Sass Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 Hey guys,I'm really nervous about posting this because it is both my first fanfic and first comic ever. Would really appreciate some feed back. The story is set in season 7 so spoilers for season 7! I'm not 100% when in the timeline to set it yet though because if it's before they find Cas there can be crazy Sam and Lucifer, which could be fun. Or after because then there can be Cas who would also be fun. What do you think?Anyway here is part 1 and 2.http://fav.me/d8dow2nhttp://fav.me/d8dowmk Link to comment
Nola Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 I really like the detail you put into this, S.S. Smithington! I'm a fan of both SPN and comics, so my level of interest is at least two fold, right off the bat! Also, and I really can't stress this enough, I LOVE LOVE LOVE when there is a plot to a story as opposed to something heavily focused on the fetish itself. I love the randomness of the illness/allergy, the idea that it is a completely normal thing that happens to everyone and yet, the characters just deal with it and work around it...sorry, rambling...As to the questions you asked, either works for me. I love Lucifer-infested Sammy, and Cas is always adorable. Season 7, because of the whole God-Castiel thing made him seemingly less adorable, but then there is crazy-Cas, which is even more adorable (I know, rambling again). Anyways, point being, I really like a lot of the material from Season 7, it is wrought with a lot of 'family' stuff, AND I'm excited to see where this story goes!! Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 Holy mother of Cas! The detail is magnificent!For the love of Lucifer, please please please do draw more! :heart: You can totally see this as part of a scene. Beyond all else, your level of art is just astonishing! Link to comment
Vintagedarling Posted January 15, 2015 Share Posted January 15, 2015 THE FACIAL ExpressionS!!!!! ARE AMAZING!!! Link to comment
Sass Posted January 16, 2015 Author Share Posted January 16, 2015 Thanks for the feedback Nola, Pyrus and Vintagedarling. Nola I also am a fan of plot so there will be one in this comic it might be a bit disjointed though cos I'm new at this I think I have decided I want to put crazy Cas in the story because he was hilarious! I did really love Lucifer though so maybe after I finish this story I'll do another with Dean getting sick and Sam having to look after him while he is still hallucinating and seeing Lucifer. Even if there isn't a lot of interest in this comic I will keep going because I am really enjoying drawing it. it is great practice, I don't usually draw people, I usually draw plants and animals, hence this story being set in a forest! I never would have thought of doing a fanfic before I joined this forum but but they are really fun! It takes a lot of pressure off because the characters and premise are already set up, you can just dive straight into the story. Also I can't draw without a reference ad there are thousands of pictures of Sam and Dean out there on the interwebs.Now I'm rambling...Anyway here is part 3 and 4 http://fav.me/d8e37zlhttp://fav.me/d8e382z Link to comment
Sass Posted January 16, 2015 Author Share Posted January 16, 2015 I'm having a problem with uploading the images big enough that all the details come through ok, I'm not very tech savy, not sure how to fix it... Link to comment
Nola Posted January 16, 2015 Share Posted January 16, 2015 I don't usually draw people, I usually draw plants and animals, hence this story being set in a forest! Wow, you're pretty good for not doing a lot of human drawings. Also, I can't wait to see some forest imagery. I don't know why, but it is my very favorite thing to draw and see drawn. *shrugs* Anyways, keep it up!As for the tech stuff, I am of no help. Sorry! Though, if it helps, my eyes are pretty bad and yet I managed okay reading the teeny script. Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted January 16, 2015 Share Posted January 16, 2015 Oh my Jesus! The detail of your work is seriously some awesome stuff!!! And you usually only do animals and plants? LIES!*Adds folder for Art of God* Forever keeping these...Can't wait for more! Link to comment
Sass Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 Thanks for the encouragement guys . Can't seem to work out the problem I'm having uploading, it's super clear on my computer then on deviant art it goes all blurry. But if anyone is having trouble reading it and really wants a clearer copy let me know and I'll see if I can work out another way of posting them. Here are the next two pages.http://fav.me/d8eusm1http://fav.me/d8eut30 Link to comment
Nola Posted January 22, 2015 Share Posted January 22, 2015 Oh my Lord... the forest is BEAUTIFUL!Unfortunately, I cannot see the print in the first panel of page 5 (old eyes an' all) but the rest of it was readable!Also, totally fetishy related, but I love how Dean sort of ignores the illness for the most part, but says something when it seems likely something is the matter. Like he expects Sam to sneeze a couple of times (daily, said wistfully), but as they go on, he realizes it might be a bigger issue. *sigh* Keep it up! Link to comment
