the next one >8D <333333 Link to comment
caligulasArmageddons Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 Haha, hey N-035Nose in l33tspeak. You crafty people you >:]And great comic, seriousily, I cant wait for the next one >8D <333333OMG!! How did I miss that?! I <3 1337 5P34K! /sarcasmI know nothing about Leet. -Laugh- But that's clever. Link to comment
Blah!? Posted June 14, 2011 Share Posted June 14, 2011 Daagghhh you got us. XDBut hey, we could have made it N-053. That would have been even more obvious.Anyway, thank for the feedback, everyone! It's great to see such a warm reception, and we're really looking forward to getting the next parts up for your enjoyment. Part 2 should be up soon, so keep your eyes open. Link to comment
Kiwifruit Posted June 14, 2011 Author Share Posted June 14, 2011 ^ It is...? xD LOL I missed that too Blah-San came up with her experiment name Though wouldn't it be N-053 rather than N-035...? Thanks heaps everyone for all your awesome comments anyway! The next part should be up by the end of Friday - I have an assignment due and each strip takes about two hours (somehow...o.O I don't know where the time goes!). Link to comment
Kiwifruit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Share Posted June 16, 2011 And here is part two! Thanks heaps for all the comments, guys I'm really glad you like it! Again, be sure to check out the awesome story part from my fantastic partner Blah-San ;PAlso, part three is well in progress, but we're taking suggestions for part four! Anything you want to see or read, let us know in a comment or a PM, and we'll do our best to include it! Link to comment
zneeze Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 Oh yes Kiwi, I know I'm your good friend and all, but believe me when I say there is very little to criticize of your drawing! If you want me to be brutally honest... more brutal than honest ... then I'd have to say I don't understand why Callie's skin is pale white xDAll right, but really now, this is epic Can't wait for more! Link to comment
Kiwifruit Posted June 16, 2011 Author Share Posted June 16, 2011 ^ Bahaha I was actually asking Blah that this morning! xD Actually it's pale pinkish if you tilt the screen a bit...(cause I just know everyone reads comics with their screen tilted...xD). I was trying to differentiate it from Rebecca's a bit, and jusitified it with the fact that she wouldn't have gone outside much, being kept indoors all her life Otherwise we can put it down to her manipulated genetics...xDThank you though And yep, brutal honesty is what I'm after. Anything to help me improve! Link to comment
zneeze Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 ^ Bahaha I was actually asking Blah that this morning! xD Actually it's pale pinkish if you tilt the screen a bit...(cause I just know everyone reads comics with their screen tilted...xD). I was trying to differentiate it from Rebecca's a bit, and jusitified it with the fact that she wouldn't have gone outside much, being kept indoors all her life Otherwise we can put it down to her manipulated genetics...xDThank you though And yep, brutal honesty is what I'm after. Anything to help me improve! That all makes sense I guess Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Yay, update. Ooh... definitely like this concept. Awesome drawings. Link to comment
Lucian Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Posting this as one of the best! Great comic! Link to comment
Shadow Dragon Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Love the update! I think I like the 1st picture of the 4th row where you are looking up at her as she is building up Link to comment
LeapYearKisses Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Whee! This is just awesome! Link to comment
NoV Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Hah yes! This is great - please keep it coming Link to comment
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