Scion Posted June 21, 2011 Author Share Posted June 21, 2011 Mmmm, I still think you're going through certain parts a mite too rapidly, but it's a very good story!Dude, it's a story on a sneeze fetish website. I'm not exactly writing an outline to plan pacing.***To everyone else, thank you! I LOVE your comments sooooo much. My life is just SO MUCH HAPPIER after reading these lol.and @ Awesome Galaxy: I am trying VERY hard to get published. So far I've only been able to self-publish on Amazon, but I'm still working on it. Link to comment
Umeko Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 OH MUH GOSH!!!!!! I'm bawling like an idiot over here! that was beautiful! WAAAAHHHH!!! Link to comment
TheCakeIsAlive Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 *jumps in late again* Wonderful story. Really like the concepts you've used here, the solidification when sneezing... Awesome. Link to comment
VividBubbles! Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Damn it! I thought... Blaine would... Sin's cold.................. SEQUEL! SOON!!! BYE! Link to comment
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