Sass Posted January 22, 2015 Author Share Posted January 22, 2015 Thanks Nola, that is exactly what I was going for! I love that there is so many fanfics with Sam having allergies, when I started watching the show I was like "but Sam is meant to have allergies, why doesn't he?" From now on I will make all the text bigger. Sorry about that In that first panel they are just talking about how the most recently missing person must have come through the road they were on and are hoping to find her trail. Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted January 25, 2015 Share Posted January 25, 2015 These are amazing! Pure golden art. *bows*Poor Sammy! I just wanna snuggle him to no end. Link to comment
SexualOddity Posted January 27, 2015 Share Posted January 27, 2015 Oh wow. I love this. Art never normally does all that much for me, but there's something about your style that's just amazing. It just seems so vivid. I think it's something about the way it stands out on the page and the way that you capture the movement, I'm not sure. (Can you tell that I know nothing about art?) That and having an actual story developing alongside the wonderful pictures... fantastic. Link to comment
Sass Posted February 4, 2015 Author Share Posted February 4, 2015 Hey guys,Sorry It's been a while, have had a pretty rough couple of weeks. Moved house, broke up with my girlfriend, who is currently sending me long painful emails about how messed up I am. And I had to fly home to go to my little sisters wedding, which is nice for her but I have a difficult relationship with my family... Anyway, Thanks so much for your continued support, Nola and Pyrus! And SexualOddity I'm so thrilled you like my comic, I am a huge fan of your work!Here is page 7 and 8, no sneezing in them, sorry, but there will be lots in the next pages I promise!http://fav.me/d8gmnavhttp://fav.me/d8gmnds Link to comment
Nola Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 Sorry you're having such a rough couple of weeks. I hope things turn around and soon for you.Page eight, the second to last panel...Dean's face, the EYE CRINKLES, my favorite!! You captured his expression so well too, like it looks exactly how he would look at Sam when he doesn't believe him. Can't wait for more! Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 Awwww, poor miserable Sammy. I sense a fever HeeheeGlad to see you again! And your amazingly talented art work! Link to comment
SexualOddity Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 The house looks great. And Dean's skeptical-face is perfect. Your last couple of weeks sound really hard, I'm so sorry. I hope it turns out to be a step on the road to something better. Link to comment
Sass Posted February 9, 2015 Author Share Posted February 9, 2015 Thanks guys! That was my definitely my best Dean so far, for some reason I find him really difficult to draw. It's very disappointing, I think Jenson Ackles is a very beautiful man. Things are already much better, I had a rough few weeks but I am a pretty happy and content person in general Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted February 9, 2015 Share Posted February 9, 2015 Glad to hear it! Do be happy! :3And Yes Jensen is a sexy bae. But you draw him even more sexy. It has reached the Awesome level of Pie Link to comment
Sass Posted February 11, 2015 Author Share Posted February 11, 2015 Ha ha thanks Only one page today, I'm working on another art project at the same time and it is competing for my attention. http://fav.me/d8hjxnm Link to comment
Pyrus_Fangmon Posted February 11, 2015 Share Posted February 11, 2015 Oh god, that eye roll in the last panel *swoon~* If I had the money, I would sooooo ask for a commission Do take your time! These works from the Heavens take time. Link to comment
Sawyer Posted February 11, 2015 Share Posted February 11, 2015 I can't believe I'm only finding this now. Serves me right for never checking the art section!Your style is incredible, and I want to echo what was said before about the movements -- you really capture the nonverbal dynamic of the brothers that I saw in earlier seasons of the show (my favorite!) and I love how you have Sam covering his nose/mouth in alternating ways. It's so like him! Thank you so much for making this, and I was happy to read that everything is going alright for you now! Link to comment
Sass Posted February 15, 2015 Author Share Posted February 15, 2015 Hey guys,Hope everyone is having a good week! Pyrus maybe I could do you a commission for your birthday or something instead? Or we could do an art/story swap?Thanks Sen Beret, I'm really glad you like it, I love your SPN stories! Here is the next page, no sneezing, just Sam wondering around by himself but I really liked how it turned out. http://fav.me/d8i1i81I also worked out how to increase the level of detail uploaded so I have reloaded the first 6 pages that were too small.http://fav.me/d8i1idxhttp://fav.me/d8i1ii8http://fav.me/d8i1ilrhttp://fav.me/d8i1isvhttp://fav.me/d8i1ix2http://fav.me/d8eut30 Link to comment
Nola Posted February 15, 2015 Share Posted February 15, 2015 Yay! I'm so glad you figured out a way to enlarge them! P.S. the light from the flashlight is so eerie and almost cobweb-esque in appearance and I love it. Also the Spanish moss in page 6 is gorgeous! My favorite. Link to comment
Sass Posted February 15, 2015 Author Share Posted February 15, 2015 Thanks Nola It was interesting looking through them again, I think my style of drawing kind of developed as I went along. Thanks so much for your encouragement, I never would have made this comic without you Link to comment
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