VoOs Posted December 4, 2014 Share Posted December 4, 2014 Why on Earth didn't I click on this thread sooner? Absolutely beautiful work. The angles... her hands... So, so, so good. Thank you for sharing! Link to comment
Sternuto Posted December 24, 2014 Share Posted December 24, 2014 Yeah... that pre sneeze expression on page 10 is just SICK!!! Im diggin' this comic. Link to comment
thewhitetigerleo Posted December 29, 2014 Share Posted December 29, 2014 I can not wait to see the rest Link to comment
SmokeyGhost Posted December 30, 2014 Author Share Posted December 30, 2014 I'm big on hands too. It's amazing when I do these how... at least to me... a slight change in hand position makes all the difference. It's more important with coughs I think. People try to cough into a specific point on or into their hand but are a little more imprecise with sneezing, though I'm sure that's an issue of control. Weird the stuff you notice when you pay a lot of attention to it.Next one is nearly done. The original plan was to cut straight to the chase but coincidentally (since pre-sneeze expressions were mentioned) as I was working I happened across some good angles that I just couldn't bear to throw away unseen. Link to comment
SmokeyGhost Posted December 31, 2014 Author Share Posted December 31, 2014 If you're interested in the story don't worry, the next page will get it moving along again, at least a little bit. But for now:Page 11:http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/365/1/7/page11_by_smokeyghost-d8bzc8k.jpg Link to comment
NoV Posted December 31, 2014 Share Posted December 31, 2014 Your work on this comic is superb - the expressions are amazingly sexy Keep up the good work! Link to comment
SneezingCosmos Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 Wow, you are a tremendous 3D modeler! I don't think I've seen too many 3D artists in the sneezing fetish community -- you're definitely the first I know Link to comment
chalkdust Posted January 2, 2015 Share Posted January 2, 2015 That last one is a great angle and view! Link to comment
SmokeyGhost Posted January 2, 2015 Author Share Posted January 2, 2015 Again, thanks for all the comments, it's very inspiring. I've written stories and I've done pictures but I've never tried to put them together before, so I'm kind of learning on the fly how to position things, and how to leave room for dialogue, and where to put the dialogue etc. Let me know how I'm doing. One thing is for sure, the whole story isn't going to center around the same woman standing next to the same stand with the same vase of flowers on it, I promise you that Spy Girls is a dumb name but it's plural for a reason. (It's also kind of dumb for a reason, which I hope will become clear in a bit.) At any rate I hope you're not getting tired of Val just yet, we've got a couple more to go. I really had no idea how many pages it would take me to get through this part of the story. First, the old ones if you're new to the thread:Page 1: http://fc09.devianta...ost-d82z9da.jpgPage 2: http://fc03.devianta...ost-d82zqps.jpgPage 3: http://th02.devianta...ost-d83ks8n.jpgPage 4: http://fc06.devianta...ost-d83ssyn.jpgPage 5: http://fc07.devianta...ost-d84e31v.jpgPage 6: http://fc07.devianta...ost-d84e38i.jpgPage 7: http://fc02.devianta...ost-d84q7ea.jpgPage 8: http://fc06.devianta...ost-d84q7nb.jpgPage 9: http://fc02.devianta...ost-d85fglh.jpgPage 10: http://fc04.devianta...ost-d85fgsp.jpgPage 11: http://fc03.devianta...ost-d8bzc8k.jpgAnd here's the new one:Page 12: http://fc09.devianta...ost-d8cc6ny.jpg Link to comment
Blah!? Posted January 3, 2015 Share Posted January 3, 2015 Oooh, the plot thickens once more. Is it safe to assume this red speech bubble person is the other eponymous Spy Girl? I'm totally not tired of Val yet, but I am also really curious to meet the new character(s) you've hinted at. I'm sure they have some cool designs, and I bet we'll see some sneezing from them too.Love the update, and as always I'm still looking forward to the next one! Link to comment
ThePokeFan599 Posted January 3, 2015 Share Posted January 3, 2015 Me too. This is great! The fit is on! Link to comment
SmokeyGhost Posted January 6, 2015 Author Share Posted January 6, 2015 I try not to be too predictable:Page 13: http://fav.me/d8cv2fg Link to comment
Blah!? Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 Holy crap, that was...Wow, that was actually really funny if I do say so myself. Totally not what I expected either. Really curious to see what happens from here. I'm still operating under the assumption that there is more than one Spy Girl, but my expectations have been thoroughly upended. Link to comment
chalkdust Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Oh, that's funny!So that kind of explains in-story why I don't get my secret/un-expressed wish out of your comic: her having a red nose and red/watery eyes, lol. Link to comment
•.*°•☆. Q .☆•°*.• Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Oh my gosh that is awesome! I love this twist! Link to comment
black_mage Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Wow, I wonder what happens next. I've very much enjoyed following this, great work! Link to comment
March Hare Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 This is AWESOME. I wish I had a way to express that more eloquently, but for now, I'll go with SDJKGDJHLSKJFSLKGJHLJFJJHSKLGJHLGKH;LSK AWESOME. Link to comment
SmokeyGhost Posted January 7, 2015 Author Share Posted January 7, 2015 Those are exacty the kind of responses I was hoping for, actually... Link to comment
mgx Posted January 7, 2015 Share Posted January 7, 2015 Oh, sly, very sly. The good stuff just gets better! Link to comment
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